AISE TO HAALAAT NAHI!!

by ashq_ashq on September 12, 2005, 06:36:05 PM
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well i had written it today wen i was sittin in my office
hope every1 here like it


WOH KAREEB TO THA HARDUM, MAGAR SAATH NAHI !
LAFZ AANKHON MAIN THE, MAGAR LABO PE BAAT NAHI !
CHAHAT BHI BAHRPOOR THI, MAGAR SHAYAD DIL MAIN JAZBAAT NAHI !
MAHOBBAT KI IS BADLI KA MAIN KYAA KARUN,
SYAHI HI  SYAHI HAI, MAGAR  EK BOOND BARSAAT NAHI !
MAINE CHAHA KISI BE-PEER KO, YEH MERI HI KHATA HAI,
WOH BHI TADAPTA MERE LIYE, AISE TO HALAAT NAHI !
AISE TO HAALAAT NAHI!!

ASHQ
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2005, 06:53:52 PM »
hmm..

woh bayan kar gaye !
ashkon ko lavzo'n mein tabdeel kar gaye !!
baithe rahe rah takte !
zaalim hume ghum-ae-ta-zindagi de gaye !!
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2005, 07:05:25 PM »
WAH RICKY BAHI KYAA SHER DIYA HAI
DAAD DETA HU

WELL I VE GOT SUMTHING

HAMARI KYAA HIMMAT KI AAPKO GAM DE JAATE,
HUM TO SAB PEHLE HI LUTA CHUKE THE,
EK YAAD BHAR SI THI BACHI DIL MAIN HAMARE,
AAPKA BASS NA CHALA,
 WARNA JAATE JAATE WO BHI LE JAATE !


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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2005, 08:42:52 PM »
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WOH KAREEB TO THA HARDUM, MAGAR SAATH NAHI !
LAFZ AANKHON MAIN THE, MAGAR LABO PE BAAT NAHI !
CHAHAT BHI BAHRPOOR THI, MAGAR SHAYAD DIL MAIN JAZBAAT NAHI !
MAHOBBAT KI IS BADLI KA MAIN KYAA KARUN,
SYAHI HI  SYAHI HAI, MAGAR BARSAAT NAHI !
MAINE CHAHA KISI BE-PEER KO, YEH MERI HI KHATA HAI,
WOH BHI TADAPTA MERE LIYE, AISE TO HALAAT NAHI !
AISE TO HAALAAT NAHI!!

ASHQ


Wah Wah Wah :D  :D

Superb..........................................B oht Boht acha likha aapne,,,i want to be ur fan........... :D         [/quote]
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2005, 01:00:12 PM »
thnks aarzoo jee
thnks a lot for ur appreciation

ashq
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2005, 01:43:08 PM »
gr8 one ashq jee n nice reply by ricky too.............!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2005, 04:55:39 PM »
Bohat khoob tarang and ricky...............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2005, 04:48:08 PM »
ashq ji...its beautifull... ricky.... gud job!!

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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2005, 05:42:43 PM »
bahoot khoob Ashaq ji!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2005, 05:56:01 PM »
nice ones...............
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2011, 12:50:59 PM »
ashq ji aapne ek achhi baat kahi kalaam ke dwara.
wo bhi tadapta hoga --aise to haalaat nahi.
superbbb lines.
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2012, 10:12:13 AM »
Quote from: ashq_ashq on September 12, 2005, 06:36:05 PM
well i had written it today wen i was sittin in my office
hope every1 here like it


WOH KAREEB TO THA HARDUM, MAGAR SAATH NAHI !
LAFZ AANKHON MAIN THE, MAGAR LABO PE BAAT NAHI !
CHAHAT BHI BAHRPOOR THI, MAGAR SHAYAD DIL MAIN JAZBAAT NAHI !
MAHOBBAT KI IS BADLI KA MAIN KYAA KARUN,
SYAHI HI  SYAHI HAI, MAGAR  EK BOOND BARSAAT NAHI !
MAINE CHAHA KISI BE-PEER KO, YEH MERI HI KHATA HAI,
WOH BHI TADAPTA MERE LIYE, AISE TO HALAAT NAHI !
AISE TO HAALAAT NAHI!!

ASHQ

good Applause Applause Applause
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