Aitbaar ....

by punam on March 03, 2008, 10:28:51 AM
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punam
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Dil ke haathon majboor huye aise
ki pardesi pe kar baithe aitbaar..

arzoo hi arzoo thi dil mein
ankhon mein basa liya intezaar..

na socha na samjha kiya iqraar
pal bhar ki mohabbat degayi tanhayiyon ka gubbar...
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 10:33:30 AM »
kya baat hai punam wah
waise wo pardesi hai kon jo intzaar de gaya ?



Baadal
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2008, 10:39:09 AM »
Dil ke haathon majboor huye aise
ki pardesi pe kar baithe aitbaar..

arzoo hi arzoo thi dil mein
ankhon mein basa liya intezaar..

na socha na samjha kiya iqraar
pal bhar ki mohabbat degayi tanhayiyon ka gubbar...



Simply wonderful punam bohat khoob likha hai..

Dil ka daag mile hai iss duniya se
Kudh ko tasali diya karte hai
Hum zaamne se aapna pyaar chupaya karte hai
Dard liya hai unke pyaar mein aapni aasu chupaya karte hai

 

 
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2008, 11:41:38 AM »
Bahoot KHoob Punam Sis,.
And Nice One Siya Sis,.

Waise Pardesiyon Se Nahi Lagaate Yaaar,.
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2008, 11:50:46 AM »
Pardesiyon Par Aitbaar Nahi Karte,.
Bekaar Mein Apna Dil Bekaraar Nahi Karte,.

Hai "Ye Mohabbat Aghaaz-e-Gham "Punam",.
Tabhi To "Jaanasheen" Kisi Se Pyaar Nahi Karte,.

______________________________________-Azeem-



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punam
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2008, 01:04:05 PM »
Thanx Baadal ji...majid ji...azeem bhai..Honey di...
Honey di bahot khoob likha aapne..
azeem bhai bahot khoob ..bahot hi acha laga...
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2008, 01:05:38 PM »
Shukriya punam majid ji aur Azeem bro
topic aur shayari dono bohat khoob hai..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2008, 02:39:12 PM »
Very Nice Lines.. Punam, HoneyRose and Azeem...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2008, 10:20:53 PM »
bahoot khoob punam!!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2008, 01:59:13 AM »
Dil ke haathon majboor huye aise
ki pardesi pe kar baithe aitbaar..

arzoo hi arzoo thi dil mein
ankhon mein basa liya intezaar..

na socha na samjha kiya iqraar
pal bhar ki mohabbat degayi tanhayiyon ka gubbar...


Wah wah punam. bahut khoob....

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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2008, 02:01:56 AM »
Pardesiyon Par Aitbaar Nahi Karte,.
Bekaar Mein Apna Dil Bekaraar Nahi Karte,.

Hai "Ye Mohabbat Aghaaz-e-Gham "Punam",.
Tabhi To "Jaanasheen" Kisi Se Pyaar Nahi Karte,.

______________________________________-Azeem-



Nice reply Jaanasheen ji
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2008, 02:20:32 AM »
Dil ke haathon majboor huye aise
ki pardesi pe kar baithe aitbaar..

arzoo hi arzoo thi dil mein
ankhon mein basa liya intezaar..

na socha na samjha kiya iqraar
pal bhar ki mohabbat degayi tanhayiyon ka gubbar...



Simply wonderful punam bohat khoob likha hai..

Dil ka daag mile hai iss duniya se
Kudh ko tasali diya karte hai
Hum zaamne se aapna pyaar chupaya karte hai
Dard liya hai unke pyaar mein aapni aasu chupaya karte hai

 

Good going Honey

Muqaddar ko mere nasiba ne mara
Katil ne choda meherba ne mara
Jo mere dard-e-dil ka samma bane they
Usii charagar ko masiha ni mara
Gile aur shikwe bhulau to kaise?
Mere zindagi ko bewafa ne mara


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punam
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2008, 05:29:58 AM »
Thanx a lot Shikha di..pooja di and Roja di...
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punam
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2008, 05:30:40 AM »
Roja di aap ne bahot acha likha..bahot khoob...
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punam
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2008, 05:31:40 AM »
Kab chalega pata
kar ke tujh pe aitbaar
kahi kiya toh nahi koi khata..

hawa ke jhoka jaise
aake chale gaye ho
chala na mujhe pata..

kab chalega pata
karke iqarar maine
kahi kiya toh nahi koi khata...

samjh nahi payi abhi tak
mere dil meri nazmon me aakar
kyun cha jate ho..
kab chalega pata
kiya hai maine pyar..
ya koi khata...
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