aitbaar

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 10, 2008, 06:32:07 AM
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kaushikbhawna008
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abhi maiyat na meri uthao logo kuch der to aur intzaar karo
wo aayega khudgarz mujhe abhi b hai yakin kuch to mera aitbaar karo

ye jo baras raha hai aaj aasamaan mere janaze par
ye bunde nahi jarur chupke se kahin sunkar khabar roye hai wo

beshak majbur hai khatawar hi sahi par kahin dil mei unke b jazbat baaki hain
wo aayega bahane 2 aansu mujhe unpar abhi aitbaar baaki hai
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2008, 07:03:24 AM »
HI,KAUSHIK JI....
NICE LINES, NICE FEELINGS,
LAGTA HAI AAJ BHI AAPKI AANKHON KO
INTZAAR HAI USKA....

INTZAAR MEIN UNKI TAMAM UMAR GUZAR DI,
PAR EK BAAR BHI NA AAYI KHABAR MERE BEWAFA YAAR KI,
AAB TO KEH DIYA HAMNE USS KHUDA SE....
HAME DE DE MAUT TU, NA RAHI ZAROORAT AAB USKE DIDAR KI
BY. K.SHAEL
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natural
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2008, 07:20:44 AM »

Very nice lines by both of you Kaushikbhawna008 & K.shail....
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2008, 07:26:04 AM »
THANX NATURAL....
I WANT TO SEE U'R NEW CREATION,
WHEN IT'S COME....
TELL ME....
BY. K.SHAEL
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2008, 07:43:47 AM »
Good Job Kaushikbhawna & K.shael... Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2008, 07:52:45 AM »
THANX MAHIYA,
WAISE CREDIT KE AASLI HAQDAR TO KAUSHIK
JI HAI,MAINE TO BASS UNHI UNKA SAATH DIYA....
MAHIYA AGAR AAP KUCH LIKHTI TO AACHA LAGTA,
BY. K.SHAEL

AITBAAR KI BAATEIN KIYA KARTE THE WO,
PYAR KI MEETHI BAATEIN KIYA KARTE THE WO....
AAJ JAANE KAISE WO APNI BAATOON SE PALAT GAYE,
SAATH JINE MARNE KI KASME KHAYA KARTE THE JO....
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2008, 07:55:32 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on May 10, 2008, 07:03:24 AM
HI,KAUSHIK JI....
NICE LINES, NICE FEELINGS,
LAGTA HAI AAJ BHI AAPKI AANKHON KO
INTZAAR HAI USKA....




INTZAAR MEIN UNKI TAMAM UMAR GUZAR DI,
PAR EK BAAR BHI NA AAYI KHABAR MERE BEWAFA YAAR KI,
AAB TO KEH DIYA HAMNE USS KHUDA SE....
HAME DE DE MAUT TU, NA RAHI ZAROORAT AAB USKE DIDAR KI
BY. K.SHAEL

shukriya k.shael ji , mahiya ji and natural ji jo aapne is kalam ko padha aur sarah
koshish karungi is baar kuch aur naya likh kar apna hal - e - dil bayan kareinge
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2008, 08:20:15 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on May 10, 2008, 07:52:45 AM
THANX MAHIYA,
WAISE CREDIT KE AASLI HAQDAR TO KAUSHIK
JI HAI,MAINE TO BASS UNHI UNKA SAATH DIYA....
MAHIYA AGAR AAP KUCH LIKHTI TO AACHA LAGTA,
BY. K.SHAEL

AITBAAR KI BAATEIN KIYA KARTE THE WO,
PYAR KI MEETHI BAATEIN KIYA KARTE THE WO....
AAJ JAANE KAISE WO APNI BAATOON SE PALAT GAYE,
SAATH JINE MARNE KI KASME KHAYA KARTE THE JO....

Thanks K.Shael.. And Nice Lines by You Again..
Well I am trying to write, Please forgive me for mistakes...

"Wada is ada se wo karta hai,
Dil baar baar yakeen kar leta hai..
Haath uthhate hai dosti ke liye,
Aur Dil par khajar chala deta hai...

Rota hai wo mere gum par bhi,
Magar zakhmon ko bhi hawa deta hai..
Aitbaar hum jis par karte hai,
Wohi baar baar dil ko daga deta hai..."
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2008, 09:36:08 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on May 10, 2008, 08:20:15 AM
Thanks K.Shael.. And Nice Lines by You Again..
Well I am trying to write, Please forgive me for mistakes...

"Wada is ada se wo karta hai,
Dil baar baar yakeen kar leta hai..
Haath uthhate hai dosti ke liye,
Aur Dil par khajar chala deta hai...

Rota hai wo mere gum par bhi,
Magar zakhmon ko bhi hawa deta hai..
Aitbaar hum jis par karte hai,
Wohi baar baar dil ko daga deta hai..."


wah kitni saadgi se aapne shayri ko anjaam diya hai maan gaye mahiya ji
bohut khoob

wo shaqs kuch jana pehchana tha
to kaise na ham unka aitbaar karte
har roz uska ghar mei ana jaana tha
to na aane par kaise na  uska intzaar karte
wo dil ko duniya se pyaara tha
to kaise na unke hone ka gumaan karte
bhale hi chala gaya wo aaj dil todkar par kabhi to apna tha
to kaise na uske laut aane ka intzaar karte
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2008, 09:43:32 AM »
THANX MAHIYA,
FOR U'R RESPONSE,NICE LINEES....

DARD-E DIL SMBHAL PANA AASAN NAHI,
PAR KAMM HO JATA HAI AAP JAISE DOSTO
KI WAJAH SE,
UNHE BHOOL PANA MUMKIN TO NAHI,
PAR PHIR BHI UNKA KHYAAL DIL SE
NIKAL JATA HAI AAP JAISE DOSTO
KI WAJAH SE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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k.shael
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2008, 09:46:37 AM »
KAUSHIK JI AAP KE TO KYA KEHNE,
LAGTA HAI AAJ KUCH KHAS HI TYAARI HAI....
REALLY YAAR 3 TIME U WRITE VERY-2 NICE,
KEEP GOOD WORKING....

BY. K.SHAEL
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Shikha12
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2008, 11:14:56 AM »
Thanks Kaushikbhawna & K.shael...
And Again, Very Nice lines by both of you.. Applause

Please Keep Writing...  Thumbs UP
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k.shael
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2008, 11:20:02 AM »
THANX MAHIYA....
AAB TO YE KALAM LIKHTI RAHEGI,
JAB TAK HAMRI SAANS RAHEGI....
BY. K.SHAEL
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2008, 11:48:04 AM »
Bhawna, k.shael, Mahiya

Bahut khoob !

Kya sama baandha hai aap teeno ne Applause

Keep going !
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k.shael
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2008, 12:03:11 PM »
THANX RAJBIR....
BY. K.SHAEL

KUCH BHI KAHO DOSTO DIL KA DARD BURA HAI,
ISKA WAAR SEHNA MUSHQIL BADA HAI....
ROSHNI HAI ISKI DO DIN KI,
SACH TO YE HAI IS RASTE PE AANDHERA BADA HAI
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