**Aj kal bahaut rona ata hai mujhe** by Rahim

by dead heart on March 30, 2010, 12:32:47 PM
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Hmm kya kahoun iss nazm ke bare main...bas ek haal bayan kiya hai ek aise larrke ka jo tanha hai, udaas hai, bikhra hua hai..

Aj kal bahaut rona ata hai mujhe

Aj kal ashk najane kyun behte jaa rahe hai,
Uski yaadon se hum har pal toot’te jaa rahe hai,
Bikharna jaise aadat si bangayi hai meri,
Dukhi mann se bayan kar raha hoon doston,
Aj kal bahaut rona ata hai mujhe…

Aj kal jeena jaise ek majburi hai meri,
Inn ghazlon main chipi ghumgeen zindagani hai meri,
Bikharta hai dil phir bhi muskurata hoon,
Dukhi mann se bayan kar raha hoon doston,
Aj kal bahaut rona ata hai mujhe…

Aj kal toh muskurane ka bahana tak nahin milta,
Jisse badkar chaha uska ek nazara tak nahin milta,
Bas adhura adhura sa mehsoos karta hai ‘Rahim’,
Ab kya likhoun aur apna dard bayan karne ke liye main,
Jabse woh chorr gaya; lavson ne bhi saath chordia hai,
Mager doston usse dosh dene ki zarurat nahin hai,
Ho sakta hai hume hi saath nibhane na aya ho,
Janta hoon bahaut ajeeb likhi hai maine yeh nazm,
Mager har lavz ke peeche ek ehsas chupa hai,
Samaj lo ‘Rahim’ ka gehra ghum samaya hai,
Bas itna hi kehna chahta hoon ek dard bhare mann se,
Aj kal bahaut rona ata hai mujhe…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 02:41:37 PM »
Really Very Touching Rahim Bhai.. Dil Nikaal kar Rakh diya aapne.. Alfaazon Me Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati Ke Sath Bayan Kiya hai Dost.. Ek Behad Hi Khubsoorat aur Lajawab Nazm Pesh ki Hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 09:31:24 PM »
VERY PAINFUL RAHIM JI  Bt vry vll said.... bhut khoob likha hai ...[/shadow]
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2010, 10:26:24 PM »
Bahut dard bhara hai aapka ye nazm. Jitna dard hai isme utne hi khoobsurat shabd hain aapke. Aapka dard bahut gehraayiyon tak chhu gaya hume bhi. Aur is nazm ki taarif k liye kya shabd ka istemaal karun samajh nahi aa raha . Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne. Clapping Smiley

Simply superb dear. Thumbs UP

 
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 30, 2010, 12:32:47 PM

Aj kal toh muskurane ka bahana tak nahin milta,
Jisse badkar chaha uska ek nazara tak nahin milta,
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 07:29:51 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Dil Se Nikli Koi Baat Yaa Koi Nazm Ajeeb Nahi Hoti..

Bahut Dard Hai Iss Nazm mein..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 11:53:33 AM »
Bahaut dino baad dikhayi diye ap Vikas bhaijan..Bahaut shukriya!!
Bahaut bahaut Klaskar jee, Khwahish jee aur Neelgold jee...Bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2010, 10:02:23 PM »
Wah Rahim bhai bahut dard hai aapke gazal mein.midblowing creation.really  touched.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2010, 09:07:29 AM »
Shukriya Madhu di!
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2010, 10:04:23 AM »
very good nice expression of feelings. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2010, 10:10:22 AM »
Shukriya Suresh jee
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2010, 10:17:56 PM »
Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2010, 10:05:44 AM »
Shukriya Rajesh jee
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2010, 10:44:52 PM »
ts nice but its look like what you are feeling at the moment. Hey yaar itna udas kyun ho? ... :s

keep in touch... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2010, 12:48:13 PM »
Shukriya Dost...U keep in touch Usual Smile
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