AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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in this poem i m trying to explain the emotion of a person ....who is a doctor in a mental hospital....where he found a girl.....its their love story hope u all like it

na jaane kyun tumse milkar laga
mere dil ko bhi talaash thi teri
aankhen khoyi si, dheron sawaal liye
shayad inhe barson se aas thi meri

lagta hai kayi raaton se toh soyi nahin
shayad bure khwab tujhe darate ho
na bhigon in palkon ko, main kaahin door nahin
aa gaya hoon paas tere ,kyun ab khudko rulaate ho

shayad koyi sadma pesh aaya tha tere saath
uski yaadein na ho paayi abhi tak dhoondli
main chahta bhi nahin mitana teri yaadon ko
mujhe kabool hai tu , teri har majboori

aa beith mere paas mujhe teri laton ko suljhane de
mere mehboob, mujhe mohabbat kii shama tere dil main jalane de
yeh duniya hai pathar dil tujhe nahin samajhti
hum gaayenge apna taraana, inhe apne geet gungunaane de

main jaanta hoon AJAB kahaani hai yeh mohabbat kii
mujhe mohabbat hai tujhse aur tujhe khabar bhi nahin
ek ibadat hai pyaar mere liye main karta rahoonga
ummra gujregi magar , mere dil se mohabbat nahin


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honeyrose

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 08:50:51 AM »

Wah wah bohat khoob sahil bhai g88 lines


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 12:02:13 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on April 30, 2009, 08:50:51 AM

Wah wah bohat khoob sahil bhai g88 lines

thanks sis ........


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Talat

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 12:36:57 PM »

Waah...Bohot Khoob Salil....Nice creation Applause


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angel4u

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 01:32:35 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai salil as usual.
an entirely different topic to write on. i loved these lines the most...

shayad koyi sadma pesh aaya tha tere saath
uski yaadein na ho paayi abhi tak dhoondli
main chahta bhi nahin mitana teri yaadon ko
mujhe kabool hai tu , teri har majboori


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Roja

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 01:35:08 PM »

Wonderful creation Salil ji
Nice reply dear Angel


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Pooja

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 07:46:35 PM »

wow kaya baat hai salil ajj to apki kai poems padne ko mili aor her ek kamal ki likhi hui... good work dear!!!


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2009, 04:47:00 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2009, 12:36:57 PM

Waah...Bohot Khoob Salil....Nice creation Applause

Quote from: {Angel} on April 30, 2009, 01:32:35 PM

thanks a lot talat di and huzena..........


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 04:48:44 AM »

Quote from: Roja on April 30, 2009, 01:35:08 PM

Wonderful creation Salil ji
Nice reply dear Angel

roza dear thanks a lot ........magar shayad aapne meri poem nahin padi ya phir huzena kii.....agar aap padte toh aapko pat chalta kii .......woh meri hi likhi huyi lines hai........chaliye koi baat nahin


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2009, 04:50:01 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 07:46:35 PM

wow kaya baat hai salil ajj to apki kai poems padne ko mili aor her ek kamal ki likhi hui... good work dear!!!

thanks a lot sis kii aapne sabhi ko pada aur saraha..........


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salma786

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2009, 05:36:30 AM »

Bahoot badiya salil... apne bahoot ache andaaz me bayaan kiya!


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2009, 07:51:09 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on May 01, 2009, 05:36:30 AM

Bahoot badiya salil... apne bahoot ache andaaz me bayaan kiya!

shukriya salma ji jo aapne andaaz ko samjha


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angel4u

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2009, 07:56:45 AM »

Quote from: Roja on April 30, 2009, 01:35:08 PM

Wonderful creation Salil ji
Nice reply dear Angel


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salil2002

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2009, 06:12:45 AM »

haan huzena dear jara samjhao roja ko


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madhuwesh

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Re: AJAB kahaani~~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2009, 06:23:55 AM »

Wah wah Sallil ji,very nice and beautiful creation.
Clapping Smiley


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