Ajeeb Shakhs...

by Aryaan on June 30, 2005, 01:02:31 PM
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Talat
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«Reply #30 on: July 04, 2005, 04:57:46 AM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Aryaan.......... !! Usual Smile

Thanks Fakhar ............. !!!
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nishita
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«Reply #31 on: July 04, 2005, 10:34:51 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha
Tamaam umr jis Qalam se dosroon ke waastey
Likhey they uss ne QehQahey
Usi Qalam se apna koi ek dukh na likh saka
Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha...


very nice aryaan Usual Smile and gud work others Usual Smile

gham-e-rafta  wo  kisi se  na  kehta  hoga
dil ke zakhm bhi chupke se wo sehta hoga

honge   kitne  hi  tere  chaahne  waale
tere  dil  me  koi  ek  hi  rehta  hoga

toot  kar  chahta  hoga  wo  tujhi  ko  lekin
haal-e-dil  tujh  se  kabhi  na  kehta  hoga

atish-fishaan jaise sadiyo talak chup rehte hein
wo bhi khaamosh mohabbat ke sitam sehta hoga

NM
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Talat
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«Reply #32 on: July 04, 2005, 10:44:03 AM »
Thanks Nishi..................... and Good one !!!!! Usual Smile
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nishita
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«Reply #33 on: July 04, 2005, 10:46:51 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Nishi..................... and Good one !!!!! Usual Smile



thank u talat Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #34 on: July 04, 2005, 12:04:22 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha
Tamaam umr jis Qalam se dosroon ke waastey
Likhey they uss ne QehQahey
Usi Qalam se apna koi ek dukh na likh saka
Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha...


very nice aryaan Usual Smile and gud work others Usual Smile

gham-e-rafta  wo  kisi se  na  kehta  hoga
dil ke zakhm bhi chupke se wo sehta hoga

honge   kitne  hi  tere  chaahne  waale
tere  dil  me  koi  ek  hi  rehta  hoga

toot  kar  chahta  hoga  wo  tujhi  ko  lekin
haal-e-dil  tujh  se  kabhi  na  kehta  hoga

atish-fishaan jaise sadiyo talak chup rehte hein
wo bhi khaamosh mohabbat ke sitam sehta hoga

NM

Thanks a lot Nishita....n Bohat khoob..
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nishita
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«Reply #35 on: July 04, 2005, 12:07:35 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Quote from: "nishita"
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha
Tamaam umr jis Qalam se dosroon ke waastey
Likhey they uss ne QehQahey
Usi Qalam se apna koi ek dukh na likh saka
Bohat Ajeeb shakhs tha...


very nice aryaan Usual Smile and gud work others Usual Smile

gham-e-rafta  wo  kisi se  na  kehta  hoga
dil ke zakhm bhi chupke se wo sehta hoga

honge   kitne  hi  tere  chaahne  waale
tere  dil  me  koi  ek  hi  rehta  hoga

toot  kar  chahta  hoga  wo  tujhi  ko  lekin
haal-e-dil  tujh  se  kabhi  na  kehta  hoga

atish-fishaan jaise sadiyo talak chup rehte hein
wo bhi khaamosh mohabbat ke sitam sehta hoga

NM

Thanks a lot Nishita....n Bohat khoob..


Ur welcome aryaan Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #36 on: July 04, 2005, 12:14:40 PM »

Ajeeb shakhs tha  woh bhi, lagi thi aag basti mein
Usey manzoor tha lekin unhi sholon mein ja rehna
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jalpari
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«Reply #37 on: July 04, 2005, 01:32:47 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Ajeeb shakhs tha  woh bhi, lagi thi aag basti mein
Usey manzoor tha lekin unhi sholon mein ja rehna

very nice Aryaan n all......
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bond
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«Reply #38 on: July 04, 2005, 01:40:08 PM »
nice ones all.............................................. ......
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Talat
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«Reply #39 on: July 04, 2005, 02:22:37 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Ajeeb shakhs tha  woh bhi, lagi thi aag basti mein
Usey manzoor tha lekin unhi sholon mein ja rehna


Its a beauty Aryaan !!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #40 on: July 04, 2005, 10:49:24 PM »
Bohat shukriya Jalpari, Bond & Talat.....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #41 on: July 05, 2005, 05:20:33 PM »
Thanks a lot Faree, Aryan and Nishu for appreciating my post ...
Good job too by all ...


Hum hai kitne paas tumhaare,
Phir bhi kitne door hai ...
Ek nadi ke do kinare,
Milne se majboor hai ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #42 on: July 06, 2005, 12:22:07 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Faree, Aryan and Nishu for appreciating my post ...
Good job too by all ...


Hum hai kitne paas tumhaare,
Phir bhi kitne door hai ...
Ek nadi ke do kinare,
Milne se majboor hai ...

Nice one JHL....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #43 on: July 07, 2005, 07:28:17 AM »
Thanks a lot Aryan for appreciation of my post ...


Dard bhara zamaana hai,
Khali mera paimaana hai,
Sharaab pine ka shauk nahi,
Lekin gumo ko bhulaana hai ...
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sandhaya
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«Reply #44 on: July 07, 2005, 07:52:27 AM »
pine vale tuh bhahane baaj hote hote hai
peena ban jata hai sonkh unka aur kehte hai ki dard ki khatir pite hai
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