Ajj Raag Ansuo Ka Ga

by Pooja on November 24, 2008, 10:28:45 PM
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Pata nahi is kvita ke arth koi samjh sakega ya nahi.... jis arth ko man main rakhte hue is kavita ki rachna hui hai.. asha hai app sabko pasand ayegi..

Kyun ho gai chup ankhia, inko phir se samjha
Dard ko cher kar, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Dastan suna inhe, wo waqat yaad kara inhe
Zakhmo ko  tadpa, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Daag dil ke dikha , phir se rona sikhla
Kuch to inhe samjha, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Hansi ka na kahin naam ho, jeevan bas gumsaar ho
Her yaad ko gale laga, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Dil ko bekarar kar, armaano ki lash per
Zakhmo ko nasoor bana, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Ansu yah kabhi chup na ho, Pooja ko koi sudh na ho
Behoshi main yah jeevan beeta, ajj raag ansuo ke ga………
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2008, 10:33:45 PM »
Pooja

Is kavita ko samajhne ke liye kavi ki dasha ko mehsoos karna bahut zaroori hai !

A remarkable creation by you Applause Applause Applause

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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2008, 11:01:58 PM »
Pooja

Is kavita ko samajhne ke liye kavi ki dasha ko mehsoos karna bahut zaroori hai !

A remarkable creation by you Applause Applause Applause



Thank you Veer ji!!! Pata nahi kaya man main ayya aor kalam apne app likhati chali gai....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 03:42:36 AM »
Pata nahi aapko aisa q laga iska arth koi nahi samjhega it was a simple and nice poem good work.  Applause
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 04:21:30 AM »
nice sharing
                                       saloni
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2008, 04:57:36 AM »
shukaria SG and Saloni
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 05:33:47 AM »
Very wonderfully presented Pooja Ji   

Shayar ki bhasa ko sab Yoindian samjhenge
Nahi to unka is mehfil mein aanaa bekaar hai
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2008, 05:43:54 AM »
Pata nahi is kvita ke arth koi samjh sakega ya nahi.... jis arth ko man main rakhte hue is kavita ki rachna hui hai.. asha hai app sabko pasand ayegi..

Kyun ho gai chup ankhia, inko phir se samjha
Dard ko cher kar, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Dastan suna inhe, wo waqat yaad kara inhe
Zakhmo ko  tadpa, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Daag dil ke dikha , phir se rona sikhla
Kuch to inhe samjha, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Hansi ka na kahin naam ho, jeevan bas gumsaar ho
Her yaad ko gale laga, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Dil ko bekarar kar, armaano ki lash per
Zakhmo ko nasoor bana, ajj raag ansuo ke ga

Ansu yah kabhi chup na ho, Pooja ko koi sudh na ho
Behoshi main yah jeevan beeta, ajj raag ansuo ke ga………


kya khoob dard pesh kiya hey poja ji aaj aapne. isey kehtey hey dard-ka sakoon.bahut hi maarmik aur hridaysparshi rachna ke liye badhai
 Applause Applause Applause
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peera4u
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2008, 05:48:07 AM »
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 Applause  Applause Bahut khoob pooja ji

Ga saku jo ansuon ke raag, Wo saaz kaha se laun,
Suna saku jo app ko kuch, Wo alfaz kaha se laun,
likne ko to sab likte hai SHYARI,
"POOJA ji" App jaise likne ka Andaz kaha se laun......


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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2008, 06:06:39 AM »
Very wonderfully presented Pooja Ji   

Shayar ki bhasa ko sab Yoindian samjhenge
Nahi to unka is mehfil mein aanaa bekaar hai


shukaria Rajesh ji...
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2008, 06:07:39 AM »
kya khoob dard pesh kiya hey poja ji aaj aapne. isey kehtey hey dard-ka sakoon.bahut hi maarmik aur hridaysparshi rachna ke liye badhai
 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Prateek ji....
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2008, 06:11:44 AM »
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 Applause  Applause Bahut khoob pooja ji

Ga saku jo ansuon ke raag, Wo saaz kaha se laun,
Suna saku jo app ko kuch, Wo alfaz kaha se laun,
likne ko to sab likte hai SHYARI,
"POOJA ji" App jaise likne ka Andaz kaha se laun......


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Apne to lajawab kar diya hai peera ji samjh he nahi aa raha hai ki apki is baat ka kaya jawab du.
gaye koi ansuo ke raag, yah dil mera chahta nahi
shayri apki bhi hai kamal, shayd apka dil yah janta nahi
likho dil se, shabd apne app bante chale jayege
Pooja se bhi bad kar, andaaz bante jayege
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k.shael
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2008, 06:20:18 AM »
WAH   Applause   WAH   Applause   WAH  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB, DARD SE BHARA EK UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM,
DIDI ISE SARAHNE KE LIYE TO SHABD BHI NAHI MIL RAHE...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: November 25, 2008, 06:24:26 AM »
Thanks shally... kuch apki kalam bhi likhti to acha lagta
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peera4u
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2008, 06:34:59 AM »


Thanks pooja ji

App ki duwaon ka agaz rahe, ye dil chahata hai,
Kuch sunte aur sunate rahe, ye dil chahata hai,
Tha app ka Samjhane ka andaz aisa ke,
Phir se kuch likh ne ka, ye dil chahata hai...........


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