ajnbi ho gye

by laransh firozabadi on August 02, 2015, 03:53:20 PM
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uski baho mai itne masgul rhe .
na jane kb bo pyare din bit gye.

aaj tarashte hai un lmho ke liye.
ab na jane knha bo waqt ke dhuye me ud gye.

thikana nhi pta ab uska ..
kbi juda nhi hone dete the ek lmhe ke liye..

hum ji rhe the to uske liye ..
lgta tha bo bhi ji rhi he to bas humare liye..
lekin ab bo ji rhi he kisi or ke liye..
ab hum jiye to jiye kis ke liye..

kasur unka nhi mile jese ajnbi the .
or aaj phir unke liye ajnbi ho gye..

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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2015, 04:27:11 PM »
Nice thoda presentation ka khayal rakhein
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2015, 07:13:20 PM »
bahut khoob waah. Apney pronunciation kee taraf dhhaan deejiye. doosaron kee ghazal nazam parhiye aur dhayaan deejiye ke woh kaise pronounce karte hain.

Correct pronunciation:
baho = baahon;  mai = mein;  masgul = mashgool;  rhe = rahe / rahey;  na = naa;  jane = jaane;
kuha = kahan;  bo = woh;  ud = urhh;  gye = gaaye;  nhi = nahin;  rhi = rahi;  jiye = jiyen; / jiyein; 
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2015, 05:57:29 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2015, 08:08:46 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2015, 12:46:55 PM »
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