Akelapan...

by brokenbyluv on July 15, 2009, 08:17:14 PM
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brokenbyluv
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Aaj hum akele hain kabhi vo hamare sath hua karte the,
hamara har din har raat hua karte the,
unke jane se bujh se gaye hain ab tou..
varna mohabbat ka sailaab hua karte the...... tearyeyed
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2009, 02:50:54 AM »
Broken ji.. aapne 3 shayari yahan share kiya hai.

I request monitor to shift his shayaries in Dard section.
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2009, 05:35:57 PM »
ok i'll do tht...
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sbechain
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2009, 01:12:39 PM »
nice broken Applause
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2009, 01:37:18 PM »
Aaj hum akele hain kabhi vo hamare sath hua karte the,
hamara har din har raat hua karte the,
unke jane se bujh se gaye hain ab tou..
varna mohabbat ka sailaab hua karte the...... tearyeyed


TOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL YAAR ...

AKELAPAN ABB HAMEY SATATA HAI
BAAR BAAR WOH CHEHRA YAAD AATA HAI
KAISEY BADAL GAYI YEH LAKIREH
KISMAT PEH APNEY RONA AATA HAI   


JASBIR SINGH
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2009, 02:25:51 PM »
Bahut khoob bbl ji and jsbr ji....

Akele tanha unki yaadon me kat jayega
dur ho to intezaar me waqt kat jayega
par wo kisi aur ko apnaye hume bhul ke
yeh na humse dekha jayega na saha jayega...
 
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2009, 02:40:27 PM »
Bahut khoob bbl ji and jsbr ji....

Akele tanha unki yaadon me kat jayega
dur ho to intezaar me waqt kat jayega
par wo kisi aur ko apnaye hume bhul ke
yeh na humse dekha jayega na saha jayega...
 


Wah punnu kya baat hai bahut accha likha hai  Usual Smile
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2009, 02:49:01 PM »
Kaatilaana shayri   Applause Clapping Smiley
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punam
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2009, 05:59:31 AM »
Thanx Roja di and thegrimreaper ji....
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2009, 06:10:56 AM »
shukriya aap sabka..aur apki shayri ka...
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2009, 06:41:41 PM »
Bahut khoob bbl ji and jsbr ji....

Akele tanha unki yaadon me kat jayega
dur ho to intezaar me waqt kat jayega
par wo kisi aur ko apnaye hume bhul ke
yeh na humse dekha jayega na saha jayega...
 






Thanks Punam Ji and wah , bahut hi khoob

TERI YAAD MEH HUMNEY UMAR BITA DI
RAAH MEH HUMNEY NAZREY BICHA DI
NA AAYA TERA KOI PAIGAAM EH SANAM
TERE INTEZAAR MEH HUMNEY JAWANI GUJAR DI


JASBIR SINGH
Hira_company@yahoo.

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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2009, 04:20:43 AM »
thnks jabir ji...aur khoob likha apne...
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2009, 01:37:46 AM »
thnks jabir ji...aur khoob likha apne...

Thanks BBL

Jasbir Singh
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #13 on: November 24, 2013, 05:25:11 PM »
Niceee onee...
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Yaash
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2013, 08:23:59 PM »
Nice.
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