Akhri salaam....Teri rahein chod chale

by ~princess~ on December 23, 2007, 12:50:18 AM
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Koi to is to meri umr bhar ki is saza ki waje bata do
Kuch sawal baki hai hume unse 2 pal mila do

Phir nai ayenge khabi uski rahon mein
Bas chain is dil ko akri is waqt mein dila do

Dua paoge jo ek kharam farmaoge meri udaas mohobbat par
Iltaja hai Bhujti Nazro ko akhri deed dikha do

Humari hi bhool thi jo dil laga liya unse
Par ab kuch to is tadapte dil par reham farma do

Mohobbat na sahi tune teh e dil se nafrat to ki thi
Tujhe teri bewafai ki kasam ab apne nam ka kafan hi pehna do

Kehdena unse k humne kiya tha akhri saans tak intezaar
"Karte hai ab bhi dil tod mohobbat tumse"yeh akhri paigam poncha do

~Roshni~
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sapnaa
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2007, 04:15:34 AM »
Wow..very nice roshni,bahut khub
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2007, 08:21:52 AM »
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Kehdena unse k humne kiya tha akhri saans tak intezaar
"Karte hai ab bhi dil tod mohobbat tumse"yeh akhri paigam poncha do
......Roshni bohat achha hai super lines.. Usual Smile
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~princess~
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2007, 01:20:32 PM »
Thx honey and sapna ji umeed karti hu yun hi hausla afzayee karti rahengi
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2007, 04:08:03 PM »
really good lines roshni ji
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~princess~
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2007, 04:29:49 PM »
thank u badal ji
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prmchawla
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2007, 05:44:19 AM »
very nice job.
Prem
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2011, 11:11:13 AM »
kamaal ka likha hai aapne…
amasing!!!!!
kahan ho aap
come back na
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2011, 02:56:29 PM »
Nirala ji..wo apke aas paas hi thi..bas ap pehchan nahi paye.. ;-)
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nirala
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2011, 03:04:36 PM »
aisa nahi hai…
wo kahan thi…
aaspaas kidhar??
btao na plzz
Quote from: redwhitegang on June 05, 2011, 02:56:29 PM
Nirala ji..wo apke aas paas hi thi..bas ap pehchan nahi paye.. ;-)
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2011, 05:59:46 AM »
Kya Princess ji!..ap kidhar chupi hai..dekhiye apke dewane bechain hai ap se milne k liye tongue3 Laughing hard
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2011, 05:53:28 PM »
Quote from: redwhitegang on June 26, 2011, 05:59:46 AM
Kya Princess ji!..ap kidhar chupi hai..dekhiye apke dewane bechain hai ap se milne k liye tongue3 Laughing hard
huhh…btate nahi ho aap aur majak urate ho :-/
wese inke kalaam se inke deewane to ho hi gaye hain tongue3 tongue3 :-P
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