Akhri Waqt

by Meena on April 27, 2005, 03:59:37 PM
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Meena
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Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!
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pandit
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2005, 04:19:01 PM »
bahut hi accha meenaji.......

tum zindagi ki baazi haar kar bhi jeet gaye,
kuch aise bhi hain jo toot kar bikhar gaye,
wo kahe to kiss se kahe apni daastan e ruswai,
ki unke zindagi ki shama jalne k baad bujh gaye.
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2005, 05:00:54 PM »
Waaahh!!!!!!!!!! Good ones !!!!!!!!!! both !!!!!!!!!! happy9
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ali
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2005, 05:19:47 PM »
Bahot khuub  MEENA JI or PANDIT ji

Ab uski moout pe afsosh kisleae yaro
jab usko marne pe majboor kiya hai bahot
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2005, 05:30:44 PM »
shukriya pandit ji...talat sis and ali ji!!!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2005, 05:32:54 PM »
Quote from: "ali"
Bahot khuub  MEENA JI or PANDIT ji

Ab uski moout pe afsosh kisleae yaro
jab usko marne pe majboor kiya hai bahot


thanx and very nice ali ji!!!!

unki hi kushi thi jo chale gaye door kabhi,
warna deewane marte nahin marne se kabhi!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2005, 07:41:21 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!

Thats a beauty Meena...... Bohat khoob...
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vikas2210
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2005, 04:36:21 AM »
meena ji bahut dard hai bhara hai

marne ka afsoos kaisa
unka intezaar abhi bhi hai
aur tab bhi hoga
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dhadkan
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2005, 09:31:59 AM »
Wah meena, ayraan, vikas ji kya baat hai...............

Lagta hai ab zindagi ki shaam hone ko hai,
Bas ek shikwa tujhse kehne ko hai,
HUmne to haath thama tha tumhara zindagi bhar ke liye,
Tum to chad gaye ho hume jeeteje marne ke liya......
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2005, 03:08:10 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Quote from: "Meena"
Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!

Thats a beauty Meena...... Bohat khoob...


shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2005, 03:09:49 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
meena ji bahut dard hai bhara hai

marne ka afsoos kaisa
unka intezaar abhi bhi hai
aur tab bhi hoga


shukriya vikas ji!!!

afsos is baat ka nahin ke chod chale teri duniya hum,
afsos is baat ka hai teri ankh me ansoon de gaye hum!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2005, 03:11:02 PM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Wah meena, ayraan, vikas ji kya baat hai...............

Lagta hai ab zindagi ki shaam hone ko hai,
Bas ek shikwa tujhse kehne ko hai,
HUmne to haath thama tha tumhara zindagi bhar ke liye,
Tum to chad gaye ho hume jeeteje marne ke liya......


wah dhadkan sis!!!!!!!

aaj bhi tumse koi shikwa nahin hai hai,
kaise karen gila jab dil se dil ka rabta nahin hai!!!!
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2005, 03:12:53 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!


wah meena ji ...
bahut hi accha hai.............................................. .......... :cry:
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2005, 03:17:14 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
Quote from: "Meena"
Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!


wah meena ji ...
bahut hi accha hai.............................................. .......... :cry:


shukriya!  :D
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husain52
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2005, 01:48:15 PM »
bohot khoob meena ji

Tujh ko izhaar-e-Mohabbat sey agar nafrat thi
Apney honton ko larazney sey tou roka hota
Hosla Tujh mein na tha Mujh sey Juda honey ka
Warna Kajal; teri Aankhon mein na Phaila Hota   (NM)
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