Akhri Waqt

by Meena on April 27, 2005, 03:59:37 PM

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thelostworld

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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2005, 02:13:30 PM »

wah nicee meena ji great Winking

Khali shishe bhi nishan rakhte hain..
Tute huye dil bhi aarman rakhte hain..
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye..
wo samandar bhi dil mein hazaron toofan rakhte hain..


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Manish_Friend

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2005, 02:26:44 PM »

Wah Wah meena ji.. wonderful.. esp these lines

"Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha"

Great work.


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Amanush...

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Re: Akhri Waqt

«Reply #17 on: April 30, 2005, 05:54:06 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Kaanton ki sej thi aur charon taraf andhera chaya tha,
Lash-e-armano ki kami na thi, maut ka mandra raha saya tha,

Kab tak chalte rehte aisi rah-e-zindagi pe aye Khuda,
Jisko meri haanton ki lakeeron me tumne hi sajaya tha,

Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!

Aap ke iss kavita bhi bahout pasand aaya

Keep it up

Amanush...


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Meena

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #18 on: April 30, 2005, 06:58:02 PM »

Quote from: "husain52"

bohot khoob meena ji

Tujh ko izhaar-e-Mohabbat sey agar nafrat thi
Apney honton ko larazney sey tou roka hota
Hosla Tujh mein na tha Mujh sey Juda honey ka
Warna Kajal; teri Aankhon mein na Phaila Hota (NM)

shukriya ji apne bih bohot pyara sher likha hai!!!

:D


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Meena

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #19 on: April 30, 2005, 07:01:02 PM »

Quote from: "thelostworld"

wah nicee meena ji great Winking

Khali shishe bhi nishan rakhte hain..
Tute huye dil bhi aarman rakhte hain..
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye..
wo samandar bhi dil mein hazaron toofan rakhte hain..

thank u ji!! :D

armano ka gulgasta dil me kabhi humara bhi khila tha,
jan gawa baitha woh jaab toofano se mila tha!!!


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Meena

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #20 on: April 30, 2005, 07:01:39 PM »

Quote from: "Manish_Friend"

Wah Wah meena ji.. wonderful.. esp these lines

"Zindagi se haar kar bhi jeet gaye aaj zindagi ki baazi hum,
Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha"

Great work.

shukriya ji for liking my poems!!

:D


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Meena

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Re: Akhri Waqt

«Reply #21 on: April 30, 2005, 07:02:05 PM »

Quote from: "Amanush..."

Quote from: "Meena"

Aap ke iss kavita bhi bahout pasand aaya

Keep it up

Amanush...

thank u amanush ji!!!

:D


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endlesslove

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Re: Akhri Waqt

«Reply #22 on: May 01, 2005, 06:36:06 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Very nice meena
buck up u r on right track


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apnaa_koi

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2005, 01:33:52 AM »

Beutiful Meena Ji

Always Anjli...


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fakharenaveed

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2005, 03:20:52 AM »

Jo kabar aur kafan ko inam ke taur pe humne jo paya tha!

wohi humney tere pyar ka tohfa samjhatha


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Meena

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Akhri Waqt

«Reply #25 on: May 02, 2005, 03:05:37 PM »

shukriya endless ji....apna ji!!!!!!!!!!! :D

nice naveed!!!!!!

:D


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Reema

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«Reply #26 on: May 03, 2005, 11:27:03 AM »

Quote from: "vikas2210"

meena ji bahut dard hai bhara hai

marne ka afsoos kaisa
unka intezaar abhi bhi hai
aur tab bhi hoga

Bohat sahi Vikas ji,

Intezar Intezar faqat intezar
Mohabbat ka bas yehi aitbar

Reema


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vikas2210

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«Reply #27 on: May 03, 2005, 12:38:09 PM »

Quote from: "Reema"

Quote from: "vikas2210"

meena ji bahut dard hai bhara hai

marne ka afsoos kaisa
unka intezaar abhi bhi hai
aur tab bhi hoga

Bohat sahi Vikas ji,

Intezar Intezar faqat intezar
Mohabbat ka bas yehi aitbar

Reema

shukriya ji

aap sab bahut hi acche hai aur likhte hai.

intezaar ki koi to haad hogi
usski haad ko napna chahta hun
apne aitbaar ko parkhna chahta hun
tapkata hai aankho se aansoon
ab khoon tapkana chahta hun.