**Alfaaz Dard Ke** by Rahim

by dead heart on April 10, 2010, 05:26:08 AM
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Vikas bhaijan ne mohobat pe aisa hi ek thread shuru kiya tha jo mashAllah bahaut successful raha...Main chahunga dard ke naam bhi kuch likha jaye...Hum sab kisi na kisi tarha, koi na koi dard ke manzar se guzar rahe hai ya guzar chuke hai...Kayi logon ko koi share karne wala nahin milta aur dard ander hi ander rehta hai...Main chahunga yeh post ke zariye, ap apna dard baha de...Contribute karke isse succesful banaye...

Main apna dard lavzon main kaise bayan karoun Rahim,
Khauf hai mujhe ke lavz khatam hojaenge...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 05:50:17 AM »
nice thread rahim ji....
ye bhi bahot hi successfull rahega hi..hamari dua he ye.... icon_thumleft


Tune aane ka wada to kiya ae berahem,
par ye na bataya ki kab mere intezar khattam hoga....
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 05:53:41 AM »
Shukriya jee...Bahaut acha shaer likha hai apne..
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 05:54:27 AM »
Woh chorr gaya mujhe yeh toh mana Rahim,
Mager afsos iska hai ke uski yaadon ne bhi saath na dia mera...
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 06:15:03 AM »
Wo mere nasib me nahi he to kya hua,
khushi he is baat ki uske liye hamse bhi aachha jivan sathi milega....
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 06:17:33 AM »
Applause Applause

Humare baad na aega tumhe chahat ka aisa maza Faraz,
Tum logon se kehte phiroge 'mujhe chahoge uski tarha..' NM
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 06:19:50 AM »
Koi kya chahega usse mujse behtar Rahim,
Har koi sacha ashiq nahin duniya main...
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2010, 06:26:06 AM »
 Clapping Smiley


Kya thi khatta meri ye to bataya hota,
kyu ho gaya tu bewafa..??
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riyaz106
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2010, 06:37:16 AM »
Achha likha hai Abdul Rahim Bhai. Ek sher aapki nazr hai--

Tum the majboor, koi baat nahi
Tootna dil ka badi baat nahi
(riyaz)
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2010, 06:44:09 AM »
Rahim Bhai.. Yeh Tread Bhi Bahut Hi Successful Jayega.. Hum Sab Isme Zaroor Likhenge.. bassss aapka Sath Chahiye.. aur Yo Ke Sabhi Umda Shayaron Ki Nazar chahiye..!!  icon_thumleft



Main Zakhmon Ko Kured Aur Gehra Kar Deta,
Par Afsos Tune Kaha Diya "Mujhe Bhool Jao"....!!



**~** Mann **~**
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2010, 06:52:28 AM »
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Kitni aasani se keh diya tune bhul jao,
Aesi guzri is DIl pe jese kisne angaro pe chalne ko kaha....
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2010, 06:58:53 AM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Riyaz jee, Vikas bhaijan aur Thinkhattk jee...
Vikas bhaijan, dil ko choo gaya shaer apka... Clapping Smiley
Very nice reply to that..Thinkhattk jee... Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2010, 06:59:56 AM »
Tere liye toh main angaron pe chalna kya, maut ko apna leta Rahim,
Bas tujhe yeh nahin kehna chahiye tha ke hume tumse mohobat nahin...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2010, 07:06:40 AM »
Bahut achchha thread hai Rahim Ji

aur Dev, Mann, Riyaz ne bhi achchha saath diya hai
Main bhi koshish karunga, Abhi jara soch raha hoon
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #14 on: April 10, 2010, 07:07:34 AM »
Shukriya Rajesh Ji & Rahim Mere Dost... Usual Smile


Bahut Acche Devangi Ji & Rahim Bhai... Applause



Jab-Jab Meri Aankhon Me, Ashqon Ki Barsaat Hoti Hai,
Har Us Lamha E-Dilruba, Tu Mere Dil Me Aabaad Hoti Hai....!!!




**~** Mann **~**
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