Alfaz nhi hai awaz nhi hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on April 28, 2011, 10:42:53 AM
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Main ek shayara hu per aaj merre paas alfaz nhi hai,
ehsaso ka bawander qaid hai sine mein bayan karne ko awaz nhi hai,

rote rote ankho ka jahan pehele hi ujad chuka hai,
ab lafzo mein merre dard ka koi saaz nhi hai,

dil ki ek ek dhadkan ruk ruk k chalti hai,
mhbt mein kuch kar guzarne ka vo andaz nhi hai,

use khone k darr se pal pal marti hu roz main,
usko apna bana saku hauslo mein ab vo parwaaz nhi hai,

itni toot chuki hu mhbt k dard se main,
ki ab khud pe vo pehle jaisa naaz nhi hai,

chupchap dard pi rahi hu ander hi ander judai ka..
aetbaar hai apne khuda ka isiliye taqdir k faisle pe aetraaz nhi hai.........

 I MISS U ALOT
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2011, 05:10:14 PM »
hamesha ki tarah bahut achha hai. Another award winning poem.
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2011, 05:40:58 PM »
Wah Geet ji mast geet hai aapka.....ab daad dene ko alfaz nahi hai mere paas...
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Virah vedna mai ghut-ghut ke jee rahi hai tu
Usse paane ki ab bachee koi khwaish nahi hai

Eelm hai hamesha k liye usse kho chuki hai tu
Wo mil jaayega aysee koi ab aas bhee nahi hai

Kya keh kay du mein tujhe santwanaa ay-dost
Mere paas ab aysey koi alfaaz bhee nahi hai




Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 28, 2011, 10:42:53 AM


Main ek shayara hu per aaj merre paas alfaz nhi hai,
ehsaso ka bawander qaid hai sine mein bayan karne ko awaz nhi hai,

rote rote ankho ka jahan pehele hi ujad chuka hai,
ab lafzo mein merre dard ka koi saaz nhi hai,

dil ki ek ek dhadkan ruk ruk k chalti hai,
mhbt mein kuch kar guzarne ka vo andaz nhi hai,

use khone k darr se pal pal marti hu roz main,
usko apna bana saku hauslo mein ab vo parwaaz nhi hai,

itni toot chuki hu mhbt k dard se main,
ki ab khud pe vo pehle jaisa naaz nhi hai,

chupchap dard pi rahi hu ander hi ander judai ka..
aetbaar hai apne khuda ka isiliye taqdir k faisle pe aetraaz nhi hai.........

 I MISS U ALOT
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2011, 11:31:00 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne geet ji... aajkal khud nahi likh paata ... to bas aap logo ka likha hua kabhi kabhi padh leta hoon.... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... aur bahut dard hai isme...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2011, 10:29:59 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 28, 2011, 10:42:53 AM


Main ek shayara hu per aaj merre paas alfaz nhi hai,
ehsaso ka bawander qaid hai sine mein bayan karne ko awaz nhi hai,

rote rote ankho ka jahan pehele hi ujad chuka hai,
ab lafzo mein merre dard ka koi saaz nhi hai,

dil ki ek ek dhadkan ruk ruk k chalti hai,
mhbt mein kuch kar guzarne ka vo andaz nhi hai,

use khone k darr se pal pal marti hu roz main,
usko apna bana saku hauslo mein ab vo parwaaz nhi hai,

itni toot chuki hu mhbt k dard se main,
ki ab khud pe vo pehle jaisa naaz nhi hai,

chupchap dard pi rahi hu ander hi ander judai ka..
aetbaar hai apne khuda ka isiliye taqdir k faisle pe aetraaz nhi hai.........

 I MISS U ALOT

Very Touching Linesssssssssss ... Broken Ji !!

tahe dil se daad ......... !!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2011, 02:40:07 PM »
Quote from: Imdad on April 28, 2011, 05:10:14 PM
hamesha ki tarah bahut achha hai. Another award winning poem.

Bahut shukriya imdad ji...
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2011, 02:42:25 PM »
Quote from: ANAAM on April 28, 2011, 05:40:58 PM
Wah Geet ji mast geet hai aapka.....ab daad dene ko alfaz nahi hai mere paas...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Virah vedna mai ghut-ghut ke jee rahi hai tu
Usse paane ki ab bachee koi khwaish nahi hai

Eelm hai hamesha k liye usse kho chuki hai tu
Wo mil jaayega aysee koi ab aas bhee nahi hai

Kya keh kay du mein tujhe santwanaa ay-dost
Mere paas ab aysey koi alfaaz bhee nahi hai





Bahut shukriya anaam ji...aur santawna ki zarurat nhi hai ji mhbt ka dard hai jab ubharega lafzo mein tadap aa hi jayegi..
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2011, 02:43:15 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on April 28, 2011, 06:54:31 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2011, 02:43:44 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 29, 2011, 11:31:00 PM
Bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne geet ji... aajkal khud nahi likh paata ... to bas aap logo ka likha hua kabhi kabhi padh leta hoon.... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... aur bahut dard hai isme...!!!

Bahut shukriya kapil ji..
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2011, 02:44:06 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on April 30, 2011, 10:29:59 AM
Very Touching Linesssssssssss ... Broken Ji !!

tahe dil se daad ......... !!!!!

Bahut shukriya naresh ji..
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2011, 07:19:29 PM »
Tariff karna chahta hoon iss kalam ki mager padte waqt ek dukh sa hua di..
Kay jo shaks itni khubsoorati se mohobat se mohobat par likhta tha, ussi ne aj bahaut dard bhar diya apni kalam main..

Apne itna acha likha hai kay dil ko dukh mehsoos hua jo yeh dil ek baar guzar chuka hai..Aisa laga kay apne bas dil se likh diya..!

Dil dil dil se daad..!
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2011, 07:25:40 PM »

I appreciate deepness of thoughts...

Apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon...

gam ka sagar hai, yahaan par tum akele hi naheen
saath saahil aur safeena, hai yahaan patwaar bhee

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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2011, 03:51:08 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on April 30, 2011, 07:19:29 PM
Tariff karna chahta hoon iss kalam ki mager padte waqt ek dukh sa hua di..
Kay jo shaks itni khubsoorati se mohobat se mohobat par likhta tha, ussi ne aj bahaut dard bhar diya apni kalam main..

Apne itna acha likha hai kay dil ko dukh mehsoos hua jo yeh dil ek baar guzar chuka hai..Aisa laga kay apne bas dil se likh diya..!

Dil dil dil se daad..!
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Khush rahiye..!

Shukriya rahiim aur ye mhbt hai dard aur khushi dono pehelu sath liye chalti hai kal khushi aaj udasi hu kal phir khushi bus yahi mhbt hai aur iski isi ada pe poori qaynat fida hai...
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2011, 03:51:58 PM »
Quote from: Satish Shukla on April 30, 2011, 07:25:40 PM
I appreciate deepness of thoughts...

Apna ek sher aapki nazr kar raha hoon...

gam ka sagar hai, yahaan par tum akele hi naheen
saath saahil aur safeena, hai yahaan patwaar bhee

Raqeeb Lucknowi 

Bahut khubsurat kaha aur bahu shukriya satish ji merri kavita pe apna waqt dene k liye...
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