Almiaa

by javedarshad on February 17, 2009, 07:33:41 AM

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javedarshad

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Maazi ke Zinda khuwaboon ko
Aankhoon se giraaun kaise
Teri yaaden
Ajnabi hamsafer ki bahun mein
Samati hi nahin

Mere wajood ko jagane ki
her nakaam koshish bhi
Tilism na tood saki
Kaisa almia hai

Tere khushboo ka ehsaas
doosre ki khushbu ko
basne hi nahin deta
Meri sisakti sasain
Uski jalti huii sansoon se
Milti hi nahin

Jab bhi use oodhne ki koshish ki
Tere lams ki chader beech mein aajati hai
Aia mere hamsafer tuhi bata
Teri yadoon ko sajaoun kaise

Javedarshad


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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2009, 07:57:26 AM »

Quote from: javedarshad on February 17, 2009, 07:33:41 AM

Very good creation Javed Arshad ji..


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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2009, 07:59:22 AM »

javed ji..fir ek baar aapne behad achcha likha... bhasha par aapki pakad aapki likhavat ko aur khoob-surat bana deti hai... Applause


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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 07:59:51 AM »

Bahut shukria
roja Saheba

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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2009, 08:01:14 AM »

Beqrar Ji

shukria aap ki baat achchi lagi

javed


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Re: Almiaa

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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 08:16:00 AM »

shukria

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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 12:58:24 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on February 17, 2009, 07:33:41 AM

Bohot Khoob....Bohot Khoobsurat !!


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Re: Almiaa

«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2009, 01:03:22 PM »

Bohat Achche Javed Bhai, Nice One,.


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Re: for celmira

«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2009, 02:16:47 PM »

Tumhare sahare pe to hum Duniya se ladne ka housla rakhte the.
Tum ne jo saath chod diya,Hum to apne aap se hi haar gaye.

It,s mine
Celmira ji shayad ab aapko koi shikayat nahin hongi, kyunki yeh maine khud likhi hai,Acchi ya buri likhi pata nahin.