*~*Alvida*~*

by Roja on October 05, 2007, 02:32:21 PM
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Ek Diwana Matwala
Mere Dil Main Hamesha Rehta Hai
Mujhse Karta Hai Pyar Bhi Woh
Aur Mujhse Hi Aakar Ladta Hai

Awaaz Main Unki Hai Jadu
Aankhon Main Hai Pyar
Karta Hai Shikayat Bhi Mujh Se
Aur Mujh Pe Hi Zalim Marta Hai..

Chah Kar Bhi Unhe Mai Paa Na Saku
Ghar Apna Unhe Mai Laa Na Saku
Pass Apne Unhe Mai Bhula Na Saku
Khud Milne Ko Bhi Jaa Na Saku
Ruswayi Se Unki Mai Darthi Hu
Aur Woh Bhi Zamane Se Darta Hai

Dhuri Hi Agar Taqdeer Jo Hai
Kyu Hum Ko Milaya Hai Rab Ne
Kis Zurm Ki Humko Saja Ye Mili?
Kyu Humko Sataya Hai Rab Ne?
Us Oor Woh Tadapta Hai
Din Raat Edhar Mai Aahein Berti Hu..

Yeh Haal Agar Yu Hi Jo Raha
Mai Jeete Jee Mer Jaungi
Dunia Bhi Agar Ye Mil Jaye
Per Unke Siva Kya Paungi?
Itna To Yakeen Woh Dilaye Mujhe
Ki Wo Mujh Se Mohabbat Karta Hai

Ab Na Unke Raah Main Kante Banu Mai
Alvida Kehne Mehfil Main Aayee Hu Mai..

Roja
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2007, 02:53:58 PM »
Roja

Very touching and emotional sad poetry sad5
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~princess~
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2007, 03:02:31 PM »
wow awesome roja as usual

ek choti si khoshish apko pasand aye shayad


Hum tumse ek baat poochte hain

beete lamho ki ek yaad poochte hian

kya tumhe yaad hai wo rangeen wadiyan

Jo khabi huin thi wo mulakat poochte hain

kya tum bhulgaye ho wo sunehri raatein

Jismein bheege the mohobbat ki wo barsaat poochte hain

kya kuch yaad nahi tumhe sab kuch bhula baithe ho

wo fiza wo khaza wo tere armaan poochte hain

Yun ek pal mein kaise bhula diya tumne un lamho ko

Jo legayi dur,jisne juda kiya wo halaat poochte hain

Humne to aaj tak intezaar k diye jalaye rakhe hain

Tumhare seene mein jalayi thi jo us ag ka farmaan poochte hai

Hume chahe bhula do tum, chahe Mita do in lamho ko

Akhri ek sawal ka jawab dekar chale jana

aaj tujhse apni mohobbat ka anjaam poochte hain

~Roshni~
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2007, 03:10:58 PM »
Roshu

Wah ! wah ! Kya reply diya hai =D> =D> =D>

Roja will be happy to read ur reply and continue :wink:

Aap dono meri tahe dil se daad kabool kijiye :D

Keep going :arrow:
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2007, 03:28:16 PM »
wow!!! wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob!! Roja bahoot he emotional and touching kavita likhi hai apne!!!  Simple, deep... tooo Good!!!!

Roshu bahoot hi payara jawab diya hai apne... too good... very emotional...  

dono kavitaye dil chu gai... Good job Both!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2007, 05:11:08 PM »
Kya baat hai....ROJA And Roshu....both R just Superb...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2007, 05:27:36 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Roja Ji,.
And Princess Taai

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye.
Malik Aap Sab Ka Bhala Kare
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2007, 03:47:37 PM »
Quote from: "~princess~"
wow awesome roja as usual

ek choti si khoshish apko pasand aye shayad


Hum tumse ek baat poochte hain

beete lamho ki ek yaad poochte hian

kya tumhe yaad hai wo rangeen wadiyan

Jo khabi huin thi wo mulakat poochte hain

kya tum bhulgaye ho wo sunehri raatein

Jismein bheege the mohobbat ki wo barsaat poochte hain

kya kuch yaad nahi tumhe sab kuch bhula baithe ho

wo fiza wo khaza wo tere armaan poochte hain

Yun ek pal mein kaise bhula diya tumne un lamho ko

Jo legayi dur,jisne juda kiya wo halaat poochte hain

Humne to aaj tak intezaar k diye jalaye rakhe hain

Tumhare seene mein jalayi thi jo us ag ka farmaan poochte hai

Hume chahe bhula do tum, chahe Mita do in lamho ko

Akhri ek sawal ka jawab dekar chale jana

aaj tujhse apni mohobbat ka anjaam poochte hain

~Roshni~



wow roshni... Bahut accha likha aur mera sath diya ...


Hey sanam,

Aapki bathein kare dil aap ki bathein kare
Chahta hai na jane kitna, magar kehne se dare
Ye aapki rootne ki ada kabhi maine dekhi nahi
Sawla ye rang unpe, jiye koyi ya mare
Hosh main woh kya rahe, jo ik jalak bhi dekh le
Kitne dil ghayal huye, kitne dil aahein bare
Farishte bhi jhankte hai, badalon ki oot se
Fir kaho kaise "Roja" ho sanam tumse pare?
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2007, 05:39:02 PM »
Roja

Wah ! wah ! kya baat hai =D>

Aise he likhti raho !
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2007, 02:18:02 AM »
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Roja

Wah ! wah ! kya baat hai =D>

Aise he likhti raho !


Thank you for reading Raj...birji :D
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2007, 07:29:22 AM »
nice Roja ... !


Darad K Phool b khilty hain aur Bikhar jaty hain,
Zakham kesy b hoon kuch roz main Bhar jaty hain,
Us dareechy main ab koi nahi Guzrta Tum na Main,
Loug chup chap sar jhukaaye Guzar jaty hain,
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2007, 10:13:28 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Roja Ji Guru Ji,
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2007, 12:45:25 PM »
Quote from: "Roja"
Ek Diwana Matwala
Mere Dil Main Hamesha Rehta Hai
Mujhse Karta Hai Pyar Bhi Woh
Aur Mujhse Hi Aakar Ladta Hai

Awaaz Main Unki Hai Jadu
Aankhon Main Hai Pyar
Karta Hai Shikayat Bhi Mujh Se
Aur Mujh Pe Hi Zalim Marta Hai..

Chah Kar Bhi Unhe Mai Paa Na Saku
Ghar Apna Unhe Mai Laa Na Saku
Pass Apne Unhe Mai Bhula Na Saku
Khud Milne Ko Bhi Jaa Na Saku
Ruswayi Se Unki Mai Darthi Hu
Aur Woh Bhi Zamane Se Darta Hai

Dhuri Hi Agar Taqdeer Jo Hai
Kyu Hum Ko Milaya Hai Rab Ne
Kis Zurm Ki Humko Saja Ye Mili?
Kyu Humko Sataya Hai Rab Ne?
Us Oor Woh Tadapta Hai
Din Raat Edhar Mai Aahein Berti Hu..

Yeh Haal Agar Yu Hi Jo Raha
Mai Jeete Jee Mer Jaungi
Dunia Bhi Agar Ye Mil Jaye
Per Unke Siva Kya Paungi?
Itna To Yakeen Woh Dilaye Mujhe
Ki Wo Mujh Se Mohabbat Karta Hai

Ab Na Unke Raah Main Kante Banu Mai
Alvida Kehne Mehfil Main Aayee Hu Mai..

Roja
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excellent sad5

spl last para
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 05:18:13 PM »
Thanks for reading me Doll 
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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2009, 03:44:31 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Roja sweetu,really touching n mindblowing creation,beautiful lines by Roshni ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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