ALWIDA~~ Maaf Karna ~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on July 11, 2009, 06:32:38 AM
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doston yeh ek aise aadmi kii kahaani hai jisse uski naukari chhin chuki hai aur woh dar dar bhatak raha hai ..aise haalat main woh suicide kar leta hai taaki insurance se milne wale paise se ghar chal sake

ja raha hoon main tujhko akela chhod kar
ho sake toh meri yeh khata bhi maaf karna
jaanta hoon tujhe dard k siwa aur kucch na mila
magar meri bebasi bhi samajh, tu mujhe maaf karna

chahat thi meri kii tujhe har khushi deta
teri zindgi ko phoolon se motiyon se bhar deta
magar har khushi har mauka mujhse zindgi ne chheena
bata main tere liye aur isse badkar kya deta

mohabbat har dum rahi dil main magar dikhata kaise
tujhe main dushwariyon se chaar karwata kaise
waada kiya tha tere baabul se tujhe koi gham na doonga
toh teri aankhon mein ashq mein laata kaise

kii aaj jaate jaate tujhe yeh kehna chahta hoon
mere liye kucch mail ho dil mein toh saaf karna
tera aashiq raha, aur sirf tujhse hi mohabbat kii maine
par takdeer ne dhoka kiya, tu mujhe maaf karna

dard toh bahut hoga tujhe , magar yeh ashq tham jaayenge
phir kabhi kabhi hi yaadon se tum gujar karna
"Saahil" ki khataon ko maaf kar k tum
mere sanam zindgi chen se basar karna
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 06:42:49 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Salil Bhai..

Ksi Bhi Soch Ko Lafzo Mein Dhaalna Bahut Badi Baat Hoti hai Aur Aapne Bakhoobi Isse Nibhaya. Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 06:44:38 AM »
Mindblowing Saahil.. Bahoot hi umda likha hai... I can feel the pain inside your this creation.. Too Good dear..
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 10:04:14 AM »
kya baat hai saahil ji......

jeete ji dard ke siwa ,kuch na de paaey tumko,
soocha tere liye ,jaate-jaate kuch kar jaaey humto.
dookh  to tume bahoot hoga,ho sake to maaf karna,
apne saath na sahi,apne yaadon mein har waqat hame paaogey.
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 02:41:21 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Salil Bhai..

Ksi Bhi Soch Ko Lafzo Mein Dhaalna Bahut Badi Baat Hoti hai Aur Aapne Bakhoobi Isse Nibhaya. Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya khwahish bhai
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 02:42:14 PM »
Mindblowing Saahil.. Bahoot hi umda likha hai... I can feel the pain inside your this creation.. Too Good dear..
shukriya sophi
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 02:44:37 PM »
kya baat hai saahil ji......

jeete ji dard ke siwa ,kuch na de paaey tumko,
soocha tere liye ,jaate-jaate kuch kar jaaey humto.
dookh  to tume bahoot hoga,ho sake to maaf karna,
apne saath na sahi,apne yaadon mein har waqat hame paaogey.
bahut bahut shukriya cara saahiba
aapne bahut hi khoobsurat reply kiya hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2009, 12:46:51 PM »
dil ka dard ghol kar pi jaun sharaab main
shayad chen meri rooh ko phir mukarrar ho
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2009, 03:09:56 PM »
Wah Kya Baaat hai Salil Bhai.. Bahut Gaharaai ke sath likhe Hue alfaaz Hain.. Dard Har ek Lafz se Bayan ho raha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob Dost.. Applause Applause


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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2009, 04:09:05 PM »

Realy very well expressed as always Salil...

Clapping Smiley
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2009, 05:09:31 PM »
Very good creation..  Applause Each line touched my heart. saalil... very good  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2009, 02:43:28 PM »
vicky bbhai roja dear and huzena ..............
thanks to the trio
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