~*~Alwida-2~*~:Shayri-E-Dard

deepika_divya

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Mil raha hai pal pal dard mujhe
main bayan bhi ab kar nahi sakti hun

Tu bhi tho nahi hai saath mere ab
Isliye main na ro, na hass sakti hun

Kyun tadpa rahe hai sab log mujhe
Abtho logo se gila b nahi kar sakti hun

Admari ho chuki hun main tere pyar mein
Ab tho sirf tujhe yaad kar sakti hun

chali jaungi is jahan se bahoot hi jald
Kyun ab tere begair sans b nahi le sakti hun

keh dungi Alwida mein sanam sabse ak din
ansoon b sook gaye mere, ab ro b nahi sakti hun

~~DIVYA~~


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2009, 07:23:19 AM »

Nice work Sophi..


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2009, 10:50:35 AM »

Bahut Khoooooob Sophi Ji
bahut shaandar
SARVESH RASTOGI


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2009, 01:20:10 PM »

DIVYA.. Bahut Hi Jazzbaati Alfaaz likhe Hain..!! Mohabbat Me Juda Hone ke Baad Kaise Jiya Jata Hai.. Yeh aapne Lafzon Behad Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai..!! Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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angel4u

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2009, 02:39:45 PM »

Wonderfully written Sophi Usual Smile

wah wah kya baat hai aajkal badi achhi achhi shayri likh rahi ho,
baat kya hai? tongue3


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2009, 03:36:14 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 02, 2009, 07:09:33 AM

bohot khoob Sophi ji Clapping Smiley

behad dard bhara likha hai aapne

yun to zindagi chalti rahti hai! sahar-e-ashq hoti rahti hai
dil hi dil jab bikharte hain hum,shayari unmaan banne lagti hai

Thank u so much kaash

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 02, 2009, 07:23:19 AM

Nice work Sophi..

Thank u Sajid Ji

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 02, 2009, 10:50:35 AM

Bahut Khoooooob Sophi Ji
bahut shaandar
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thank u so much Sarvesh Ji

Quote from: Mann on May 02, 2009, 01:20:10 PM

DIVYA.. Bahut Hi Jazzbaati Alfaaz likhe Hain..!! Mohabbat Me Juda Hone ke Baad Kaise Jiya Jata Hai.. Yeh aapne Lafzon Behad Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai..!! Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

Thank u so so much Mann Ji

Quote from: {Angel} on May 02, 2009, 02:39:45 PM

Wonderfully written Sophi Usual Smile

wah wah kya baat hai aajkal badi achhi achhi shayri likh rahi ho,
baat kya hai? tongue3

Thank u so muchhhh Sweetheart


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2009, 03:52:06 PM »

Bohat Achche Sophi,.

Kabhi Alwida Na Kehna,.


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2009, 04:55:26 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on May 02, 2009, 03:52:06 PM

Bohat Achche Sophi,.

Kabhi Alwida Na Kehna,.

Thank u Azeem!


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Roja

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2009, 05:01:11 AM »

Bahut accha likha hai Divs....


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2009, 05:03:01 AM »

Wah, kya dard paish kiya hai aapne...
Barhiya...


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2009, 05:26:59 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 03, 2009, 05:01:11 AM

Bahut accha likha hai Divs....

Thank u so much Roja


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deepika_divya

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 05:31:22 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2009, 05:03:01 AM

Wah, kya dard paish kiya hai aapne...
Barhiya...

Thank u Syednaami ji Usual Smile


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2009, 06:14:27 AM »

Bahut Khoob Sophi..


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 07:28:30 AM »

Tujhse Bichardkar Bhi Tujhse Judaa Nahi,.
Bas Bujhaa Hoon Is Taraah Ke Jalaa Nahi,.

Wo Kehte Hain Mujhse Ke Main Gunaahgar Hoon,.
Dil Ki Baat Sunaana To Koi Khataa Nahi,.

Bewafaa Kehkar Mujhe Khud Ko Tassali Dete Hain,.
Sab Jaante Hain Ke "Azeem, Bewafaa Nahi,.

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deepika_divya

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2009, 07:55:10 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 03, 2009, 06:14:27 AM

Bahut Khoob Sophi..

Thanks U so much khwaish ji


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