~*~Alwida-2~*~ -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #30 on: May 03, 2009, 09:14:45 AM »

Wah wah, sab ne khoob likha hai...

Mehfilon men naam lete nahin jana,
Badnaam kardega tumhen sara zamaana...


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #31 on: May 03, 2009, 09:23:47 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2009, 09:14:45 AM

Wah wah, sab ne khoob likha hai...

Mehfilon men naam lete nahin jana,
Badnaam kardega tumhen sara zamaana...

Ha ha ha

Thannk u so much Syednaami ji.. Waise sahi kaha aapne apne do lino se.. Winking


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #32 on: May 03, 2009, 09:28:08 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2009, 09:05:23 AM

Wah kya baat hai Azeem.. bahoot khoob!

Tujhe Badnaam kar kese aapata mujhko chain
Isliye Mefil mea tere saath khud ka naam lene aai hun

Main bhi tadapi rahi Dil hi Dil mea tere liye 'Azeem"
Kehna Chahti thi jo Tujhse ab tab Woh keh nahi paai Hun

Meri bhi rahi thi uss vakt Kuch majboori eh mere sanam
Issilye Aaj Bari mehfil se Fir se Mohabbat ka paigaam laai hun

NIce One Yaar, Achcha Reply Hai,.

Ab Kya Soch Kar Mera Saath Dene Aayi Ho,.
Guzra Waqt Kya Apne Saath Mein Laayi Ho,.

Us Waqt Kahaan Thi Mohabbat Tumhaari,.
Jab Thi Sakht Mujhe Zaroorat Tumhaari,.

Kehna Aasaan Hai Ke Bhool Jaao Raat Tanhaai Ki,.
Tum Hi Kaho Kya Kabhi Tum Ye Raat Tanha Bitaai Ho,.

Maine To Dekha Hain Ujaale Tumhaare Ghar Mein,.
Maloom Nahi "Sophi, Kitnon Ki Dil Tum Aur Jalaai Ho,.

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«Reply #33 on: May 03, 2009, 09:40:23 AM »

Wah wah ak se bad kar ak sher.. wah Azeem bahoot khoob.

Na socha Humne tumare siva kisi aur k baare mein
'Sophi' ne jab bhi liya sirf tera hi naam liya tha

Na karo aisi baat eh sanam , Dil jalta hai mera
Teri hi Katir Humne Har Zulmo ko seh liya tha

Sayad tume tho kabar bhi nahi, kis morr se Guzri hun
Tadpi hun raat bar, Judai ne teri hame tho mar diya tha

Na samaj sake tum uss vakt bhi mujhe Eh 'Azeem"
Aur aaj tume "Azeem" mefil mea Bewafa ka Naam diya tha


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #34 on: May 03, 2009, 09:55:02 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2009, 09:40:23 AM

Waah Ji Wah Kya Reply Mujhe Maara Hai, Maine Bewafa Kab Kaha,.

Khair Maine Bhi Ek Koshish Karta Hoon Jawaab Dene Ke lye,.

Maine Kabhi Tumhe Judaai Aur Tanhaai Ka Tohfa Nahi Diya,.
Maine Kabhi Tumhe, Mujhse Bichardne Ka Maukha Nahi Diya,.

Main Chahta Raha Tumhe Deewaanepan Se Bhi Zyada "Sophi,.
Ye Kya Keh Rahi Ho Ke Dil Mien Maine Tumhe Jagaah Nahi Diya,.

Har Dharkan Naam Tumhaara Hi Gungunaati Hai,.
Har Ahat Tumhaari Maujoodgi Ka Ehsaas Dilaati Hai,.

Main To Dhoondta Raha Zindagi Phar Tumhare Dil Mein Aane Ka Rasta,.
Aur Tumne "Sophi, Kabhi Mujhe Tumhare Dil Mein Ghusne Ka pata Nahi Diya,.

______________________________________________-Azeem-


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«Reply #35 on: May 03, 2009, 10:05:37 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 02, 2009, 06:46:38 AM

Mil raha hai pal pal dard mujhe
main bayan bhi ab kar nahi sakti hun

Tu bhi tho nahi hai saath mere ab
Isliye main na ro, na hass sakti hun

Kyun tadpa rahe hai sab log mujhe
Abtho logo se gila b nahi kar sakti hun

Admari ho chuki hun main tere pyar mein
Ab tho sirf tujhe yaad kar sakti hun

chali jaungi is jahan se bahoot hi jald
Kyun ab tere begair sans b nahi le sakti hun

keh dungi Alwida mein sanam sabse ak din
ansoon b sook gaye mere, ab ro b nahi sakti hun

~~DIVYA~~

bahoot khoob badi sadgi se dil ka dard likh diya aapne.....

rone se mera dard halka hota to
kahi marusthal nahi rehra


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«Reply #36 on: May 03, 2009, 10:08:25 AM »

kaya baat hai azeem ji kaya khoob likha.....


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syednaami

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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #37 on: May 03, 2009, 10:08:50 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2009, 09:23:47 AM

Ha ha ha

Thannk u so much Syednaami ji.. Waise sahi kaha aapne apne do lino se.. Winking

Bahut meherbani, aap ne do line men hi sab samajh liye, hehehe... Usual Smile


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«Reply #38 on: May 03, 2009, 10:12:59 AM »

Hmm. waise Tumne likha tha na.. "Kitno ka Dil tum aur jalai ho"
It sounds like Bewafa .. so isliye maine Bewafa use kiya..

Waise Bahoot hi khoob likha hai.

Pata kyun Pucte ho tum, Tum tho mere rag rag mein samaye ho
Dekhai na diya tume pyar meri azro mea, Kyun ab sawal pucte ho

Kesse kehti main tumse apne dil ki baat Mehboob 'Azeem"
Tumne na kabhi tume humpar barosa ,kyun ba sawal pucte ho

Kesi beetai thi maine raatein ,jab beech raah mujhe chod gaye the
Kyun nahi aaye gaye tum mujhe saath leke , kyun ab sawal pucte ho


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«Reply #39 on: May 03, 2009, 10:13:58 AM »

Quote from: vikas2210 on May 03, 2009, 10:05:37 AM

bahoot khoob badi sadgi se dil ka dard likh diya aapne.....

rone se mera dard halka hota to
kahi marusthal nahi rehra

Thank u so much Vikas..

Very God lines by U Usual Smile


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #40 on: May 03, 2009, 10:15:54 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2009, 10:12:59 AM

Wah Ji Kya Khoob Likha Hai Phirse, Great Yaar,.

Bewafaa Kaha To Buraa Maangaye,.
wafaa Ki Jisne Kabhi Roshni Na Jalaai,.

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«Reply #41 on: May 03, 2009, 10:20:53 AM »

Wah bahoot khoob!

Bewaafi ki hi nahi tho Buraa kyun main
Hum tho tere Ashiyaane ko roshan karne aaye the

Ban kar teri Zindgai mein Khushiyaan
Teri Shaam ko Apne maujudgai se rangeen karne aaye the

Ba tum tho root gaye yuhin bewajaah 'Azeem"
Hum tho tume apni mohabbat fir se yaad dilane aaye the


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«Reply #42 on: May 03, 2009, 10:23:05 AM »

thanks sophie

bahut accha thread ban gaya yeh.. bahut hi accha....


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Re: ~*~Alwida-2~*~

«Reply #43 on: May 03, 2009, 10:23:17 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2009, 10:20:53 AM

Roshan Ashiyaane Ko Karne Ke Bahaane Wo Ghar Jalaa Gaye,.
Ab Tohmat Unpar Main Lagaaoon Bhi To Kaise Lagaaoon,.

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«Reply #44 on: May 03, 2009, 10:35:46 AM »

Bas 'Azem" Bas aur na lagao hum par ya Ilzaam
Ab humse yea Dard ab aur saha nahi jata hai

Kesse haal se guzaar rahe hai hum, kaise bataye
Ab ak pal bhi humse tumare bina raha nahi jata hai

Bula do sab ,jo beet gaya, na jane kiska kasoor tha
Ab humse bhi Tumara bhi Ak Ansoon dekha nahi jata hai


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