Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on May 31, 2010, 08:12:11 AM

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Amanatein rishto ki, sambhaal ke rak_khi hai
Zindagi kaiee hisso me, sambhaal ke rak_khi hai

Kaza kar chuke hum, tera kaam aur bhi aasaa.N
Ek muddat hui rooh apni, jism se nikaal rak_khi hai

Uchaieeya tay karna, yeh kaam kaha mera
Pohachna ho to pochche, dua humne uchaal rak_khi hai

Din ke ujale roye, shehar ke aitbaar par
Har shaks ne hatho me, apne mashaal rak_khi hai

Kisko sahi kahe Ghayel, aur kisko kahe galat
Tarikh har kisi ne, apni bemisaal rak_khi hai

Sajid Ghayel


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Re: Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 08:14:21 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai


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Re: Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 08:30:13 AM »

Wah wah bahut hi khoob Sajid ji ,hamesha ki tarah bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent Hats off to you!


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Re: Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 09:53:49 AM »

Bahaut khoob Applause


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Re: Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 05:12:53 AM »

Kya kahein aapne to maano janta ki adaalat me kasam kha rakhi ho k jo likhenge achha likheng uske siwa kuch nahi likheng. Par hamesha ki tarah behad khoobsurat likha hai. Aur 2nd n 3rd sher to bahut kamaal k likhe hai.


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Re: Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 11:05:41 PM »

kya kehne sajid bhai.bahot hi umda hai aap ka kalaam .agar mei yeh likhoon ke aap ki ghazlein dil ko sokoon deti hain to aap kahinge k meine aap ke daad dene ke andaaz ko churaliye,, lekin haqiqat yehi hai..bahot qoob janab