Amanatein rishto ki.........( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on May 31, 2010, 08:12:11 AM
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Amanatein rishto ki, sambhaal ke rak_khi hai
Zindagi kaiee hisso me, sambhaal ke rak_khi hai

Kaza kar chuke hum, tera kaam aur bhi aasaa.N
Ek muddat hui rooh apni, jism se nikaal rak_khi hai

Uchaieeya tay karna, yeh kaam kaha mera
Pohachna ho to pochche, dua humne uchaal rak_khi hai

Din ke ujale roye, shehar ke aitbaar par
Har shaks ne hatho me, apne mashaal rak_khi hai

Kisko sahi kahe Ghayel, aur kisko kahe galat
Tarikh har kisi ne, apni bemisaal rak_khi hai

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 08:14:21 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 08:30:13 AM »
Wah wah bahut hi khoob Sajid ji ,hamesha ki tarah bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 09:53:49 AM »
Bahaut khoob Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 05:12:53 AM »

   Kya kahein aapne to maano janta ki adaalat me kasam kha rakhi ho k jo likhenge achha likheng uske siwa kuch nahi likheng. Giggle    Par hamesha ki tarah behad khoobsurat likha hai. Aur 2nd n 3rd sher to bahut kamaal k likhe hai. Applause Applause  
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 11:05:41 PM »
kya kehne sajid bhai.bahot hi umda hai aap ka kalaam .agar mei yeh likhoon ke aap ki ghazlein dil ko sokoon deti hain to aap kahinge k meine aap ke daad dene ke andaaz ko churaliye,, lekin haqiqat yehi hai..bahot qoob janab
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2010, 06:06:41 PM »
GUD ONE S_G Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2010, 06:57:17 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Badi meharbani Khwaish Saheb.....
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 09:45:08 PM »
Wah wah bahut hi khoob Sajid ji ,hamesha ki tarah bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot dear for always giving your valuable time to my work......
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