~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Hum main se kuch log shayad ateet main lautne ka sochte honge..Shayad kuch galtiyan kuch cheezein hai jinhe hum badalna chahte hai..Main ateet main laut kar bas woh lamehin dobara jeena chahta hoon..
Kal raat kisi kay khat dobara parre toh ankhein bheeg gayi..Bas ussi waqt dil ne chand alfaaz kehdiye jinhe kagaaz par utar raha hoon..

Ek aur baat kehna chahta hoon;

Ager aap iss waqt itne khushnaseeb hai kay apke pas koi khas shaks hai, toh har lamhe ko jee bhar kay jeeyein..Shukar mane Allah ka kay apke paas woh hai jo kayi logon kay paas nahin hai..
Aur yeh baat yaad rakhiyega kay ap bahaut zada khushnaseeb hai..Kuch logon kay paas sirf yaadein hai, yaadein dene wala woh shaks nahin..! tearyeyed

Woh tere khat parr kar ankhein bheeg gayi,
Woh guzre zamane yaad kar ankhein bheeg gayi..

Mehfilon main tanha mehsoos karna bhi ab ada hai meri,
Tera haath tha mere haath main kabhi; yeh soch ankhein bheeg gayi..

‘Khamosh’ puchta hai kay gulab ne sheeshe sa dil kaise torra,
Aj saath apne sirf apni parchayi dekh ankhein bheeg gayi..

Dil ka dard bayan karne kay liye kalam ne misalein saja di,
Kehna toh bas itna tha kay teri yaad main Zalim ankhein bheeg gayi..

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2010, 08:01:07 PM »

Raheem Sahab Aadaab!

janab aapki yeh koshish ke bhi khayaal aafrin hai... dilfareb ahsaas o khayaal per Daad Janab....

Humne kuch tarmeem ki hai gar aapko achcha lage to modify kar lijiye.... Thik nahi lage to mazharrat khwaaN hai...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez.....

Woh tere khat parr parr kar ankhein bheeg gayi,
Woh guzre zamane ko yaad kar ankhein bheeg gayi..

Mehfilon main tanha mehsoos karna bhi ab ada hai meri,
Tera haath tha haathoN main kabhi soch kar ankhein bheeg gayi..

‘Khamosh’ puchta hai kay gulab ne sheeshe sa dil kaise torra,
Aj saath apne apni parchayi dekh kar ankhein bheeg gayi..

Dil ka dard bayan karne kay liye kalam ne misalein saja di,
Kehna toh bas itna tujh ko yaad kar ankhein bheeg gayi..

~Rahim~

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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2010, 08:03:02 PM »

Shukriya Parwaaz Saheb..
Teh dil se shukriya.!


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2010, 04:14:46 AM »

rahim....
ek yaadon se saji kisi ki kami bayan karti hui ye peshkash...
sach me ye feel de gai k aaj jo lamhe hain use har lihaz se jii bhar k ji lo...
waise main yehi karne ki koshish karti hun...ab se aur jyada koshish karungi.....
shukriya bhai ek bht pyari nazm k liye


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2010, 06:51:59 AM »

Shukriya Anamika di pasand karne kay liye..Haan jee bhar kay jee lena chahiye..Lamhe jo guzar jate hai aur wapis nahin ate, bahaut dard dete hai..Khubsoorat yaadein bhi rula deti hai..!
Teh dil se shukriya.!


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 06:55:16 AM »

Aakhri sher To lajawaab hai Bhai Rahim!!!!

Huemsha Ki tarah bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

Humesha Khush Raho


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2010, 07:15:29 PM »

Shukriya Khwaish Dost..
Khush rahiye!


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 02:18:53 AM »

wah dost wah.. kya khoob likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob... dard me dooba hua hai ek ek shabd.. aise poems ko padha nahi feel kiya jaata hai.. jo ki kiya maine... aur chhoo gayi hamaare dil ko... sach dost bahut hi pyaari kavita hai ye....

Applause

hum dard me tadapkar aansoo bahaate hain,
aur wo hamaare aansuon pe wah wah kehte hain....

wah dost... wah... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 07:09:18 PM »

Kapil Dost...dil khush kardia apne..apne feel kiya aur apke dil ko choo gayi toh is'se zada kya chahiye kisi likhne wale ko..bahaut shukriya..

Apne do lines main bahaut kuch kehdiya..! Applause


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 10:35:26 PM »

Bahut hi behetreen nazm hai rahiim ji..bahut khoob...


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Re: ~Ankhein bheeg gayi~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 03:49:20 AM »

Shukriya Geet jee.!


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