ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa:Shayri-E-Dard

sunildehgawani

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[[[ TO FIR NA AANA ]]]

janaza muhabbat ka zamane ko dikhne ke liye aa
meri rukhsat ka akhiri dastur nibhane ke liye aa
ye wada hum aaj ke baad tujhe fir na kabhi dekhenge
chhalakti ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aaa

yakin ho jaye tujhe bhi ki mai bewafa to nahi
tu ek baar mujhe aur aajmaane ke liye aa

bahi dohra ke baat apni mujhse door chale jaane ki
ek baar mera dil aur dukhaane ke liye aa
gulshan to mere angan ka ab tutkar bikhar jayega
khilte foolon ki tarah ek baar muskurane ke liya aa

mai tod laya hoon chand tare tujhe manane ke liye
tu pahile ki tarah ek baar aur rooth jane ke liye aa


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ParwaaZ

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Re: ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa

«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2011, 05:56:31 PM »

Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Janab badi khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Sabhi khayaal
behad pur asar lafzoN meiN adaa kiye hai aapne..

Hume kalaam ke sabhi ashar behad khoob lage..
Tah e dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: sunildehgawani on September 29, 2011, 12:05:27 PM

[[[ TO FIR NA AANA ]]]

janaza muhabbat ka zamane ko dikhne ke liye aa
meri rukhsat ka akhiri dastur nibhane ke liye aa

Bahut khoob janab kafi achcha matla kaha hai daad..

ye wada hum aaj ke baad tujhe fir na kabhi dekhenge
chhalakti ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aaa

Yeh sher bahut khoob kaha janab .. daad
Humare zaheN meiN aik khayaal aaya.. gar chalakti ki jagaaH " Khushk"
AnkheN kahe to kaisa raheNga.. sochiyeNga.. gar sher meiN gehrai bani
to apnaiye nahi to aapka sher bhi kalaam hai daad ..

yakin ho jaye tujhe bhi ki mai bewafa to nahi
tu ek baar mujhe aur aajmaane ke liye aa

Waah janab bahut khoob daad

bahi dohra ke baat apni mujhse door chale jaane ki
ek baar mera dil aur dukhaane ke liye aa

Bahut khoob janab sani misre ko achcha adaa kiya hai..

gulshan to mere angan ka ab tutkar bikhar jayega
khilte foolon ki tarah ek baar muskurane ke liya aa

Khayaal behad khoob hai janab.. sher meiN jyada khilaa nahi..
koi aur dusri surat meiN soch kar adaa kar lijiye.. Aik surat humare zaheN se ...

KahiN Khiza cha na jaye mere gulshaan e dil meiN
Meri bebasi par sahi muskuraane ke liye aa

mai tod laya hoon chand tare tujhe manane ke liye
tu pahile ki tarah ek baar aur rooth jane ke liye aa

Waah waah bahut khoob janab .. achach sher kaha daad ...


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sunildehgawani

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Re: ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa

«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2011, 12:58:00 PM »

parwaj ji shukriya.,,,,,jo words apne sugesstion kiye hain,,,bakai char chand laga rahe hain aur ahsason ki khubsurti doguni ho gayi hai,,,,,kisi ne sach hi kaha hai,,,seniors are always right coz,they have passed from there where u stand.....absolutly right ,,,khuda haif parwaj ji ..

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 29, 2011, 05:56:31 PM


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mkv

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Re: ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa

«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2011, 07:38:28 AM »

vah sunil bhai
kuch share karna chahta hu

Hamse barbadi ka jasn manaya na jayega
humse teri arthi ka bojh uthaya na jayega
marna hai to kahi aur jakar mar
humse teri mayyam ko dafnaya na jayega


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mkv

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Re: ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa

«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 07:40:32 AM »

parwaaz bhai
mai ek bar aur sunil ki taraf se shukriya ada karta hu.
apki comments pad ke mujhe bahut kuch seekhne ko mila.


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sunildehgawani

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Re: ankhon ki akhiri pias bujhane ke liye aa

«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2011, 06:50:05 AM »

thnks mkv ,,,,unique creation ,,,,,,
i have few words ,,,pls let me allow to express
jo utahyega bojh arthi ka shayad woh tu nahi
jo jashn manayega mere marne ka shayad woh tu nahi
tika hai mere khuwabon ka marrassim jis par
koi sahjada aur hai shayad woh tu nahi
jab baqt aayega rukhshat ka to kandha lagayega
woh bheed mai se koi ek hai shayad woh tu nahi

Quote from: mkv on October 01, 2011, 07:40:32 AM

parwaaz bhai
mai ek bar aur sunil ki taraf se shukriya ada karta hu.
apki comments pad ke mujhe bahut kuch seekhne ko mila.


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