- Ansoon -

by Meena on July 27, 2005, 04:05:01 PM
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vikas2210
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«Reply #15 on: July 28, 2005, 04:24:16 AM »
WOW  meena ji kaya baat hai bahuut hi accha lkha hai.
likha to humtum waheed nidhi ne bhi kamal ka hai.

woh puchte hai aankho se paani kyon bahate ho
hum kahte hai yeh paani nahi aansu hai
dil ke lagi ko bujhane ko aate hai

woh bolte hai aag ko to paani bhujhata hai
hum bole dil ki lagi mai paani aag lagata hai.

wok kahte hai aansun na laya karo aankho mai
hume kaha to bas jaao no bahaon mai.
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Meena
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«Reply #16 on: July 28, 2005, 04:21:36 PM »
shukriya ishu...aryaan ji....aur vikas ji.....aap dono ne bohot acha likha hai!!!!

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«Reply #17 on: July 28, 2005, 04:49:07 PM »
thanx isha,aryaan and vikas,bohat khoob aryaan and vikas,excellent work Usual Smile .
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«Reply #18 on: July 28, 2005, 10:57:51 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
dosto... dard aur ansowon ka rishta kuch ajeeb sa hai...issi ansowon pe maine ek poem likhi... :D

Dard ke garv me pal rahe te yeh ashk mere,
Par ankhon ki dehelez se humne inhe kabhi milaya hi nahin,

Jab raha nahin gaya gunamie me to bahar ki aur aye,
Rasta bhi unone chuna woh jo humne kabhi chaha hi nahin,

Mere tabassum se lar kar mer i ankhon me baith gaye,
Tak gaye phir jab hum, phir humne unko chupaya hi nahin,

Ek ek karke behene lage woh ankhon se mere,
Rokhna chahate ta unhe, jinhe humne kabhi bulaya hi nahin,

Chupke se hata diya unhe anpne galon se, ke koi dekh na le,
Phir se hum muskurane lage, jaise hume kisi ne kabhi rulaya hi nahin,

Kahi inhe bhi cheen na le yeh duniya wale humse,
Tanha hojayenge hum inke bina, jo kisi aur ka saath humne kabhi paya hi nahin!


very beautifull poem Meena sis
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2005, 01:38:21 PM »
thanxxxxxx nikki sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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