~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Kabhi kabhi duniya se, zindagi se khafa khafa mehsoos karta hoon..
Ek shikayat jaise ho mann main iss duniya kay tarikon se..
Aj aisa hi mehsoos kar raha hoon mager pata nahin kitna acha iss
par likh paya..

Qadeer sahab ki ek ghazal thi jiss main end word 'sahib' tha..
Bas issi ko use kar raha hoon apni iss nazm main..

Duniya se koi kat’ta gaya sahib,
Khud se hi shayad woh bhagta raha sahib..

Toofan zindagi kay sabko hila dete hai,
Yeh toh toofanon se bikharta gaya sahib..

Woh jisse ek pal tanha na chorra maine,
Woh mere janaze main shamil tak na hua sahib..

Pagalon jaisa jisse chaha maine iss zindagi main,
Mujhe meri haathon ki lakeeron main woh na dikha sahib..

Daman jiske bhar diya maine khushion se yaaron,
Ansuon kay siva usne mujhe diya hi kya sahib..

Dil rooth sa gaya hai phir bhi jeeta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Dard seh kar bhi muskurahat sajata raha sahib..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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ParwaaZ

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 08:18:55 PM »

Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Kafi achche ahsaas o khayal bayaaN kiye hai..
Ashaar bhi achche rahe...

Daad kabool kijiye.....

Koshish jaari rakhiye....
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 10:10:53 PM »

Shukriya Parwaaz jee aur Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye..!


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manjum

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2011, 03:56:30 AM »

wah wah .....

kya dard hai aapki har line main... dil ko chhu lia... sahib.....

wo jise ek pal...... wali line bahut khub hain...

daad kubul karen


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2011, 06:35:07 AM »

waaaaaah kya baat hai Rahim jee!Bahut achchhe!!!


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KOYAL46

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2011, 06:57:09 AM »

Good work Rahim-bhai.... Applause


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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2011, 07:04:52 AM »

wah Rahim sahib wah--
aap ki yahi saadgi bhari sachhai likhne ki aadat pr
hum qurbaan hue jaate hai.
as usual mast.
khus rahiye
sukriya


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 09:40:37 AM »

Quote from: manjum on January 08, 2011, 03:56:30 AM

wah wah .....

kya dard hai aapki har line main... dil ko chhu lia... sahib.....

wo jise ek pal...... wali line bahut khub hain...

daad kubul karen

Shukriya Manjum jee..!
Khush rahiye..!


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 09:48:46 AM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on January 08, 2011, 06:35:07 AM

waaaaaah kya baat hai Rahim jee!Bahut achchhe!!!

Teh dil se shukriya Mamta jee..
Khush rahiye..!


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 09:52:57 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 08, 2011, 06:57:09 AM

Good work Rahim-bhai.... Applause

Shukriya Koyal di..
Khush rahiye..!


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2011, 09:58:11 AM »

Quote from: killbill on January 08, 2011, 07:04:52 AM

wah Rahim sahib wah--
aap ki yahi saadgi bhari sachhai likhne ki aadat pr
hum qurbaan hue jaate hai.
as usual mast.
khus rahiye
sukriya

Arey shukriya shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2011, 11:16:55 AM »

Wah Mere Bhai.. KYa baat hai.. Dil-e-Haal Bakhoobi Lafzon me utaara hai.. Aakhiri Jumla sab par Bhari tha.. bahut Umda Peshkash Hai Dost.. Bahut Khoooooooob..!!!

Waise bhi aap mere Pasand-Deeda Shayaron me se Hain.. aur yeh Poem Mujhe Bahut Pasand aaye.. Daad Kuboool karen dil se..

**~** Mann **~**


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2011, 07:07:50 PM »

Teh teh dil ki gehrayi se shukriya Vikas bhaijan..
Apka reply dekh, dil hamesha khush hojata hai..
Regular raha karo bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2011, 08:54:38 AM »

Bahut Khub Rahim Ji


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Ansuon kay siva diya kya Sahib ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2011, 06:33:16 PM »

Teh dil se shukriya Rishi jee..
Khush rahiye..!


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