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Zindagi ne kayi naye chehre har roz dikhaye the
ismein zyada humne udaasi k lamhe hi bitaye the
ek pal khushi phir humesha tanhai mein rona tha
Jawani k din humne mohobbat-e-dard mein bitaye the
Tumne to ki hogi sirf yun dil lagi khabi kisi gair se
Hum to Apno ki nafrat ke sataye the
Reza reza dil hua tha aur asuon ki barsaat hui
Ik shaam jhonke jab unki bewafai k paigam laye the
Tuta hua dil bhi humne rakha tha pairon mein unke
Aj bhi yaad hai hume wo pal bebasi ka
Jab wo un tukdon ko renk kar mushkuraye the
Ao Suno meri zindagi mein kaise kaise mausam aye the
Humse kaha tha usne karlo shikwa kal waqt mile na mile
Sach hoga khabi yeh aise khyal bhi khabi na aye the
Humne muthi mein bandi thi yaadein jeene k liye
Waqt ki leher mein us khushi ko bhi baha kar aye the
Le chalo hume aye maut k farishton is duniya se
Jawani mein humne isi dua ki tabdili ko haath uthaye the
Mohobbat na karna k yehi hai meri halaat ki waje
Isi galti mein dil tham humne har shaam ansun bahaye the
~Roshni~
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2007, 09:43:08 PM » |
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Roshu
Excellent ! Bahut khoob !
Aaj kal har taraf shayari barsa rahi ho !
Keep going !
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2007, 04:10:25 AM » |
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e dost na baha tu aasu or na ho tu udaas,
kabhi to hogi tere jiwaan mai bhi yeh saawan ki barsaat,
kayo tu dukhi hota hai jab hamare jese dost hai tere saath,
are ek hi to dost rutha hai, jindagi jine ke shik le soo bahane or sahi.
Love/Prem
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2007, 06:23:32 AM » |
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bahut sundar Roshni ji.. really like these lines: Reza reza dil hua tha aur asuon ki barsaat hui Ik shaam jhonke jab unki bewafai k paigam laye the Zindagi ne kayi naye chehre har roz dikhaye the
ismein zyada humne udaasi k lamhe hi bitaye the
ek pal khushi phir humesha tanhai mein rona tha
Jawani k din humne mohobbat-e-dard mein bitaye the
Tumne to ki hogi sirf yun dil lagi khabi kisi gair se
Hum to Apno ki nafrat ke sataye the
Reza reza dil hua tha aur asuon ki barsaat hui
Ik shaam jhonke jab unki bewafai k paigam laye the
Tuta hua dil bhi humne rakha tha pairon mein unke
Aj bhi yaad hai hume wo pal bebasi ka
Jab wo un tukdon ko renk kar mushkuraye the
Ao Suno meri zindagi mein kaise kaise mausam aye the
Humse kaha tha usne karlo shikwa kal waqt mile na mile
Sach hoga khabi yeh aise khyal bhi khabi na aye the
Humne muthi mein bandi thi yaadein jeene k liye
Waqt ki leher mein us khushi ko bhi baha kar aye the
Le chalo hume aye maut k farishton is duniya se
Jawani mein humne isi dua ki tabdili ko haath uthaye the
Mohobbat na karna k yehi hai meri halaat ki waje
Isi galti mein dil tham humne har shaam ansun bahaye the
~Roshni~
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2007, 10:25:21 AM » |
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g8 majid
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2007, 10:31:01 AM » |
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Bahut achche !
Good reply to Roshu !
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2007, 11:39:30 AM » |
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Lage Raho........
Gham Andhera Hai! Roshni! kya Hai !!
Mujh Se Mat Poocho Zindagi Kya Hai !!
Ek Parbat Hai Mera Dil..e..Dost
Phir Bhi Aankhon Main Ye Nami Kya Hai !!
Kk Lamha Bhi Ek Sadi Sa Lagta Hai
Gar Na Maloom Ho Khushi Kya Hai
Rasme Duniya Hai So Nibhate chalein
Fir Mat Soche Ye Shiqwe Gile Kya Hain !!
maine likhi hai Ye Nazm Aahon Se
Mujhe Nahi Pata Ye Shayeri Kya Hai.!!
aye haye kya baat hai jawab dungi sabar |
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2007, 04:11:39 PM » |
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Majid sahab apka reply  Koi do pal is dard se chutkara dila do hume
Akele jiye hai sadiyon se koi behla do hume
Rang kya hai kya hoti hai Noor e Zindagi
Ek pal k liye hi wo ehsaas se mila do hume
Hum gham ke maare hai Chaht k sataye hai
Padjad ka mausam hatakar koi phool sa khila do hume
Umar bhar Jaagi hain yeh ankhein kisi k intezar mein
Koi akar ab humesha k liye chain se sulaa do hume
Zakhm hare the to koi na aya Marham lagane ko
Lillah ab maut k liye do ghunt zeher hi pila do hume
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2007, 04:28:17 PM » |
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Zindagi ne kayi naye chehre har roz dikhaye the
ismein zyada humne udaasi k lamhe hi bitaye the
ek pal khushi phir humesha tanhai mein rona tha
Jawani k din humne mohobbat-e-dard mein bitaye the
Tumne to ki hogi sirf yun dil lagi khabi kisi gair se
Hum to Apno ki nafrat ke sataye the
Reza reza dil hua tha aur asuon ki barsaat hui
Ik shaam jhonke jab unki bewafai k paigam laye the
Tuta hua dil bhi humne rakha tha pairon mein unke
Aj bhi yaad hai hume wo pal bebasi ka
Jab wo un tukdon ko renk kar mushkuraye the
Ao Suno meri zindagi mein kaise kaise mausam aye the
Humse kaha tha usne karlo shikwa kal waqt mile na mile
Sach hoga khabi yeh aise khyal bhi khabi na aye the
Humne muthi mein bandi thi yaadein jeene k liye
Waqt ki leher mein us khushi ko bhi baha kar aye the
Le chalo hume aye maut k farishton is duniya se
Jawani mein humne isi dua ki tabdili ko haath uthaye the
Mohobbat na karna k yehi hai meri halaat ki waje
Isi galti mein dil tham humne har shaam ansun bahaye the
~Roshni~
BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB.DIL SE LIKHA HAI ROSHNI AAPNE..BAHUT KHOOB |
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2007, 04:29:40 PM » |
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Lage Raho........
Gham Andhera Hai! Roshni! kya Hai !!
Mujh Se Mat Poocho Zindagi Kya Hai !!
Ek Parbat Hai Mera Dil..e..Dost
Phir Bhi Aankhon Main Ye Nami Kya Hai !!
Kk Lamha Bhi Ek Sadi Sa Lagta Hai
Gar Na Maloom Ho Khushi Kya Hai
Rasme Duniya Hai So Nibhate chalein
Fir Mat Soche Ye Shiqwe Gile Kya Hain !!
maine likhi hai Ye Nazm Aahon Se
Mujhe Nahi Pata Ye Shayeri Kya Hai.!!
BAHUT KHOOB MAJID BHAI... |
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2007, 07:01:42 PM » |
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thanks a lot khwaish ji par aap bhi kuch likhte to sikhne ka mauka milta
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«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2007, 11:57:37 AM » |
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oye monkey merko thx kyu nai bola be 
Jalti reyt par hum unko pane ko chalte rahe
Har zakm si kar phir bhi mushkurate rahe
tu kya jaane kitna chupte hai tute dil k tukde
Phir bhi chun kar unhe tujhse hi tudwate rahe
Lechal hawa wahan jahan sitam dhame ki rasm na ho
Hum iltaja har lamha hawaon se bhi karte rahe
sannata mere kamre ka meri dastan sunata hai
Apna kamra bhi bewafa hua teri yad bar bar dilate rahe
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2007, 10:02:21 AM » |
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Hello Roshni Ji, Aap ki Poety "Ao sunaon tumhe apni zindagi ki dastann" bahot acchi hai... very nice keep going
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2007, 05:03:35 PM » |
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Roshni & Majid you both are rocking.... Very good...
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2007, 07:53:13 PM » |
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thanks anu ji and rojaaaaaaaaaaaa
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