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LABON PE KABHI JHOOTE FASAANE NAHEE AATE
MERI AANKHON KO ASHQ CHUPAANE NAHEE AATE
RAIT BAS GAYEE HAI MERRI AANKH KE KAASHAANE ME
PALAKON PE AB SAPANE SUHAANE NAHEE AATE
HO KITANI HI LAMBI RAAT SUBAH HO HI JATI HAI
UMMEEDON KE CHIRAAG HUMKO BUJHANE NAHEEN AATE
KYUNKAR MUJHE TU KHOUF DIKHATI HAI AY QAZA
ZINDAGI MUJHKO JEENE KE BAHANE NAHEE AATE
APANI YAADON KA HI JASHN MANA LE 'MAMTA'
SUNA HAI LOUT KAR GUZARE ZAMAANE NAHEEN AATE
MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 08:45:21 AM » |
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai Mamta Ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 08:47:15 AM » |
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RAJESHJEE!
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 09:47:16 AM » |
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LABON PE KABHI JHOOTE FASAANE NAHEE AATE
MERI AANKHON KO ASHQ CHUPAANE NAHEE AATE
RAIT BAS GAYEE HAI MERRI AANKH KE KAASHAANE ME
PALAKON PE AB SAPANE SUHAANE NAHEE AATE
HO KITANI HI LAMBI RAAT SUBAH HO HI JATI HAI
UMMEEDON KE CHIRAAG HUMKO BUJHANE NAHEEN AATE
KYUNKAR MUJHE TU KHOUF DIKHATI HAI AY QAZA
ZINDAGI MUJHKO JEENE KE BAHANE NAHEE AATE
APANI YAADON KA HI JASHN MANA LE 'MAMTA'
SUNA HAI LOUT KAR GUZARE ZAMAANE NAHEEN AATE
MAMTA BAJPAI
nice one mamta ji aap ki ye pesh kash mere dil me utar gayi aur ek halchal kar gayi mujhe achi lagi aap ki ye rachna dil se daaaaddddddddddd |
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 05:11:13 PM » |
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BEHAD SHUKRIYA RAHI JEE!
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2010, 05:32:24 PM » |
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab O Tasleem
Behad umdaa Khayaal aur gehrai hai aapki is kalaam meiN
Dil se daad... Kafi achchi shayri ka muzahera kiya hai
aapne....... Sabhi sher apne aap meiN behad khoob hai..
Aise hi likhati rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....
Dost mere ab mujhko bulaane nahi aate
Hume bhi kisse naye sunaane nahi aate
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2010, 06:42:40 AM » |
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PARWAAZ JEE !KALAAM KO APNA QEEMATI WAQT DENE KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA.....AAP NE JO LIKHA HAI, WOH MERE LIKHE SE KAHEEN ZYAADA ASARDAR HAI....... BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAP NE .....MERI OR SE AAP KE IS EK SHER PAR DHERON DAAD......
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 08:41:33 AM » |
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Humesha Ki tarah lajawaab!!!
bahut bahut Khoob Likha Hai Mamtaji Aapne.. 
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 08:57:06 AM » |
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bahut bahut dhanyawaad Khwaish jee!hamesha kee tarah aap ki housla afzai bhi aajtak raah-e-shairi me mere saath hai.aage bhi aap ki nazar-e-inaayat ki muntazir.............
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 09:03:34 AM » |
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LABON PE KABHI JHOOTE FASAANE NAHEE AATE
MERI AANKHON KO ASHQ CHUPAANE NAHEE AATE
RAIT BAS GAYEE HAI MERRI AANKH KE KAASHAANE ME
PALAKON PE AB SAPANE SUHAANE NAHEE AATE
HO KITANI HI LAMBI RAAT SUBAH HO HI JATI HAI
UMMEEDON KE CHIRAAG HUMKO BUJHANE NAHEEN AATE
KYUNKAR MUJHE TU KHOUF DIKHATI HAI AY QAZA
ZINDAGI MUJHKO JEENE KE BAHANE NAHEE AATE
APANI YAADON KA HI JASHN MANA LE 'MAMTA'
SUNA HAI LOUT KAR GUZARE ZAMAANE NAHEEN AATE
MAMTA BAJPAI
bahut umda mamta ji...very nice ...!! |
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 05:13:45 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Marhoom Bahayaat jee!
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 05:16:23 AM » |
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PYAARI KUHOO,
DHER SARA PYAAR,
HUMAARI SARAHANA KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA...TUM NE JO LIKHA HAI USI SILSILE ME MERI GAZAL KO EK OR SHER MIL GAYA .......
VAJOOD DARIYAA KA BAHTE HUE PAANI SE HAI
ROK KAR RAWANEE MUJHE BANDH BANANE NAHI AATE
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2010, 04:31:55 PM » |
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Dher-saara pyaar aapko bhi Mamta-di...... Bahut mast sher bana hai di............  Shaan meri neel-gagan me udne se hai......
Ruk kar Ghosle banana mujhe nahi aata.......
PYAARI KUHOO,
DHER SARA PYAAR,
HUMAARI SARAHANA KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA...TUM NE JO LIKHA HAI USI SILSILE ME MERI GAZAL KO EK OR SHER MIL GAYA .......
VAJOOD DARIYAA KA BAHTE HUE PAANI SE HAI
ROK KAR RAWANEE MUJHE BANDH BANANE NAHI AATE
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2010, 04:56:15 PM » |
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behad khubsurat gazal mamta ji....har sher kaabile tareef hai aapka...
koyal ji aapne jo last sher kaha hai use dil me utaar lo...
bas usi se hausla mil jayega jine ka
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