Apna Begana

by Meena on April 09, 2005, 08:09:23 AM
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Meena
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Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!
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dhadkan
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2005, 08:19:45 AM »
wah wah meenaji bahdiya kiha hai.........
Kitna dard hai aapki baaton me
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2005, 08:23:29 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!


wow  wow  wow  ................  excellent..........   superbbbbbbbbbbbbb.......ur  r  always.............cool...............
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2005, 08:24:50 AM »
thank u dhadkan aur waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2005, 04:52:40 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!


Meena ji

Jis tahrah se Apney lafzzo ka istemaal ker ke yeh kallam likha hai ... wakie mein kabiley tariif hai......  'teh dil se Daad kabool kijiye .... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2005, 04:58:15 PM »
wah meena ji................
inhi gajalo k liye hi to kaan taras gaye the...........................
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2005, 05:02:22 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!


excellent words and everything in this poem is A+ :D
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2005, 05:19:08 PM »
shukriya hum tum ji, pandit ji aur nidhi kuddiye!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for liking my poems!!!!!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2005, 05:20:50 PM »
Good job Meenaji ...
Its a suberb and fantastic one ...
Keep going ...
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2005, 05:21:56 PM »
shukriya ji ....shukriya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2005, 05:27:26 PM »
You are most welcome Meenaji ...
Keep writing superb posts like this one ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2005, 12:01:30 AM »
Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!! Wah Wah..Bohat hi khoob Meena... kamaal ka likhti hain aap bhi......Beautiful!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2005, 10:27:53 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!


Its just beautiful!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2005, 01:37:25 PM »
shukriya aryaan ji aur talat sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2005, 01:02:54 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!



bahut badiya meena ji

"Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai"

ye line to bahut hi badiya hai
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