Apna Begana

by Meena on April 09, 2005, 08:09:23 AM

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Meena

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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2005, 01:08:36 PM »

thank u rohit ji...apko meri poem pasand ayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #16 on: June 26, 2005, 01:12:38 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

thank you rohit ji...apko meri poem pasand ayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

Meena ji aapki poem jab hai hi itni badiya to pasand naa aane ka to sawal hi nahi hota.


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Meena

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«Reply #17 on: June 26, 2005, 01:15:13 PM »

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thank you rohit ji...apko meri poem pasand ayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

Meena ji aapki poem jab hai hi itni badiya to pasand naa aane ka to sawal hi nahi hota.

thank u ji, bas ek koshish hoti hai ke kuch jazbaat pesh karon...warna mai to kuch bhi nahin. sab aap logo se yaha sikha hai!! :D


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«Reply #18 on: June 26, 2005, 01:17:43 PM »

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thank you rohit ji...apko meri poem pasand ayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

Meena ji aapki poem jab hai hi itni badiya to pasand naa aane ka to sawal hi nahi hota.

thank you ji, bas ek koshish hoti hai ke kuch jazbaat pesh karon...warna mai to kuch bhi nahin. sab aap logo se yaha sikha hai!! :D

Meena ji phir to hum chahenge kii aap yun hi koshish karti rahein aur hume isi tarah yoindia par achhi achhi poem post karti rahein


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«Reply #19 on: June 26, 2005, 01:23:08 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Aye Khuda yeh kaisi hai teri Khudayi,
Jisse hum apna samajhte hai aaj woh hi hum se begana hai,

Kabhi ek pal bhi uske bin guzara na tha,
Aab tamam umar dil ko akhele jeena sikhana hai,

Uss se wafa ke badle mila bhi to dil pe ek zakhm mila,
Us ki nishani ko zindaga rakhne ke liye usse sailab-e-ashk pilana hai,

Ladte rahe sada Khuda se uske saath ki khatir,
Aaj haar man kar, Khuda ki taqdeer ko jeetana hai,

Rooh to kab ka dam tood gayi, ek bewafa ke gum me,
Aab to bas is jism ko maut se milwana hai!!

Meena ji aapne bahut khoob likha hai.................


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Meena

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«Reply #20 on: June 26, 2005, 04:00:07 PM »

zaroor rohit ji!!!

thank u nikki kuddiye!!!!!!!!!!!! for liking my poems!! :D


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nikki

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«Reply #21 on: June 26, 2005, 04:01:15 PM »

welcum sis.................................tussi likhde hi bahut wadhiya ho...................


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Meena

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«Reply #22 on: June 26, 2005, 04:26:04 PM »

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welcum sis.................................tussi likhde hi bahut wadhiya ho...................

lol nikki, tum bhi punajbi vich gal karne lagi :D shukriyaji shukriya! :D


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Shweta_v7

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«Reply #23 on: June 26, 2005, 04:37:23 PM »

Wah wah kuriyee kee gaal hai, bahut khub likhaa hai tuseee...


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Meena

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«Reply #24 on: June 26, 2005, 04:48:55 PM »

lol shukriya kuddiye....meri poem padne kel iye aur pasand karne ke liye!! :D


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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2005, 04:52:27 PM »

yahan to total punjaabi chal rahi hai :oops: :oops: lol.

"Chalna hai aaj mujhe akele hi un raaston pe,
jinpe kabhi tere saath ka sapna sajoya thha,
sapna thha wo,tootna thha,so toot gaya,
khoya hai sab kuch,kuch na maine paaya thha."


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«Reply #26 on: June 26, 2005, 04:59:01 PM »

nidhi kuddiye i just love ur poems!!!!!

lut liya mera sab kuch, kuch aise woh sapne te,
gair hogaye ek pal me, jo mere apne te!!!


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«Reply #27 on: June 26, 2005, 05:02:02 PM »

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nidhi kuddiye i just love ur poems!!!!!

lut liya mera sab kuch, kuch aise woh sapne te,
gair hogaye ek pal me, jo mere apne te!!!

wow meena sis,i love urs :hug:

"toote huye ye sapne chubhte hain dil me,
phir bhi inko dil se nikaal ke na phenka maine,
main jaanti hun ye kabhi nahi honge poore,
phir bhi sambhaal ke inki isliye rakha hai,
kyonki ye dard bhari hi sahi,par teri yaadon se hain jude."


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nikki

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«Reply #28 on: June 26, 2005, 05:10:28 PM »

too gud both of u sis.....

aji sapne to toot jaya karte hain
magar woh juda hokar bhi sapno mein humse milne aya karte hain

kaise main apni neendon ko samjhaon
saari-2 raat main so na paon
yeh kambakht bhi saath nahi deti
haqikat mein na sahi,
sapno mein bhi milne nahi deti