-----/// Apnaa makaan dhundte hain ///----- Hriday

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jaane  kyaa  cheez   hum ho ke pareshaan  dhundte hain
ret  pe  jaane  kis  ke  pairon ke   nishaan  dhundte hain

kuch  to  khoyaa  hai  humne magar kyaa  maaloom nahi
bheed mein  hum  aksar apni hi  pehchaan dhundte hain

band lifaafe mein  khat  daal ke ghumte hain hum  aksar
pahuchaane  ke  liye  ab  apnaa hi makaan dhundte hain

hamaare chehre par se woh shaayad gum hai ho chukaa
bachchon  ke  chehron  par hum muskaan dhundte hain

bahut  bheed  hai  yahaan, ab  mushkil  hai  saans lenaa
udne ke  liye  ab  khulaa  saa  ek  aasmaan dhundte hain

jis ko  dekhaa nahi woh kyaa  samajh  paayegaa humein
hum ko samajh sake bas  ek  aisaa  insaan dhundte hain

ho  koi   aisaa   jis  ko  hum jaise  se mohabbat ho jaaye
ek  aisaa  shaqs yahaan  to kabhi wahaan  dhundte hain

itnaa  toote  hain  hum ki ab  dard  hotaa hai jeene mein
jahaan  koi  dil  naa  tode  ek  aisaa jahaan dhundte hain

chain miltaa  nahi  kahin humein  dard ke samundar mein
raahat ke  liye hum  aajkal  bas shamshaan dhundte hain


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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 01:36:04 AM »
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waah waah waah hriday jee apki ye gazal to bas kehar hi dhaa gayi..
umda laajawab behatareen jo bhi kahun kam hoga..dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 01:44:46 AM »
Superlike Hriday ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 04:03:39 AM »
Nice One Hridayji.
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 08:43:01 AM »
wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2013, 08:44:59 AM »
ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2013, 09:51:45 AM »
waah waah........bahut khoob............
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2013, 12:56:19 PM »
bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 01:59:53 PM »
kya baat hai,,, padh kar zubaan aur aqhal kahne lagi ke ab kin alfaaz se tareef karoge???

jis ko  dekhaa nahi woh kyaa  samajh  paayegaa humein
hum ko samajh sake bas  ek  aisaa  insaan dhundte hain

ho  koi   aisaa   jis  ko  hum jaise  se mohabbat ho jaaye
ek  aisaa  shaqs yahaan  to kabhi wahaan  dhundte hain

itnaa  toote  hain  hum ki ab  dard  hotaa hai jeene mein
jahaan  koi  dil  naa  tode  ek  aisaa jahaan dhundte hain

chain miltaa  nahi  kahin humein  dard ke samundar mein
raahat ke  liye hum  aajkal  bas shamshaan dhundte hain

tareef se baala, umda aur aala - waaah hi waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2013, 06:39:07 PM »
क्या बात है...ह्रदय जी....बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....लाज़वाब ......

hamaare chehre par se woh shaayad gum hai ho chukaa
bachchon  ke  chehron  par hum muskaan dhundte hain

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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2013, 07:03:25 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 28, 2013, 11:36:24 PM


jaane  kyaa  cheez   hum ho ke pareshaan  dhundte hain
ret  pe  jaane  kis  ke  pairon ke   nishaan  dhundte hain

kuch  to  khoyaa  hai  humne magar kyaa  maaloom nahi
bheed mein  hum  aksar apni hi  pehchaan dhundte hain

band lifaafe mein  khat  daal ke ghumte hain hum  aksar
pahuchaane  ke  liye  ab  apnaa hi makaan dhundte hain

hamaare chehre par se woh shaayad gum hai ho chukaa
bachchon  ke  chehron  par hum muskaan dhundte hain

bahut  bheed  hai  yahaan, ab  mushkil  hai  saans lenaa
udne ke  liye  ab  khulaa  saa  ek  aasmaan dhundte hain

jis ko  dekhaa nahi woh kyaa  samajh  paayegaa humein
hum ko samajh sake bas  ek  aisaa  insaan dhundte hain

ho  koi   aisaa   jis  ko  hum jaise  se mohabbat ho jaaye
ek  aisaa  shaqs yahaan  to kabhi wahaan  dhundte hain

itnaa  toote  hain  hum ki ab  dard  hotaa hai jeene mein
jahaan  koi  dil  naa  tode  ek  aisaa jahaan dhundte hain

chain miltaa  nahi  kahin humein  dard ke samundar mein
raahat ke  liye hum  aajkal  bas shamshaan dhundte hain


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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2013, 07:20:19 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob kapil bhai.. laajawaab peshkash.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2013, 02:51:11 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2013, 01:03:09 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ashwani ji....!!!

Quote from: nashwani on August 29, 2013, 01:36:04 AM
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waah waah waah hriday jee apki ye gazal to bas kehar hi dhaa gayi..
umda laajawab behatareen jo bhi kahun kam hoga..dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2013, 01:03:46 PM »
thank you sooo much Nishi ji....!!!

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 29, 2013, 01:44:46 AM
Superlike Hriday ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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