Apne huye paraye....:Shayri-E-Dard

punam

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zindagi men kuchh pal aise aaye
apne huye paraye hum kuch kar na paye...

na mila dard sirf ghairon se,apne bhi hume bahot rulaye
dil pe yun baaton ke teer pe teer chalaaye...

chhalni hua dil aankhon se aansoo nahi lahoo tapkaye
log usse bhi pani samajh kar yun mazaak udaye...

bolo zakham hum ab kis ko dikhlayen
jab pata nahin hai humen koun apne koun paraye...


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Roja

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2008, 03:05:16 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 23, 2008, 09:31:50 PM

Nice creation punam.

Tumne kuch bhi na kaha ho jaise
Mere hi dil ki sada ho jaise

Kyu teri yaad se dil gabraya
Tumne mujhe bhool gaye ho jaise

Is tarah tujhse kiye hai shikayat
Mujhko apne se gila ho jaise

Tere dil main udasi chayi hai
Pyara sa shayri hua ho jaise

(NM)


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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2008, 03:56:03 AM »

bahoot achcha likha hai poonam ji aapane......
ye pad-kar mujhe ek bahoo t purana sher yaad aa gaya.....

mujhe to apano ne loota gaion me kahan dum tha..
meri kashti thi doobi wahan, jahan paani kam tha


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syednaami

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2008, 05:51:02 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 23, 2008, 09:31:50 PM

Kuchh oonch hai kuchh neech hai, -
Jeevan ka katthin dastoor hai, -
Kabhi dukh hain to kabhi sukh hain, -
Sitamgar duniya badi kathhor hai, -

Kyun pyar hai kyun nafrat hai, -
pratishodh men har koi mast hai, -
Kaise apne hain kaise paraye hain, -
Josh men dooba har aadmi vyast hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Punam Saahiba, atti bhaavuk rachna prastut ki hai aapne.
Yadi, Dard ko bhi anmol sthan de diya.
Adhik likhyega, nivedan...


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rajbhargava

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2008, 06:06:45 AM »

main jab bhi tej chalta hu najare toot jate hai
koi jab roop gadta hu to sanche toot jate hai
main roota hu to aksar log kandha thafthfate hai
main hansata hu to aksar log mujh se rooth jate hai


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k.shael

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2008, 06:25:44 AM »

VERY NICE CREATION, Applause

POONAM JI....
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2008, 07:20:14 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 23, 2008, 09:31:50 PM

bahoot sundar prastooti

itnaa dard le kar bhee jeete hai
taras aataa hai un pe
bewafa ho kar umeed wafa kee karte hai

netra...


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honeyrose

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2008, 08:25:23 AM »

Bohat ache likhe hai punam .. Usual Smile


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syednaami

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2008, 12:04:53 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on May 24, 2008, 07:51:19 AM

Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai
Bohat Khoob Punam Ji
Aur Bhai Jaan Aapko To Jawab Hi Nahi...hmhmh
Lagey Raho....

2 Line Aapki Nazar Galti Maaf mhhmhm....

Achha Hua Mushqilo Bhare Dor Hume Aazma Gaye.
Isi Bahaane Kuch Apne Log Bhi Hi Pehchane Gaye.

Nasheman kya aagahi deta, -
Jo humne khud banaya tha, -
Bahanon se dard nahin mita, -
To sabar ka daaru pee liya. -

Jaan pahachaan dil se thi, -
pyar men doobi har aas thi, -
Kisine pyar ki bochhar ki, -
Kisine muhabbat se Baddua di. -

(Syed Naami)

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Shihab Baba, buha achha jo aapne aakar mahfil ke rang dobaala kardiye.


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punam

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2008, 12:43:13 PM »

Thanx Roja di...bahot acha kavita share kiye aap...

Bekarar ji sukriya...bahot hi sahi sher sahi jagah pe aap ko yaad aaya....

Syed ji.... dard ka koi mole hota hai kya..?
bahot sahi likha aap ne...sach yehi hai...

Kaise apne hain kaise paraye hain, -
Josh men dooba har aadmi vyast hai....... -wow kya khoob kaha...

bahot khoob rajbhargava ji....

Netra ji ...sukriya...

shihab ji bahot bahot sukriya....
2 line me sab kehe diye....bahot acha...

Thanx Honey di.....


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punam

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2008, 07:24:57 PM »

jinhen sochte the apna,
nikle wahi paraye...
hum hosh me tab aye,
zakhm jab unhi se khaye...
hum ro diye the us waqt
aur woh dekh muskuraye....
unhe kis baat ki jalan thi
yeh hum samjh na paye....
jinhen sochte the apna
nikle wahi paraye....


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samir_bc

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2008, 07:48:45 PM »

wah punam ji bahot khoob likha hai,

jinhen sochte the apna,
nikle wahi paraye...

sachai ko bayan kiya hai shayri me. dus lines are very true.


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syednaami

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2008, 07:57:29 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 24, 2008, 12:43:13 PM

Buhat, buhat shukriya, Punam Saahiba, hosla afzai ka.... Aap ka aabhari hun jo hamare rachna ka aapne aadar kya.... Dhanyavaad.


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syednaami

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2008, 05:31:01 PM »

Thanks a lot Shihab baba, Tumhara besabri se intazaar hai, jaldi kuchh likho...


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syednaami

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Re: Apne huye paraye....

«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2008, 05:33:13 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 24, 2008, 07:24:57 PM

Excellent Work Punam saahiba, buhat umda aur khara likha hai....
Suberb...


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