Apne kadmo Ko Mere Kadmo Se Milana Seekhle "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 09, 2011, 11:09:13 AM
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Tere Siwa Kahin Aur Kahan Jaaye Hum
Dil Chaahta Hai Tere Dar Par Mar Jaye Hum

Apne Kadmo Ko Mere kadmo se Milana Seekhle..!!
Aisa Na Ho Ke Tanha Iss Safar Se Guzar Jaye Hum

 Kabhi Yuh Bhi Ho Ke Tuu Aawaaz De Kahin Se!!!!
Teri Ek Aawaz Ke Sadke Umar Bhar Ke Liye Tehar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Milne Ki Aarzoo To Zindagi Bhar Saath Rahegi!!
Khuda Na Kare Intezar Mein Mohabbat Ko Haar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Kabhi,Aur Kuch Maanga Bhi Humne Kya Hai??
Bas Yehi Ke Tere Aankhon Mein Kabhi Basar Jaaye Hum

"Khwaish" Tujhe Har Pal, Har Lamha yaad Rakhta Hai!!!!
Agar Yeh Jhoot Hai To Issi Waqt Iss Duniya Se Guzar Jaaye Hum

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2011, 11:23:31 AM »
Khawahish jee Aadab!

Janab aisa kyuN... ? khayaal behad khub hai par
aapke ahsaasoN se dard ka ahsaas jhalak raha hai..  Is it SO!

Janab kalaam khub kahi hai aur ashaar bhi khub kahe haiN
HUmari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..


Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2011, 11:34:37 AM »
bahut umda khwaishji...
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2011, 12:45:43 PM »
Kya baat hai Khwaish ji
sab theek hai na..aaj kuch naye andaaj me dikh rahe hai aap.

kuch na kuch to taar jude hai mere aapse.. ise coincidence kahe ya kuch aur..aaj hi ek sher likha..post karte karte ruk gaya socha ghajal me tabdeel karte hai ise..
Aap maane ya na maane..dusri line usse milti julti hai..
Parwaaz bhai ne bhi sawaal uthaaya hai..

Bura vaqt agar koi hai to insah allah, jaroor nikal jayega.

Aur ha, aapne bahut accha likha hai..very touching..
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2011, 01:12:09 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 09, 2011, 11:23:31 AM
Khawahish jee Aadab!

Janab aisa kyuN... ? khayaal behad khub hai par
aapke ahsaasoN se dard ka ahsaas jhalak raha hai..  Is it SO!

Janab kalaam khub kahi hai aur ashaar bhi khub kahe haiN
HUmari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..


Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Parwaaz Ji Aapne Apna Saath Diya, Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya

Bhai Kya Kahoon..Chaliye Ek Sher yaad Aaya hai,Wahi Share Karte hai..


kisi Ke Ek Aansuu Se Tadap Jaati Hai Sab Duniya
Kisi Ka Umar Bhar Ka Rona Yuhi Bekaar Hota Hai!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2011, 01:56:28 PM »
waah waah kya baat hai Khawaish ji, bahoot hi khoob likha hai .. Bahoot Umda jazbaat... !!
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2011, 03:33:13 PM »
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 bahut khoob,khwaishji.
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2011, 06:05:56 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 09, 2011, 11:09:13 AM
Tere Siwa Kahin Aur Kahan Jaaye Hum
Dil Chaahta Hai Tere Dar Par Mar Jaye Hum

Apne Kadmo Ko Mere kadmo se Milana Seekhle..!!
Aisa Na Ho Ke Tanha Iss Safar Se Guzar Jaye Hum

 Kabhi Yuh Bhi Ho Ke Tuu Aawaaz De Kahin Se!!!!
Teri Ek Aawaz Ke Sadke Umar Bhar Ke Liye Tehar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Milne Ki Aarzoo To Zindagi Bhar Saath Rahegi!!
Khuda Na Kare Intezar Mein Mohabbat Ko Haar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Kabhi,Aur Kuch Maanga Bhi Humne Kya Hai??
Bas Yehi Ke Tere Aankhon Mein Kabhi Basar Jaaye Hum

"Khwaish" Tujhe Har Pal, Har Lamha yaad Rakhta Hai!!!!
Agar Yeh Jhoot Hai To Issi Waqt Iss Duniya Se Guzar Jaaye Hum

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
wah Khwaish bro--

kuch baaten shayd sabhi ke dil ki hoti hain
par har kisi ke pass aapse alfaaz nhi hote bayan krne ko--


aise hi kuch zazbaat aapne pesh kie--

baht khoob

dil se daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen

Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2011, 10:24:17 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 09, 2011, 11:09:13 AM
Tere Siwa Kahin Aur Kahan Jaaye Hum
Dil Chaahta Hai Tere Dar Par Mar Jaye Hum

Apne Kadmo Ko Mere kadmo se Milana Seekhle..!!
Aisa Na Ho Ke Tanha Iss Safar Se Guzar Jaye Hum

 Kabhi Yuh Bhi Ho Ke Tuu Aawaaz De Kahin Se!!!!
Teri Ek Aawaz Ke Sadke Umar Bhar Ke Liye Tehar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Milne Ki Aarzoo To Zindagi Bhar Saath Rahegi!!
Khuda Na Kare Intezar Mein Mohabbat Ko Haar Jaaye Hum

Tujhse Kabhi,Aur Kuch Maanga Bhi Humne Kya Hai??
Bas Yehi Ke Tere Aankhon Mein Kabhi Basar Jaaye Hum

"Khwaish" Tujhe Har Pal, Har Lamha yaad Rakhta Hai!!!!
Agar Yeh Jhoot Hai To Issi Waqt Iss Duniya Se Guzar Jaaye Hum

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

good........!
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2011, 11:17:15 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 09, 2011, 11:34:37 AM
bahut umda khwaishji...

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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2011, 06:48:37 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Dost, kya khoon kalam kahi hai apne..
Akhri do lines toh tamam sachiyon se uper nikli..
Kya baat hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2011, 10:44:13 AM »
Quote from: mkv on December 09, 2011, 12:45:43 PM
Kya baat hai Khwaish ji
sab theek hai na..aaj kuch naye andaaj me dikh rahe hai aap.

kuch na kuch to taar jude hai mere aapse.. ise coincidence kahe ya kuch aur..aaj hi ek sher likha..post karte karte ruk gaya socha ghajal me tabdeel karte hai ise..
Aap maane ya na maane..dusri line usse milti julti hai..
Parwaaz bhai ne bhi sawaal uthaaya hai..

Bura vaqt agar koi hai to insah allah, jaroor nikal jayega.

Aur ha, aapne bahut accha likha hai..very touching..


Mkv ji, Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Humesha Ki tarah Bahut Bahut Shukriya...

Mkv Ji, Agar Dard lafzon mein Utar jaaye To Iss Duniya mein Isse Asaan tareeka Ho Hi nahi Sakta..Bas kuch jazbaat Aise The Jinhe Lafzon Ki Zaroorat Thi isliye Yeh Sab Likh gaya..Aapne Jo Likha Hai Zaroor Post Kijiye..Acha Lagta Hai jab Kuch Humkhayaal Sa Padhne Ko Mile..Mujhe Intezaar Rahega Aapkew Post ka...

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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2011, 01:28:04 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on December 09, 2011, 01:56:28 PM
waah waah kya baat hai Khawaish ji, bahoot hi khoob likha hai .. Bahoot Umda jazbaat... !!

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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2011, 03:12:05 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 09, 2011, 03:33:13 PM
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 bahut khoob,khwaishji.

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«Reply #14 on: December 16, 2011, 01:49:07 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on December 09, 2011, 06:05:56 PM
wah Khwaish bro--

kuch baaten shayd sabhi ke dil ki hoti hain
par har kisi ke pass aapse alfaaz nhi hote bayan krne ko--


aise hi kuch zazbaat aapne pesh kie--

baht khoob

dil se daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen

Usual Smile

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya S.f Ji..

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