Apni Dunia jo mitale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 13, 2013, 05:41:21 AM
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Jiske dil me ho chhale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.
Apni Dunia jo mitale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.

Jise khushi hi mili hon,wo Ghazal kya jane,
Lakhon Gum jo utha le, wo ghazal likhta hai.

Jiske nayanon ke kor sukhe hon,wo ghazal kyon likhe,
Ashqon ka samander jo baha le,wo ghazal likhta hai.
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2013, 06:02:41 AM »
bahut bahut sunder
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2013, 06:06:32 AM »
Jiske dil me ho chhale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.
Apni Dunia jo mitale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.

Jise khushi hi mili hon,wo Ghazal kya jane,
Lakhon Gum jo utha le, wo ghazal likhta hai.

Jiske nayanon ke kor sukhe hon,wo ghazal kyon likhe,
Ashqon ka samander jo baha le,wo ghazal likhta hai.

wah wah wah wah kya baat hai mat'ala kamaal likha gaya hai waqai bohut khoob ghazal hai agr kuch asaar aur hote to aur zyada maza aata padhne ka dheeron daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2013, 06:57:14 AM »
Bohat Khub!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2013, 07:33:48 AM »
Jiske dil me ho chhale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.
Apni Dunia jo mitale,wo Ghazal likhta hai.

Jise khushi hi mili hon,wo Ghazal kya jane,
Lakhon Gum jo utha le, wo ghazal likhta hai.

Jiske nayanon ke kor sukhe hon,wo ghazal kyon likhe,
Ashqon ka samander jo baha le,wo ghazal likhta hai.
Wha ji wha wha
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2013, 09:42:52 AM »
waaah waaah.... bahut khooooob...
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2013, 12:21:54 PM »
very good...
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2013, 02:44:03 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Sudhir ji... bahut achcha likha hai aapne.. aapkaa Yoindia me haardik swaagat hai... yunhi aate rahiye, likhte rahiye.....!!!
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