*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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<>*Apni gazlon me suna dete hain*<> aksar hi log mahobbat ko tamasha bana dete hain
bade hi pyaar se seene me khanjar ko saja dete hain...♥
dil me jaga dete hain wo mahobbat ki aag ko
fir unhi sholon se wo ruuh ko bhi jala dete hain...♥
andheron me dikhate hain wo hume roshni ki jhalak
kuch palon me sare diye hamesha ko bujha dete hain..♥
samjhte hue bhi beh jate hain unki narm awaaz se hum
apne wajood ko hum thokron k hawale kara dete hain..♥
thak jate hain tut kar bikharte fir jodte khudko
par har shaam khud ko ek dard naya dete hain..♥
lafzon se khelte hain ji bhar k hum har roz sanam
aur dil ki *kasak* ko apni gazlon me suna dete hain..♥
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2011, 01:56:12 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2011, 02:18:14 PM » |
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to kya kehte ho khwaish ji..sath doge fir wahi sama wapas laane me....  ? waise aapka hausla mil gaya to ab gazlein banti rahengi... |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2011, 02:18:39 PM » |
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kaash ji bht bht shukriya ji...
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2011, 03:20:24 PM » |
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wese to puri ghazal pasand aai hume… lekin last 4 line gajab hain  superb 4 lines apne dil ki kasak ko gazlon me saja dete hain fir unn ghazalon se auron ke dilon me bhi ik KASAK sa utha dete hain  |
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2011, 03:28:04 PM » |
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haan sarfira ji ye sach hai gazlon se kasak jaga dete hain..kyunki agar kasak na jagi to gazal likhne ka fayda kya..jab mere ehsaas padhne wale k dil ko na chhuen to mera likhne me kami hai hai na.... ? |
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2011, 03:50:48 PM » |
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han aapne sahi kaha…
kasak jagni chahiye padhkar…
lekin agr insaan likhne ke lie likhe to maza nai…
likhte waqt doob jao ehsaason me
padhnewale fir doobenge hi…
dard par likhte waqt agr aansu aajaye to padhne walon ki palken bhi num honge hi…
aap ke alfaazon me aur dhaar aanewali hai…
mahaan shayar jaldi ban jayengi aap
wese hum sarfire hain kuch b kah jata hun…bura nai maniyega!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2011, 03:56:09 PM » |
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lajawab likha kasak ji.. Behatarin peshkash rahi aapki.. Aise hi hasin lamho se hame gulzar karte rahiye ga..
Khwabo ko karke khud se door hum ae Sanam,
Haqiqat ko hi hum apna wajood bana dete hai,
Jab se tum aayi ho zindagime saathi bankar,
"*KasaK*.... Dil Ki" Tumhe Gale Lagaakar Mitaa dete hai..
-GUMboy...
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2012, 08:30:07 PM » |
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awsome kasakji....shaandaar...!!
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2012, 01:46:53 AM » |
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realy nice work
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on eTI community..
