~*~*ApNi KaBrA mE tEhAlTe HuE~*~*

by ghayal_shayar on October 31, 2005, 01:14:03 PM
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ghayal_shayar
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doston in dino bahut dard me tha aur isi karan bazm me aa bhi nahi paya tha.par ab aaya hoon,to aapko nirash nahi karunga.umeed hai aapko ye kalaam bhi pasand aayegi.



dil tuta mera kisi ke saath chalte hue,
ahche the hum tanhaiyon me palte hue.

har baar para zindagi ka tamacha,
hume zindagi se yun sambhalte hue.

do din me hi fafole pad gaye,hume,
khud ke ishq ki shamma me yun jalte hue.

kuch nahi kar sakta dekhkar bhi main,
apni zindagi ka suraj yun dhalte hue.

dard na hua tujhe e mere humdam,
mere dil ko pawon tale yun kuchalte hue.

aakhir kyun aaj bhi dil tadap raha hai,
aapko pane ki chahat me yun machalte hue.

mera dil dardon ka ghonsala ban gaya,
jo arsa ho gaya dil me dard palte hue.

meri zindagi hi poori jam kar reh gayi,
aapke is patthar dil ke yun pighalte hue.

ab bas aur kitna jiyega "ghayal",
apni hi kabra me yun tahalte hue.


aapka LUCKY
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2005, 05:05:18 PM »
wowowow bahoot khoob!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2005, 07:58:58 AM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  khood......Ghayal..........
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2005, 10:30:30 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!   bahot  khood......Ghayal..........


thanks a lot pooja ji.bas yunhi padhte rahiye aap.

aapka LUCKY
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sanya310
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2005, 10:33:05 AM »
keep it going ghayal ji!! very nice!!

pareshan hue gham e duniya se hum to apna muh mod chale
har rishta har naata jo joda tha yahan un sabhi ko tod chale..
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2005, 06:19:32 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
keep it going ghayal ji!! very nice!!

pareshan hue gham e duniya se hum to apna muh mod chale
har rishta har naata jo joda tha yahan un sabhi ko tod chale..


ur  welcome...........ghayal..........superbssssssss   Sanya...... very  touching....

kya thi kami mere dil  mein jo khilaona samajhkar tod chale
agar yahi  manzoor  hai tumhein to  hum bhi teri duniya chord chale
na kabhi karenge  shikwa  hum tumahre kabhi bhi apne  khuda  se
jamana ne  chord  diya mujhe  aaj  tum  bhi mujhe  chord  chale........
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2005, 06:39:24 PM »
Good one waheed!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2005, 07:12:16 PM »
kamal ka six mara waheed bahi nice reply.................. :lol:
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2005, 12:14:44 PM »
thanks wsanya jee bahut khoobsurat sher tha.yunhi padhte rahiye aap.
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