Apni Socho se -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: March 15, 2007, 03:25:04 PM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Vicky ji!!! App bhi kuch likh jaate to hume bhi acha padne ka moka mil jaata!!


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Re: Apni Socho se

«Reply #16 on: March 19, 2007, 12:50:45 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Bhird se lagta hai dar, kahin bhatak main jaati hu
Tanhaai ka rasta hai sidha, tanhaai mai araam paati hu

Jara si bhi ho awaz, preshan ab main ho jaati hu
Apne deemag ki awazo main hi, skoon jaise paati hu

Ghanto baithi ek jagah per, na jaane kaya sochi jaati hu
Kaise ho gaya itna kuch, na jaane kaya kaya khud ko samjhati hu

Duniya ki itani bhird-bhard, dekh kar bas yahi soche jaati hu
Kayun mera nahi koi apna, apni socho se dil ko lahu ke ansoo rulaati hu

wah wah didi!!! tessra sher to too gud hai!! uspe mere kuch khayal:

aaj socha baith kar, ke zindagi se kya paya kya khoya hai,
kushi to kam hi mili, dil to hardam bas kisi ki yaad me roya hai,
kab tak mange hum duayen, jo kabhi puri nahin hoti,
lagta hai meri kismat ke jaise, Khuda bhi yaha soya hai!


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Pooja

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #17 on: March 19, 2007, 01:05:29 PM »

bahoot khoob Meena!!

Rub se karu shikayat
rub se karu ladaai
kis liye kaya soch kar
usne meri kismat aise banai

nahi hai jab takdeer main
koi apna, koi sucha sathi
kis liye phir di umeend
kis liye payar ki jagai man main baati (Jayot)!!!


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niraj_191

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #18 on: March 19, 2007, 01:52:57 PM »

hamare gunahon ki saza vo rab ko de nahi pate
aur ek hum hai ki unse kuch kahe nahi pate

kya soch kar karte hai vo log mohabat,
jo is josh-e-junnon ke bad dukho ko seh nahi pate


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Meena is back

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #19 on: March 19, 2007, 02:13:21 PM »

bohot khoob didi....

well said niraj... akhri line bohot hi pasand ayi mujhe!!

Usual Smile


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niraj_191

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«Reply #20 on: March 19, 2007, 02:20:19 PM »

khushnaseeb hai vo jo mohabat ke dard ko ro ke jatate hai
hum to usi dard ko apna humsafar batate hai

kya biti hogi is masum se dil par us waqt,
jab dard se likhi line ko vo apni pasand batate hai


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Meena is back

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #21 on: March 19, 2007, 02:32:57 PM »

wah niraj ji... too gud!! i really like this reply!!

milti nahin har kisi ko mohabbat yaha,
kuch log to taraste rehte hai is dard ke liye,
kuch shayar ki ghazle adhuri bhi rehe jati hai,
jo talashte rehte hai woh dard me doobe shabd ke liye!


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niraj_191

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«Reply #22 on: March 19, 2007, 02:53:58 PM »

mohbat me bewafai par kar bhi ab mera dil dukhta nahi
kuch likhu nahi to log kehte hai ki,
dekho thokar kha kar bhi kuch likhta nahi

mana ki dard ke meri gazalo ka koi ant nahi
magar ek nagme ke bad agar jo reply unka aaye,
to asi hazaro gazlon ke ant ka koi gum nahi


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Meena is back

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«Reply #23 on: March 19, 2007, 03:05:39 PM »

bohot koon niraj ji...bohot touching hoti hai apki poems! keep it up Usual Smile


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niraj_191

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #24 on: March 19, 2007, 03:16:21 PM »

Thx for appreciating!!

it's g8 peom conversation with you...


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Meena is back

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #25 on: March 20, 2007, 01:06:01 PM »

thanks same to u!! Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #26 on: March 20, 2007, 01:30:50 PM »

wowow tooo good Niraji ji and Meena!! bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne:)

Likhu ya na likhu dard kahin jaata nahi
ban chuka hai zindagi, aor koi iska naam ab samjh atta nahi

likhati hu to simat jaata hai shabdo main
na likhu to phail jaata hai naso main


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niraj_191

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«Reply #27 on: March 20, 2007, 03:14:50 PM »

dard ko tere samjne ke liye mujhe alfazon ki jaroorat nahi
jo nigahon ki bhasha jante ho unhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi

thukra diya ho jise aapne apne dil se ek bar
ab bar bar uske liye aansu bahane ki jaroorat nahi


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Pooja

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #28 on: March 20, 2007, 03:54:57 PM »

wah wah wah... bahoot khoob.... last two line bahoot hi achi likhi hai...

deemag aor dil ki takraar ka kaya karu
thukra diya, phir bhi hai payaar kaya karu


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niraj_191

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Apni Socho se

«Reply #29 on: March 20, 2007, 06:28:17 PM »

vo apne pyar ka izhar kare bina reh nahi pate
aur ek hum hai ki kabhi kuch keh nahi pate


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