Apni Socho se

by Pooja on March 02, 2007, 07:36:54 PM
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«Reply #60 on: July 06, 2009, 05:04:18 PM »

Waah Pooja ji!! Kya baat hai Bahut Khoobsoorat lines hain!!!

Aaj Toofaan se zid karke phir ek gharonda banaya jaye!
Hum phir uth ke khade honge yeh toofan ko bataya jaye!

Katra Katra Bikhri in sookhi be rang pattiyon mein se,
apne gham chhant kar phir ek Guldasta banaya Jaye!

Hum woh chiragh hain jalna hi jinki Phitrat hai,
Chahe kitni hi aandhiyon se ru-ba-ru karwaya jaye!



Bahut Acche Lovestone Ji.. waqai Behad Kamaal ke Alfaaz Likhe hain dost... Applause Applause

Saath Hi Pooja Ji.. Aapka Likha har Qalaam Bhi Behad Lajawab hai.. Bahut khooooob... Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #61 on: July 07, 2009, 08:40:10 AM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya baat hai Lovestone ji... dil khush kar diya!! ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne!!! Good work, Good creation...

meri itani nirasha main likhi kavita ka apne itani asha se bharpoor jawab diya hai... such main dil khush ho gaya!!

God Bless you!!


Thanks Pooja ji!!

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«Reply #62 on: July 07, 2009, 08:41:50 AM »
Thanks Mann ji!! Shukriya!!
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