apno ne hi dhokha diya!!!!!!

by pritam tripathi on December 26, 2012, 06:14:57 PM
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ek kasak mere dil me uthi thi magar
meri mohabbaat ko tune thukraa diya....

hum to manjil pr aakar bhatakte rahe
raaste me tune hi mujhe gumraah kiya....

ek woh daur tha jab tum bhi na the
phir bhi jaane kisne dilko ruswa kiya....

kai baar gire magar haare nahi the
phir bhi jindagi ne humko thukra diya....

sareefon ki basti se guzar kar gaye jab
badi zillat se usne mujhe rukhsat kiya.....

ye to accha hua ki baatein abhi ho gayi
ek silsila tha tha purana chalta kiya....

swalon ne tere meri seerat badal di
har zakhm mera gehra kureda gaya......

jannaton me jo log mashroor the
jahannum ka pata unse poocha gaya....

bahut wafaadar tha jo shaksh anjaan tha
ye apno ne hi tha mujhko dhokha diya.....
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2012, 06:42:17 PM »
ek wo daur tha jab tum bhi na the
phir bhi jaane kisne dil ko ruswa kiya....
bahut gehri baat kahi aapne inn lines mein....aur sach hai takleef aksar apne hi dete hai, padha tha kahi k begano ka maara patthar bhi dard nahi deta aur apno ka phenka phool bhi gehri chot de jaata hai...ajeeb hai par sach hai.....well...bahut khoob tripathi ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2012, 06:52:04 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2012, 06:58:29 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on December 26, 2012, 06:42:17 PM
ek wo daur tha jab tum bhi na the
phir bhi jaane kisne dil ko ruswa kiya....
bahut gehri baat kahi aapne inn lines mein....aur sach hai takleef aksar apne hi dete hai, padha tha kahi k begano ka maara patthar bhi dard nahi deta aur apno ka phenka phool bhi gehri chot de jaata hai...ajeeb hai par sach hai.....well...bahut khoob tripathi ji
nikhaar ji thanks bahut dhyaan se padha aapne
mujhe khusi hui ki mera likha aapko pasand aaya
thanks again
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2012, 06:59:14 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 26, 2012, 06:52:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
hriday ji dhanyawaad
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2012, 07:38:07 PM »
JANAAB IS BEHETREEN KALAAM KE LIYE DAAD QUBOOL KAREN, AGAR ISKA MATLA BHI KAH DE'N AUR SAATH ME KUCHH QAFIYE THEEK KAR LIYE JAYE TO YEH EK YAAD GAAR GHAZAL HOGI ...DONT MIND SIR YE MERA APNA NIJI KHAYAAL HAI .....BAHUT BAHUT DAAD ..AAPKA REHAN MUBARAK TANHAA
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2012, 08:05:46 PM »
Quote from: haan on December 26, 2012, 07:38:07 PM
JANAAB IS BEHETREEN KALAAM KE LIYE DAAD QUBOOL KAREN, AGAR ISKA MATLA BHI KAH DE'N AUR SAATH ME KUCHH QAFIYE THEEK KAR LIYE JAYE TO YEH EK YAAD GAAR GHAZAL HOGI ...DONT MIND SIR YE MERA APNA NIJI KHAYAAL HAI .....BAHUT BAHUT DAAD ..AAPKA REHAN MUBARAK TANHAA
rehaan ji bahut bahut shukriya
sir aapne jo bhi salah di woh sar ankhon par agli baar jaroor sudhaar karunga
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 12:43:43 AM »
boht khub tripathi ji waah
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 02:49:21 AM »
wah kya baat hai daad qubool karen
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 02:51:56 AM »
beautiful . a  little  garnishing  will  make  it  more  beautiful.
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 05:12:13 AM »
kya baat hai
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 05:28:09 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 05:31:18 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 06:16:12 AM »
Wallah....bahut khoob
Very nice wah
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«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2012, 01:18:24 PM »
Quote from: saahill on December 27, 2012, 12:43:43 AM
boht khub tripathi ji waah
saahil ji shukriya
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