~~"APNO NE LAGAYE ILZAAM"~~

by k.shael on August 23, 2008, 08:48:42 AM
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AISI KON SI KHATA HUI HAMSE KI HAM
GUNEHGAAR HO GAYE,APNO KI HI NAZRO KI
KAID ME HAM JANE KYUN GIRAFFTAAR HO GAYE,

YE NA SOCHA KISI NE BHI KI MERA DIL BHI TO
TOOT KE BIKHRA HOGA,JAB WO SAB MERE APNE HI
MERE KHILAAF HO GAYE,

ITNA BHADA BHI KYA GUNAAH KIYA MAINE JO SUNKE
SAZA UNKI MERE ZAZBAAT TAAR-2 HO GAYE,

KYA KARENGE HAM UNN PATHAR DILO KO KHUD PE
VISHWAAS KARAKE,JAB UNKE LIYE SADIYO KE RISHTE
KACHE HO GAYE,

KHUDA JANE WO SAHI HAI YA MEIN PAR ITNA MALOOM
HAI KI AAJ MERE HAALAT MUJHSE BAAHAR HO GAYE,

GAIRO NE UNGALI UTHAYI HOTI TO JAWAB DETE APNO
NE KIYA HAI WAAR TO KYA SAWAL KARTE,

BADOON KE NARAZ HONE KA KYA KARE HAMSE TO CHHOTE
BHI NARAZ HO GAYE,

EK BAAR POOCHTE TO SAHI MUJHSE EK-2 SAWAL KA JAWAB
DETE,JAB BAAT SIDHE ILJAAM PAR HI LE AAYE HO AAP SAB
TO BATAIYE KISS MOOH SE JAWAB DETE,

APNO KI KHUSHI KE LIYE KAISE NA KHUD KO BARBAAD
KARTE,APNO NE DIYA ILZAAM HAME TO BATA AE KHUDA
KAISE NA KABOOL KARTE...
 tearyeyed
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 09:32:28 AM »
Very Very Touching... Applause

Good Work Shally...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 09:50:21 AM »
nice one shally.....

waqt ka kasoor hai,
na wo galat hain na tum,
sach pe kayam raho,
dhal jayenge ye gum
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 09:55:15 AM »
THANX MAHIYA JI,
& SANJEEV BROTHER,
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 11:04:10 AM »
Gr8 Shael Ji Bahut Hi Aacha Likha Hai  Applause









Baadal
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k.shael
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2008, 11:11:51 AM »
THANX SO MUCH,
BAADAL JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2008, 01:04:18 PM »
SHAEL JEE GHAZAL LIKHIYE KAHANI NAHI HAR DUSRE SHER SE THODA ALAG HO PEHLE SHER KI CONTINUITY NA HO
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honeyrose
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2008, 01:31:27 PM »
 


GAIRO NE UNGALI UTHAYI HOTI TO JAWAB DETE APNO
NE KIYA HAI WAAR TO KYA SAWAL KARTE,


 tearyeyed
Kamaal ki lines likhi hai aapne shally bohat hi khoob... Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP
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ANKIT RAO
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2008, 02:08:42 PM »
 Clapping Smiley

BADIYA REALLY GOOD ONE K.SHAEL JI.
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Sammual
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2008, 05:34:32 AM »
Bahut Badhiya Likha Hai Shally Ji.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 05:27:47 AM »
bohut khoob shally
last two lines r very touching
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2008, 06:06:39 AM »
THANX SO MUCH,
SAJID JI,
HONEYROSE DI,
ANKIT JI,
SAMMUAL JI,
& KAUSHIK JI,
SHUKRIYA DOSTO KI AAP SAB NE KALAM KO
PADA AUR SARAHA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Muhammed
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 09:18:30 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 23, 2008, 08:48:42 AM

AISI KON SI KHATA HUI HAMSE KI HAM
GUNEHGAAR HO GAYE,APNO KI HI NAZRO KI
KAID ME HAM JANE KYUN GIRAFFTAAR HO GAYE,

YE NA SOCHA KISI NE BHI KI MERA DIL BHI TO
TOOT KE BIKHRA HOGA,JAB WO SAB MERE APNE HI
MERE KHILAAF HO GAYE,

ITNA BHADA BHI KYA GUNAAH KIYA MAINE JO SUNKE
SAZA UNKI MERE ZAZBAAT TAAR-2 HO GAYE,

KYA KARENGE HAM UNN PATHAR DILO KO KHUD PE
VISHWAAS KARAKE,JAB UNKE LIYE SADIYO KE RISHTE
KACHE HO GAYE,

KHUDA JANE WO SAHI HAI YA MEIN PAR ITNA MALOOM
HAI KI AAJ MERE HAALAT MUJHSE BAAHAR HO GAYE,

GAIRO NE UNGALI UTHAYI HOTI TO JAWAB DETE APNO
NE KIYA HAI WAAR TO KYA SAWAL KARTE,

BADOON KE NARAZ HONE KA KYA KARE HAMSE TO CHHOTE
BHI NARAZ HO GAYE,

EK BAAR POOCHTE TO SAHI MUJHSE EK-2 SAWAL KA JAWAB
DETE,JAB BAAT SIDHE ILJAAM PAR HI LE AAYE HO AAP SAB
TO BATAIYE KISS MOOH SE JAWAB DETE,

APNO KI KHUSHI KE LIYE KAISE NA KHUD KO BARBAAD
KARTE,APNO NE DIYA ILZAAM HAME TO BATA AE KHUDA
KAISE NA KABOOL KARTE...
 tearyeyed
BY. K.SHAEL

Badhiya shally
aap ne yeh saabit kardiya ki kam az kam Urdu k alfaaz hote hue bhi waaqaee kamaal ka Likhte ho aap
Aur
zyada tar Lafz aise Istemal karte ho aap ki aasani se padhne waala samaz sakta hai
Aur
Jitna Bhi Taweel Likhte Ho Isme Har Lafz awwal se akhir Taq Ba'khoobi Maa'ne k saath hote hai
Aur
Dard-e-bayaa'n kuch juda hi tareeke se Likhte ho aap
Aur
Allaah se ye dua hai ki aap aise hi badhiya likhte raho aur har Mauzoo par Likhte raho aur shally ka kalum Rawaa'n dawaa'n rahe yoonhi.
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 09:40:22 AM »
SHUKRIYA ASHRAF JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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rajsingh
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2008, 09:49:47 AM »
Hiiiiiiiiiiiii again "Raj"
"apni ki khushi ke liye kaise na khud ko barbad karte, apno ne diya ilzam hame to bata e khuda kaise n kabool karte"

aapka har kalam Dil ko chu kar nikalta hai, kabhi-kabhi main sochta hoon k likne wali kafi metchor hogi ? agr zindgi main kabhi time mila to aapse zaroor milna chahunga

Keep it up  hello2 hello2
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