Arth.. !! (Shikha) -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: August 26, 2008, 12:19:35 PM »

Quote from: natural on August 23, 2008, 10:37:34 AM

Bahut khoob likha hai Mahiya.... Aur title bhi kaafi achha hai.... Usual Smile

Thanks for reading and leaving your comments Jagdish.. Usual Smile

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 23, 2008, 10:43:16 AM

Mahiya ji,

main us phool si bikhri phirti hu,woh khushboo mein uljha baitha hein!!----atyant prabhaavshaali pankti-yeh pankti padh kar maza aa gaya.

Prateek

Prateek ji Hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.. Usual Smile

Quote from: baadal102 on August 23, 2008, 10:58:54 AM

bahut khoob bahut hi aacha Applause

shikha ji

Baadal

Bahut shukriya aapka Baadal ji.. Usual Smile

Quote from: honeyrose on August 23, 2008, 01:27:27 PM

Mahiya aapne buhat khoob likha hai great lines ... Clapping Smiley

Thanks for liking.. HoneyRose..


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Shikha12

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Re: Arth.. !!

«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2008, 12:21:28 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 23, 2008, 01:57:44 PM

MAHIYA JEE DIL TO KARTA HAIN MONITOR KO AAKHO SE LAGA LU LEKIN OFFICE WALE SOCHEGE SAJID PAGAL HO GAYA HAIN WAISE SHIKA AAPKA NAM HAIN

Bahut shukriya Sajid ji... aapne padha aur saraaha..
Waise... Shika nahin, lekin Shikha naam mera hi hai.. Usual Smile

Quote from: ANKIT RAO on August 23, 2008, 02:06:32 PM

BAHUT KHOOB MAHIYA JI.
SACHMUCH ADBOOT

Thanks Ankit for reading and commenting..

Quote from: diya786 on August 24, 2008, 11:11:01 AM

BAHUT HI ACCHA LIKHA HAI MAHIYA
AUR KO TASVEER ISTEMAAL KI HAI WOH AAPKI SHAYARI KA ARTH BA-KHOOBI SAMJHATI HAI HAI
IT'S REALLY GREAT !!! icon_flower

Its my pleasure, u like it Diya..
Thanks for reading.

Quote from: gulzargul on August 24, 2008, 11:56:06 AM

nice dear mahiya

gul

Shukriya Gulzargul ji... notworthy


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Shikha12

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Re: Arth.. !!

«Reply #17 on: August 26, 2008, 12:26:50 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on August 25, 2008, 05:23:56 PM

Ek behtareen peshkash Mahiya...Very good use of words and with continuous flow.... a marvellous creation by you Applause

Thanks so much Celmira.. Usual Smile

Quote from: Pooja on August 25, 2008, 06:20:45 PM

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob MAHIYA

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja di..


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syednaami

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Re: Arth.. !!

«Reply #18 on: August 26, 2008, 01:44:00 PM »

Mahiya/Shikha,

Extremely pain driven poem. You work is solidly commendable.


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Roja

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Re: Arth.. !!

«Reply #19 on: August 27, 2008, 03:47:18 AM »

Bahut khoob Shikha


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Muhammed

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Re: Arth.. !!

«Reply #20 on: August 27, 2008, 05:09:55 AM »

Jee Sikha Ba'Takhallus Mahiya
Bahot Hi Badhiya Ash'aar Likhe Hai aapne Jise "La-Jawaab" Kahun

Aur Bait-ul-Gazal Kahein wo Ashaar :
Jaise Khil Ke ho Bhikhra Phool Kahin.,
Aisi Khusbu Hawa Mein Bikhri Hai.,
Main Us Phool si Bikhri Phirti Hoon.,
Woh Khusbu Mein Uljha baitha Hai.,

Qa'ma Haqq-hoo Aa'la alfaaz Istemal Kiye Hai aapne
Misra-e-oola se Aakhir Taq Badhiya si Nazm Likhi Hai aapne
Tasweer Bhi B'khoobi apni Baat bayaa'n Karti Hai

wiase meri aadat ho gayi hai k hammesha der se hi aata hun
aur aakhir me commnet deta hun.