Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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kuch man mai ayya to likh diya!! yah kisi ke liye koi sawal nahi hai....

Choti si baat ka afsaana bana diya
Mere dost ne , mujko kaya se kaya bana diya
Haq tha muj per, per usne anjnabi bana diya
Ghoot kar khud, dil hi dil mai, mujrim muje bana diya!!!

Rahe wafa na khatam hogi kabhi
kayun bhir chup ka sannatta bicha diya
kah dety, dil mai jo thi baat
kayun hum dono ko tumne rulla diya!!

Hamesha chal sake hum sath, yah to nahi hui thi baat
Phir kayun khud ko kasamo mai tumne saja diya
Mere khawabo ko, khawabo ki dolly mai he sajein rahne dety
Kayun unko bhi hakikat ki Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!


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Rajbir

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2006, 02:02:11 PM »

Pooja

Tumhara koi jawaab nahi hai...

Aise he likhte rehna, yeh meri dua hai !

Rajbir


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nirbhay

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2006, 02:36:42 PM »

Abslty FANTASTIC ONE Pooja Sis....

Gungunatey labon ko kyun tumne zeher pila diya
Wafa tumahri thi kya humne tumhein koi gilaa diya
Aafaatein inn khwabon ki gulistan mein nahi simat.tii thin...
Jo tumne HaQiQat ki Aarthi pe bhi humein bicha diya!!


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vikas2210

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2006, 02:37:14 PM »

Pooja ji great simply great.

Mere sawal mere khwab
tume sab ko mita diye
jab bhi jeene ki aas tume
mere wajood ko mita diya


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Aryaan

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2006, 04:33:02 PM »

..Very Nice Pooja..


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2006, 04:40:49 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

hamesha ki tarah hi bahot achcha likha hai pooja ji Usual Smile


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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2006, 05:50:04 PM »

Wow Pooja ji,Bohat acha likha hai,especially the last para is mindblowing.

"Waqt ne bhi aaj kuch aisa sitam hai dhaa diya,
bhujhta hua wo sapno ka diya phirse jalaa diya,
bohat mushkil se chod paayi thi main is raah ko,
arthi bana ke phir tune ise meri raahon me bicha diya."


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isha_verma7

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2006, 06:02:47 PM »

bahut achaa pooja ji..........spec. these lines "mere khawabo ko, khawabo ki doli main hee sajaa rahena detaa
kyun unko bhi hakikat ki arthi par tumna bichaa diya"


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nikki

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2006, 06:30:54 PM »

wonderfull Pooja sis....


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Pooja

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2006, 05:08:09 AM »

Shukariyan dosto and Veer ji!!!

bas aise hi kuch man mai ayya tha, shabdo mai piro diya
kuch kah diya shabdon mai, kuch kahin ander hi kho gaya
takdeer ki hai baaty, Rub meri waari mai so gaya
Pooja ki pooja ka phool, uski arthi per hi sanjo diya!!!


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2006, 05:29:50 AM »

Aaj hamari sanam ne humse Pyar farmaya hai......
Kambhakht ne aaj ek aur jaam Bewafai ka pilaya hai.....
Usi ne aaaj hame nashe me chooor Shayar banaya hai......
Ehsaan manenge hum unka Zindagi bhar......
Aakhir unhone Zandagi se na sahi Maut se toh waasta karaya hai....
Keh k Pyar k do lafz humse unhe kya pata........
Ki aaj unhone hame sar-e-aam jinda Arthi par baithaya hai...............


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Pooja

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2006, 01:13:01 PM »

Darwaaze kab se thy band saare
khirki mai ek surakh kar rakha tha
na jaane kayun khuda per vishwaas kar rakha tha
Is zindagi ko bahoot be-araam kar rakha tha

ab mai araam se apni kabar mai so jaugi
na bachega kuch, chand lakriyon mai jal jaugi
mil kar ganga ke pawan pani mai
bahoot door kahin bah jaugi!!!!!!

Is hakikat ki arthi ko, hakikat mai badal jaugi.....
bahoot door kahin ab, mai nikal jaugi...........


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Rajbir

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2006, 01:26:22 PM »

Aap sab ne bahut achcha likha hai !

Pooja aap ne bahut dard bhara likha hai... sad5

Rajbir


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Meena is back

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Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2006, 07:38:56 PM »

wah wah didi, bohot acha likha apne esp last 4 lines to mind blowing ti.

baki dosto ne bhi bohot acha likha hai!

roshni ke liye unone humare sapno ko jala diya,
gairon ke liye unone apno ko tukra diya,
kushiyon ki manzil phoolon ki raha par mile unko,
islyie humari raha se phool utha ke kanton ko bicha diya!


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: Arthi per tumne bicha diya!!!!!

«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2006, 04:55:05 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

wah wah Pooja sis., Nirbhay........ Nidhi.......... sabh logon bahot accha likha... nice work.....


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