Asar ke lie...... manjum

by manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
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Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Manju  "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 07:17:15 AM »
wah kya khub dard ki bayani hai………
har sher lajawaab
daad dil se ji
khus rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2011, 07:28:27 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya niralaji....

sath rahiega....
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2011, 08:27:11 AM »
Bahut bahut khooob Anjuji..

Humesha Ki tarah lajawaab!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2011, 08:47:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji...

bas aapka sath milta rahe..... sath rahie...
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2011, 08:58:46 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Manju  "mann"


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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2011, 09:00:20 AM »
bahutbahut shukriya adilji...

duaye dete rahie... sath rahie
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2011, 05:32:30 PM »

manjum ji,

kya baat hai..
bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai

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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2011, 06:36:21 PM »
kya baat hai
hausla kuch aur bad jayega  uska
tali baza do tum manjum k lie

Quote from: manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Manju  "mann"
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2011, 09:09:01 PM »
Quote from: manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Manju  "mann"

Bahut khoob manju mann ji.
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2011, 03:20:13 AM »
baht baht shukriya satishji....

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2011, 03:22:13 AM »
bahut bahut shukrya manojji....

sach kaha aapne talian mile to hausla to bad hi jayega....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2011, 03:22:56 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on May 20, 2011, 03:22:13 AM
bahut bahut shukrya manojji....

sach kaha aapne talian mile to hausla to bad hi jayega....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2011, 03:40:45 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya geetji....

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2011, 11:16:46 AM »
Manjum Jee Adaab !


Wah janab waah kia kahne hai aapke ... Bahut hi umdaa
aur behad pur asar khayaaloN ko behad khubi se anjaam diya
hai aapne.. Bus dil se waah waah waah nikal rahi hai... Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Behad achchi lines kahi hai Manjum jee daad daad daad "
Par dono lines apni apni self baat kah rahi hai hume un lines meiN koi connection nazar nahi aa raha hai... Jaise ke sher ki dono lines aik dusre par nirbhar hoti hai ..

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Kia baat hai janab waah yeH huyi hai behad khub shayari:) bahut khub daad daad daad Usual Smile


Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Waah jee waah bahut khoob behad umdaa Usual Smile

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Yeh bhi behad khub sher kaha hai jee daad Applause

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Waah waah waah yeH behad badiyaa sher kaha hai aapne aik master stroke ki tarha last ball meiN six:) behad achcha sher daad daad daad  Applause Applause Applause

Manju  "mann"




Behad khub aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
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