Asar ke lie...... manjum

by manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 20, 2011, 11:30:49 AM »
wah wah.....

bhut bahut shukriya parwazji....

sach kahe to aapke cmnt ke baad hame hamari har rachana khubsurat lagne lagti hai... aap cmnt ese karte hain ki wakai rachna khubsurat ho jati hai... yum hi sath rahie....
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«Reply #16 on: May 22, 2011, 01:18:48 PM »
Quote from: manjum on May 19, 2011, 07:08:00 AM
Na khushi chahie umr-e-muqtasar k lie.
Na hi roshni chahie hai nazar ke lie.

Ye khuda aaj aankhon ko wo nind de,
Ab na jagenge ham bhi sahar ke lie.

Jaan apni gayi unko afsos kya,
Lut gaye ham bhi kis beqadar ke lie.

Ab na mangenge ham aur koi dua,
Kitna tadpenge aur ham asar ke lie.

Ab chale ham tum isse roshni kar lo,
Chand laye hain ham teri rahguzar ke lie.

Manju  "mann"


Bahut Khooooooooob .... Manjum Ji !

BehtreeN Ehsaas ..... Dil se daad ........ !!
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«Reply #17 on: May 23, 2011, 03:40:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya anshuji.....

sath rahiega...
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«Reply #18 on: May 23, 2011, 03:45:33 AM »
boht khoob manju ji
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«Reply #19 on: May 23, 2011, 04:01:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji.....

sath rahie........
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«Reply #20 on: May 23, 2011, 04:11:51 AM »
khud ko dhoor rakhkar humse .
Woh hume kareeb na ane ka ilzam dete hain
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«Reply #21 on: May 23, 2011, 04:40:23 AM »
khub.....
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«Reply #22 on: May 23, 2011, 04:47:39 AM »
thx manju ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 25, 2011, 04:18:04 AM »
Wow heart touching creation Manjum ji.superb,Saahil ji aapne bhi acha saath diya. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: May 25, 2011, 04:48:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya madhuweshji......

sath rahie....
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