Asar to ho......

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Us par meri wafaaon ka koi asar to ho.
Ham gair nahin apne hain usko khabar to ho.

Nazaren jhuken jo apni  koi aisa din na aaye,
Is tarha zindagi kabhi apni basar to ho.

Ham dekhen rausani ye shabe-gham guzar to jaye,
Taqdir main hamari bas ik sahar to ho.

Sah jayen waar sare duniyan jo de rahi hai,
Ai kaash apne paas bhi aisa zigar to ho.

Paon main pade chhale dam bhi nikalane ko hai,
Is tarha hi sahi tamaam ye safar to ho.

Ankhon main khushi chhalke ye lab bhi mushkurayen,
Do pal ke liye haasil aisi umar to ho.

Itni hi hamko chahiye nazdikiyan usse,
Uski gali main mera kabhi rahguzar to ho.

Dekhen jo ik nazar to sab manzar badal sake,
Is tarah purasar kabhi ”mann” ki nazar to ho.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2012, 12:06:22 PM »
Us par meri wafaaon ka koi asar to ho.
Ham gair nahin apne hain usko khabar to ho.

Nazaren jhuken jo apni  koi aisa din na aaye,
Is tarha zindagi kabhi apni basar to ho.

Ham dekhen rausani ye shabe-gham guzar to jaye,
Taqdir main hamari bas ik sahar to ho.

Sah jayen waar sare duniyan jo de rahi hai,
Ai kaash apne paas bhi aisa zigar to ho.

Paon main pade chhale dam bhi nikalane ko hai,
Is tarha hi sahi tamaam ye safar to ho.

Ankhon main khushi chhalke ye lab bhi mushkurayen,
Do pal ke liye haasil aisi umar to ho.

Itni hi hamko chahiye nazdikiyan usse,
Uski gali main mera kabhi rahguzar to ho.

Dekhen jo ik nazar to sab manzar badal sake,
Is tarah purasar kabhi ”mann” ki nazar to ho.

Mann


Beautiful Writing mann Ji.

Aapne Itna Khoobsurat Likha Hai Ke Dil Keh raha Hai Main Bhi Iss Leh Mein Kuch likhoon..

Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2012, 12:07:37 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2012, 01:48:49 PM »
bahut khoob mann ji badhaai aue dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2012, 02:30:11 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Mann ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2012, 03:31:33 PM »
mann ji dad dheron dher aur tahe dil se.
bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2012, 04:00:39 PM »
mann tum sach bhut acha likhte.....ek dam gazab...
bas yu likhte rahiye.....
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2012, 05:37:57 PM »
Us par meri wafaaon ka koi asar to ho.
Ham gair nahin apne hain usko khabar to ho.

Nazaren jhuken jo apni  koi aisa din na aaye,
Is tarha zindagi kabhi apni basar to ho.

Ham dekhen rausani ye shabe-gham guzar to jaye,
Taqdir main hamari bas ik sahar to ho.

Sah jayen waar sare duniyan jo de rahi hai,
Ai kaash apne paas bhi aisa zigar to ho.

Paon main pade chhale dam bhi nikalane ko hai,
Is tarha hi sahi tamaam ye safar to ho.

Ankhon main khushi chhalke ye lab bhi mushkurayen,
Do pal ke liye haasil aisi umar to ho.

Itni hi hamko chahiye nazdikiyan usse,
Uski gali main mera kabhi rahguzar to ho.

Dekhen jo ik nazar to sab manzar badal sake,
Is tarah purasar kabhi ”mann” ki nazar to ho.

Mann

waaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2012, 06:24:37 PM »
bohot khub Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2012, 03:36:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab khwaishji... ji zarur likhiye aap bhi.. ham intzar karenge...
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2012, 03:38:41 AM »
thanks akashji
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2012, 03:40:30 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad janab sainiji
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2012, 07:10:47 AM »
Bahut khoob mann ji
bahut umda likha hai aapne..likhte rahiye..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2012, 07:42:54 AM »
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