Ashaar Mere Yun To Zamaane Ke Liye Hain,.

by Jaanasheen on May 11, 2009, 09:05:33 AM
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ashaar mere yun to zamaane ke liye hain
kuch sher faqat unko sunaane ke liye hain

ab ye bhi nahi theek ki har dard mita dein
kuch dard kaleje se lagaane ke liye hain

aankhon mein jo bhar loge to kaanton se chubhenge
ye khvaab to palkon pe sajaane ke liye hain

dekhuun tere haathon ko to lagata hai tere haath
mandir mein faqat deep jalaane ke liye hain

socho to badi cheez hai tahziib badan ki
varna to badan aag bujhaane ke liye hain

ye ilm ka sauda ye risaale ye kitaabein
ik shakhs ki yaadon ko bhulaane ke liye hain

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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 09:09:22 AM »
Very nIce Sharing Azeem.
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2009, 09:12:27 AM »
Shukriya Sophi,.
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2009, 09:37:41 AM »
Kya khoob ghazal pesh ki hai Azeem
Kafi pahile ye ghazal padhi ya suni thi phir dhyan se utar gai
Aapne badi achchhi rachna yaad dila di
Is ghazal ka har ashaar ek moti hai, beshkimti hai
KUCHH DARD KALEJE SE LAGANE KE LIYE HAIN
Yahi hai ek shayar ka hunar ki lafzon ka jadoo sar chadhkar bole.
Very very nice Azeem.
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2009, 09:45:13 AM »
Nice sharing Azeem
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2009, 09:50:23 AM »
Shukriya Sarvesh Bhaiya, And Talat Didi,.

Thank U,.
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2009, 10:02:25 AM »
Bada khoobsurat kalam Marhoom Jan Nissar Akhtar Saheb ka share kiya hain tumne chote "Khuda unhe jannat ata kare" unhi ka ek aur kalam share kar raha hu....

ham se bhaagaa na karo duur Gazaalo.n kii tarah
hamane chaahaa hai tumhe.n chaahane vaalo.n kii tarah

Khud-ba-Khud nii.nd-sii aa.Nkho.n me.n ghulii jaatii hai
mahakii mahakii hai shab-e-Gam tere baalo.n kii tarah

aur kyaa is se zyaadaa ko_ii narmii baratuu.N
dil ke zaKhmo.n ko chhuaa hai tere gaalo.n kii tarah

aur to mujh ko milaa kyaa merii mehanat kaa silaa
cha.nd sikke hai.n mere haath me.n chhaalo.n kii tarah

zindagii jis ko teraa pyaar milaa vo jaane
ham to naakaam rahe chaahane vaalo.n kii tarah

Jan Nissar Akhtar
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2009, 10:45:36 AM »
Mashallah Ek Aur Achchi Sharing Ki Hai Aapne, Akhtar Ji Ki,.
Allah Kareem Unhe Jannat Bakshe,.
Aameen,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2009, 11:40:28 AM »
Yahi to khoobsurti hain Chote hamare Yoindians ki, ke hum apne khoobsurat kalam share karne ke sath sath Azeem shayro ke kalam bhi post karte hain aur unke kalamo ko zinda rakhte hain.......Khuda Yoindians ka yeh jazba kayem rakhe AAMEEN.

fursat-e-kaar faqat chaar gha.Dii hai yaaro
ye na socho ke abhii umr pa.Dii hai yaaro


apane taariik makaano.n se to baahar jhaa.Nko
zindagii shammaa liye dar pe kha.Dii hai yaaro


unake bin jii ke dikhaa de.nge chalo yuu.N hii sahii
baat itanii sii hai ke zid aan pa.Dii hai yaaro


faasalaa cha.nd qadam kaa hai manaa le.n chal kar
subah aa_ii hai magar duur kha.Dii hai yaaro


kis kii dahaliiz pe le jaake sajaauu.N is ko
biich raste me.n ko_ii laash pa.Dii hai yaaro

jab bhii chaahe.nge zamaane ko badal Daale.nge
sirf kahane ke liye baat ba.Dii hai yaaro


-Jan Nissar Akhtar-
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2009, 11:44:31 AM »
Aameen, Sahi Farmaaya Aapne,.
Allah Sab Ko KHushi Bakshe,.

And Nice Sharing Again Brother, Bohat Zabardast Hai,.
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2009, 12:08:53 PM »
Nice sharing Dear Azeem ....

Nice sharing by u too Ghayel Ji...
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2009, 12:16:10 PM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on May 11, 2009, 12:08:53 PM
Nice sharing Dear Azeem ....

Nice sharing by u too Ghayel Ji...

Shukriya Shweta
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2009, 12:34:41 PM »
Aaj wakai is thread per maza aa gaya.  Jan Nissar Sahib ki itani khubsurat teen ghazalen ek saath mil gain.  Normally to time nahin milta books dekhne ka per jab samne computer per itni great rachnaen readily available hon to samay nikaal hi liya jata hai. 
Very nice Ghayal Ji, very nice Azeem Ji, aap logo ne tabiet khush kar di.
Ghayal Ji "Gazaalon" word ka meaning explain kar den to meri jankari me izafa ho jayega.
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2009, 10:16:46 PM »
very nice sharing azeem nd sajid sahab dil khush ho gaya............


aakho.n mein bas ke dil mai sama kar chale gaye
khaabeeda zindagi thi jaga kar chale gaye

chehre tak aastin wo laakar chale gaye
kyaa raaz tha ke jis ko chupa kar chale gaye

rag rag mai is tarhan wo sama kar chale gaye
jaise mujh hi ko mujh se churaakar chale gaye

aaye the dil ki piyaas bhujhaane ke waaste
ik aag sii wo aur laga kar chale gaye

lab thar-thara ke reh gaye lakin wo ey jigar
jaate huway nigaah mila kar chale gaye

   (poetry by jigar muradabaadi)
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2009, 10:19:42 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 11, 2009, 09:05:33 AM

ashaar mere yun to zamaane ke liye hain
kuch sher faqat unko sunaane ke liye hain

ab ye bhi nahi theek ki har dard mita dein
kuch dard kaleje se lagaane ke liye hain

aankhon mein jo bhar loge to kaanton se chubhenge
ye khvaab to palkon pe sajaane ke liye hain

dekhuun tere haathon ko to lagata hai tere haath
mandir mein faqat deep jalaane ke liye hain

socho to badi cheez hai tahziib badan ki
varna to badan aag bujhaane ke liye hain

ye ilm ka sauda ye risaale ye kitaabein
ik shakhs ki yaadon ko bhulaane ke liye hain

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THANKS FOR SHARING!! Gulam Ali ji ki awaz main yah Gazal suno.. wow kaya gaya hai unhonene!!!
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