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Meena

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Kuch soch rahi thi jo yeh poem ban gayi....umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayegi! :D

Jab kaanton se nahin tune phoolon se chote khayi hai,
To dard dene wale angan me aise phool khilati kyu ho?

Kitne toote hue khwabon ke tukde bikre hai tere daman me,
Pure na ho aise dil ko sapne dikhati kyu ho?

Janti to ho ke taqdeer me likhi nahin koi kushi tere,
Soch kar is baat ko “Meena” bar bar askh bahati kyu ho?

Badal sakhta agar to Khuda kab ka badal deta kismat teri,
Pareshan na ho Khuda bhi tujhse, usse duayen mang kar satati kyu ho?


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: - Ashk Bahati Kyu Ho -

«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2005, 05:14:31 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wah wah meena...........wonderfullllllllll very touching words.........superbsssssssss


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2005, 05:15:08 PM »

Wow ...
What a fantastic one Meena ...
Its a coolest one of this monsoon ...
Keep it up ...


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nidhi_yadein

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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2005, 05:18:06 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wah meena sis :D aise hi accha accha sochti raha karo,aur mujhe khush rakha karo,excellent work dear.


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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2005, 05:18:07 PM »

Raat mein chand ki chandni zaroori hai,
Taaro ka chamakna zaroorat nahi majboori hai,
Savera hote hi sholo mein jal uthta hai suraj,
Maaloom nahi subah aur raat ke bich kyu ye doori hai ...


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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2005, 05:22:14 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Raat mein chand ki chandni zaroori hai,
Taaro ka chamakna zaroorat nahi majboori hai,
Savera hote hi sholo mein jal uthta hai suraj,
Maaloom nahi subah aur raat ke bich kyu ye doori hai ...

Wah JHl,kya baat keh di,excellent.

"Hogi chand aur suraj me bhi mohabbat kabhi,
tabhi is kadar doori hai inke beech,
majboori rahi hogi kabhi inki bhi kuch,
hoti hai jaise pyaar karne waalon k beech."


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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2005, 05:26:00 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Raat mein chand ki chandni zaroori hai,
Taaro ka chamakna zaroorat nahi majboori hai,
Savera hote hi sholo mein jal uthta hai suraj,
Maaloom nahi subah aur raat ke bich kyu ye doori hai ...

wow nidhi..............jhl..................nidhi tumhare words dil ko choo jaate hain...........wonderfull dost...........


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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2005, 05:29:39 PM »

Thanks a lot Niddhi and Waheed for appreciating my post ...
And you are too good Dear ...
Good job and keep it up ...


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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2005, 05:34:01 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks a lot Niddhi and Waheed for appreciating my post ...
And you are too good Dear ...
Good job and keep it up ...

Thank u waheed Usual Smile

and JHL.


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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 05:43:01 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks a lot Niddhi and Waheed for appreciating my post ...
And you are too good Dear ...
Good job and keep it up ...

Thank you waheed Usual Smile

and JHL.

ab main aap logon ka kaise shukriya ada karoon.............aap logon ka humesha welcome rahega................ tongue3

main kya likhoon ......mere words khatam ho gaye hain.............:oops:


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Meena

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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2005, 05:53:37 PM »

thank u nidhi, waheed aur JHL, sab ne bohot acha likha!!!!!!!!!!thanx for liking my posts!

:D


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2005, 05:56:31 PM »

Are Waheed bhai aap to hum bade hai shayar hai ...
Aap hi chup ho jaayenge to hum kya bole ...


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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2005, 06:20:01 AM »

Arre wah Meena, JHL and Nidhi........GR8 work u all.......Sab na ek sa baad kar ek likha .........very NICE!!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2005, 10:53:37 AM »

Thanks a lot Isha for appreciation ...

Mohabbat ke talabgar ko ek khauf sa mehsus hua, Wafaao ki andhiyon mein bewafaai ka jhoka sa mehsus hua,
Bewafa banana chahte the hum jise,
Wo hume bewafaa banta hua mehsus hua...


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Meena

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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2005, 11:00:35 AM »

thank u ishu sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gud one JHL ji!! :D


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