Ashk...

by Aryaan on February 27, 2005, 05:58:34 AM

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Pooja

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«Reply #60 on: September 13, 2005, 08:37:20 PM »

wowoowow bahoot khoob Aryan ji!!!

Toot kar na chaho kisi ko
Ek din khud ka hi dil tool jayega
Basaogy jise tum apne dil mai
Wo hi dil torr jayega!!!!


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Aryaan

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Ashk...

«Reply #61 on: September 14, 2005, 12:21:58 AM »

Bohat shukriya Nidhi & Pooja....

Nice One Pooja...


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Just_Hate_Love

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Ashk...

«Reply #62 on: October 08, 2005, 02:56:42 PM »

Too cool Nidhi and Aryan ...
Keep it up both ...

Unke chehre ko cheher hata sakte nahi,
Dil ki betabi ki surat dikha sakte nahi,
Dilchasphai mohabbat ki majboori,
Saamne hai manzil par kadam badha sakte nahi ...


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Aryaan

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Ashk...

«Reply #63 on: October 09, 2005, 10:34:15 PM »

Thanx JHL.& Nice One...


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Just_Hate_Love

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Ashk...

«Reply #64 on: October 12, 2005, 11:38:22 AM »

You are welcome buddy and thanks too ...


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Aryaan

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Ashk...

«Reply #65 on: November 09, 2005, 04:55:03 AM »

Main Ik Aansoo Hi Sahi, Hoon Bohat Anmol Magar
Yun Na Palkon Se Gira Kar Mujhe Mitti Mein Mila


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anvesh

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solid boss

«Reply #66 on: November 09, 2005, 06:48:55 PM »

you have written a nice one. Both the elements of a good poetry feelings and alliteration are present in your one.
Nice job Man


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Aryaan

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Ashk...

«Reply #67 on: November 10, 2005, 08:21:07 PM »

Thanx a lot Anvesh...


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Princess21

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Ashk...

«Reply #68 on: November 11, 2005, 08:50:18 AM »

Aryaannnnnnnnnn BUhat Acha likhaaaaa app ne!!


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waheed_rose2004

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Ashk...

«Reply #69 on: November 11, 2005, 04:52:28 PM »

excellent Pooja.....Aryan..........JHL......

Yeh bahot hai uski aankhen aaj num hue hain
nahi roya magar uske dil mein dard to ubhar aaye hain.....


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Aryaan

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Ashk...

«Reply #70 on: November 12, 2005, 06:29:22 AM »

Bohat shukriya Princess & Waheed...

Nice One Waheed...


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Princess21

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Ashk...

«Reply #71 on: November 12, 2005, 06:56:20 AM »

UR welcome Aryaan!!


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Kittu

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salam to all app sab kay liye kuch arz kia hay

«Reply #72 on: November 14, 2005, 07:38:55 PM »

Ansuoon Ankh Ki Dehleez Pay Aya Na Karo,
Ghar Kay Halaat Zamanay Ko Bataya Na Karo,
Log Muthi Main Namak Lay Kay Phira Kartay Hain,
Zakhm Tum Apnay Kisi Ko Bhi Dikhaya Na Karo.


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Princess21

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Ashk...

«Reply #73 on: November 15, 2005, 05:38:07 AM »

Wow kittu kya baat hai,..NICe..ONe...Welcome TO YoIndia!!


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Kittu

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thanx princess

«Reply #74 on: November 15, 2005, 03:24:21 PM »

Kuch Kuch Udaas,
Zindagi Say Mayoos,
Gham Ki Rahoon Main,
Dukh Ki Chahoon Main,
Awara Badal Ki Terhan,
Kisi Pagal Ki Terhan,
Main Dhondh Raha Hoon,
Is Dunya Main Wafa.