Ashkon se girkar boondein....

by faqeer_daljeet on June 17, 2016, 03:03:02 PM
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Ashkon se girkar boondein chehre par jam gayee,
jeene ki kashmakash mein zindagi hi tham gayee.

Bahut talasha sukoon magar kuchh haasil na hua,
is kawish-e-sukoon  mein gham se zindagi ram gayee.

Ek zarra hoon main aftaab ki khawish kaise karun,
haqeeqat ko pehchanta hoon main aankh isliye hi nam gayee.

Phir bhi thokar na mujhe lagaiye aakhir insaan hoon main,
haath thaam le 'faqeer' ka ye zindagi ab kam gayee.

                                     Daljeet'faqeer'
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2016, 06:00:39 PM »
achcha likha hai, khyal achche hain....last line me -..zindagi ab kam gayee- bas ye samjh nai aaya hame, pls bataiye
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2016, 08:33:33 PM »
Quote from: faqeer_daljeet on June 17, 2016, 03:03:02 PM
Ashkon se girkar boondein chehre par jam gayee,
jeene ki kashmakash mein zindagi hi tham gayee.

Bahut talasha sukoon magar kuchh haasil na hua,
is kawish-e-sukoon  mein gham se zindagi ram gayee.

Ek zarra hoon main aftaab ki khawish kaise karun,
haqeeqat ko pehchanta hoon main aankh isliye hi nam gayee.

Phir bhi thokar na mujhe lagaiye aakhir insaan hoon main,
haath thaam le 'faqeer' ka ye zindagi ab kam gayee.
haath thaam le 'faqeer' ka ye zindagi to tujh mein hee ram gayee.

                                     Daljeet'faqeer'
bahut bahut khoob waah.
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2016, 08:36:13 AM »
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