Ashq Bahaya Na Gaya

by deepika_divya on August 15, 2010, 04:03:45 PM
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Habba Bar Affit Dikha Kar Mera Habib mujhe
Woh Mere Abe Did ko Pal Mein Mita tha Gaya

Chum Kar Mere Deed-e-Tar ko Woh Deewana Mera
Mujhe Chupke se Apne Alam-e-Gaib Le aa Gaya

Ki Usne Puri Meri Zindgai ki har Khwaishein
Meri siyaah-e-zindgai ko Furogh se saja gaya

Usko Mein Apna Aasna Kahun ya Nau-Bahaar-e-Naaz
Jo Meri Har Tapad ko Apne Mohabbat se mita gaya

Yea tho ak mod tha ... jante ho fir kya hua... Tho suno...

Habib-e-Aamad ne mujhe Ak taraf Khushiyan tho di
Par saath hi Zindgai ko mere Zakhm e Kari se saja gaya

Shikwa hone lagi hai Ab Qaza se Hame Yuhn Yaara
Kyun? Kyun Woh Kazzab Ban Meri Hasti hi Mita gaya

Socha Kasoor Mera hi tha ,Jo ki Hamne Mohabbat ki unse
Jisse Ak Mod par bhi Urz-e-Wafa Bhi jataya na Gaya

Asar Aisa hai ZIndgai ke Sar-e-Guzar Mein "Divya"
Ke Beite hai Khudki Khabar pe, Par Ashq Bahaya Na Gaya !!

~~Divya~~


Maaf Kijiyega...
Main Urdu ke alfaazo ka Matlab Likha Bhul gai...

Habba bar-         Thoda Bahoot
Affit -            Mohabbat
Habib -            Lover
Abe did -          Ashq
dad e tar -        Wet eyes
Alam-e-gaib-       Anjaan duniya
Siyaah-            Black/dark
furogh-            Roshni
nau-bahaar-e-Naaz -Lover
Aamad-             Khaas /aziz
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 04:20:32 PM »
Very good bahut achha  kalaam hai aapka Divya-di......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

par mujhe itna samajh nahi aaya......meri urdu bhahut kamjoor hai......

Thoda kam samajh aaya par Ashq bahaya na gaya
Baar-baar koshish ki humne mujh se raha na gaya


Quote from: Sophi on August 15, 2010, 04:03:45 PM
Habba Bar Affit Dikha Kar Mera Habib mujhe
Woh Mere Abe Did ko Pal Mein Mita tha Gaya

Chum Kar Mere Deed-e-Tar ko Woh Deewana Mera
Mujhe Chupke se Apne Alam-e-Gaib Le aa Gaya

Ki Usne Puri Meri Zindgai ki har Khwaishein
Meri siyaah-e-zindgai ko Furogh se saja gaya

Usko Mein Apna Aasna Kahun ya Nau-Bahaar-e-Naaz
Jo Meri Har Tapad ko Apne Mohabbat se mita gaya

Yea tho ak mod tha ... jante ho fir kya hua... Tho suno...

Habib-e-Aamad ne mujhe Ak taraf Khushiyan tho di
Par saath hi Zindgai ko meri Kari se saja gaya

Shikwa hone lagi hai Ab Qaza se Hame Yuhn Yaara
Kyun? Kyun Woh Kazzab Ban Meri Hasti hi Mita gaya

Socha Kasoor Mera hi tha ,Jo ki Hamne Mohabbat unse
Jisse Ak Mod par bhi Urz-e-Wafa Bhi jataya na Gaya

Asar Aisa hai ZIndgai ke Sar-e-Guzar Mein "Divya"
Ke Beite hai Khudki Khabar pe, Par Ashq Bahaya Na Gaya !!

~~Divya~~
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 04:55:30 PM »
Kya Kahun Divya Aapki Is Rachna ke Bare Me... In Taaliyon ke Siwa mere paas Kuch Bhi nahi..

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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 07:39:38 PM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sophi...Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat,Har Lafz Jaise Kuch Kehta Hua...Bahut ache Sophi.

Padhkar raha na gaya,isliye abhi Mobile se reply de raha hoon,kuch likhne yahan zaroor aaunga.
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 07:54:22 PM »
Masha Allah Kafi achche khyaaloN ko aapne purkashish lafzon meiN dhala hai...... Daad janab e aala.....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez.....
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 07:59:44 PM »
same mere sath problm aaijo koyal k sath aai... divya ji....3-4 bar padhne k baad kuch thodi thodi samjhi...

sabne kaha hai achchi hai aur bht tareef kihai samjhne ki koshish ki par words samajh nahin aaye
haan theme jarur samjhi...aur is theme par kal jarur kuch likhna chahungi...
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 05:08:31 AM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 15, 2010, 04:20:32 PM
Very good bahut achha  kalaam hai aapka Divya-di......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

par mujhe itna samajh nahi aaya......meri urdu bhahut kamjoor hai......

Thoda kam samajh aaya par Ashq bahaya na gaya
Baar-baar koshish ki humne mujh se raha na gaya




Thank you so so much... Ya I forgot to mention the meanings here,, Which I have updated now..

But thanks for liking it.
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 05:12:16 AM »
Quote from: Mann on August 15, 2010, 04:55:30 PM
Kya Kahun Divya Aapki Is Rachna ke Bare Me... In Taaliyon ke Siwa mere paas Kuch Bhi nahi..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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Hahahaha...

Thank you so much VIcky... thanks for liking my work.. !
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 05:13:45 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 15, 2010, 07:39:38 PM
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sophi...Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat,Har Lafz Jaise Kuch Kehta Hua...Bahut ache Sophi.

Padhkar raha na gaya,isliye abhi Mobile se reply de raha hoon,kuch likhne yahan zaroor aaunga.

Thank you so so much Khwaish ji... Its a such a nice Compliment for me...thanks
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 06:18:04 AM »
hmm keh nahi pauga jyada so shabdo ko shabdo ka jawab :

mere hothon par hansi sajaye rakhna e khuda
kya karun udaasi par meri aansuu unke behte hain~
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 10:28:08 AM »
Thanks a lot Divya-di.... icon_flower

Quote from: Sophi on August 17, 2010, 05:08:31 AM

Thank you so so much... Ya I forgot to mention the meanings here,, Which I have updated now..

But thanks for liking it.
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2010, 05:32:54 PM »
Aapki tehreer ke sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage mujhe .... saaf bayaani asardaar rahi...tahe dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi likhti rahen...aage bhi...

very nice creation...divya Ji !

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2010, 10:51:19 AM »
Vidhi ka ye krrur prahaar mujhse sakhee saha na gayaa
Jam gaye ashru palko mai,mujhse Ashq bahaaya na gaya
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2011, 05:59:34 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 15, 2010, 07:54:22 PM
Masha Allah Kafi achche khyaaloN ko aapne purkashish lafzon meiN dhala hai...... Daad janab e aala.....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez.....

Thankyou sooooooooooo much Parwaaz ji
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2011, 06:00:41 PM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 17, 2010, 06:18:04 AM
hmm keh nahi pauga jyada so shabdo ko shabdo ka jawab :

mere hothon par hansi sajaye rakhna e khuda
kya karun udaasi par meri aansuu unke behte hain~



Thank you so much Abhi.. and very nice quote from ur end Usual Smile
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