...~~Ashq~~...

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«Reply #15 on: June 14, 2005, 09:31:44 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
wah wah wah sab na kya great likha hai.....dil khush bhi hua aur udaas bhi.....NICE


Thanks Isha !!
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«Reply #16 on: June 14, 2005, 09:32:30 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya khoob likha hai aap sab ne .........very nice all of you .....

dil leke vo use tudh dete hai
rista vo humse yun thod dete hai
lete hai saari khusian humse
aur badle main dukhon ka sehlab dete hai
haan ye bewafa harjai aashiqh aise hote hai


bahoot khoob sandhaya ji .....

main kar lunga do baatein usse,shayad kat jaaye zindagi,
koi kar do ik chiraag roshan meri parchhaai ke liye.
hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.
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«Reply #17 on: June 14, 2005, 11:16:22 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thanx......fer bazi maar gaye, lagta hai hum haar gaye...

khuda kare tuzhe tera pyaar mil jaye
na tere marne ki naubat aye
na hi saza mehbooba ko mile..


asii kittey bazi maar gaye .. Nikki ji tussi fer chaa gaye !!

pyaar to unko milta hai jo hotey hai kismat wakey
mujhey pyaar mil sakey asii kismat nhi meri !!
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«Reply #18 on: June 14, 2005, 05:03:54 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut ache .......

kissi ke dard ki tareef karna bura lagta hai
kissi ko dard dena gunaah ke samaan hai

kasoor hamara yeh hai ke hum dil toota hua liya firte hain
khud ke dil mein khanjar chubhe hain
aur hum auron ke liye dawa liye firte hain


nikki that was tooo good...

kaash meri dua tere dawa banke kaam aaye
tu jab bhi mujhe yaad karein mujhe apni bahon mein paaye
tere tute dil pe hum marham lagayenge
koshish karenge zindagi mein ek baar tere kisi kaam aaye...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #19 on: June 14, 2005, 05:15:37 PM »
Good job everyone and you too Amrita ...
Keep writing more ...
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #20 on: June 14, 2005, 05:40:05 PM »
Rishto ki aag tu khud bujata gaya...bichadne ke geet tu gungunata gaya...

gila nahi ke ban gaye aaj ajnabi tum...
jab chod kar purane dost,naye rishte tu banata gaya...!{copied one}
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #21 on: June 15, 2005, 10:27:26 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
ik aur khoshih jazbatooN ko bayaaN karney ki !!




Zindagi mein jaane kya kya muqaam aaye
Mere hi silaah mere qatl ke kaam aaye

Has ke seh gaye hum zmaane ki talkhiyaaN
Unki zulfoN mein jab kar ke qayaaM aaye

PalkoN ke katghare meiN sazaa pane ko
Ashq aankhoN meiN subah shaam aaye

Dil ka haal aur beyhaal hota gaya
Jab duyaaoN meiN lipte unke paigaam aaye

‘HumTum’ dillagi aisa junoon ban gayee
har ik shai mein vo banke benaam aaye


aap ki rai ka muntzir

HumTum


wah wah.......... very nice..............humtum
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«Reply #22 on: June 15, 2005, 10:30:12 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya khoob likha hai aap sab ne .........very nice all of you .....

dil leke vo use tudh dete hai
rista vo humse yun thod dete hai
lete hai saari khusian humse
aur badle main dukhon ka sehlab dete hai
haan ye bewafa harjai aashiqh aise hote hai


bahoot khoob sandhaya ji .....

main kar lunga do baatein usse,shayad kat jaaye zindagi,
koi kar do ik chiraag roshan meri parchhaai ke liye.
hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.


wahhhhhhhhh.................. nice one.............. humtum
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«Reply #23 on: June 15, 2005, 10:48:17 AM »
Quote from: "pyarikudi1983"
Rishto ki aag tu khud bujata gaya...bichadne ke geet tu gungunata gaya...

gila nahi ke ban gaye aaj ajnabi tum...
jab chod kar purane dost,naye rishte tu banata gaya...!{copied one}


mein to aaj bhi kda hoon teri rahoon mein
waffa ka roshn diya hathooN mein liye huye
tu hi chod gyi hai sath mera rah-e-ishq mein
honthooN pe aaj bhi hai hum tera naam liye huye !!
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«Reply #24 on: June 15, 2005, 10:56:28 AM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"
Quote from: "HumTum"
ik aur khoshih jazbatooN ko bayaaN karney ki !!




Zindagi mein jaane kya kya muqaam aaye
Mere hi silaah mere qatl ke kaam aaye

Has ke seh gaye hum zmaane ki talkhiyaaN
Unki zulfoN mein jab kar ke qayaaM aaye

PalkoN ke katghare meiN sazaa pane ko
Ashq aankhoN meiN subah shaam aaye

Dil ka haal aur beyhaal hota gaya
Jab duyaaoN meiN lipte unke paigaam aaye

‘HumTum’ dillagi aisa junoon ban gayee
har ik shai mein vo banke benaam aaye


aap ki rai ka muntzir

HumTum


wah wah.......... very nice..............humtum


Thanks Khushii !!
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«Reply #25 on: June 15, 2005, 10:57:02 AM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya khoob likha hai aap sab ne .........very nice all of you .....

dil leke vo use tudh dete hai
rista vo humse yun thod dete hai
lete hai saari khusian humse
aur badle main dukhon ka sehlab dete hai
haan ye bewafa harjai aashiqh aise hote hai


bahoot khoob sandhaya ji .....

main kar lunga do baatein usse,shayad kat jaaye zindagi,
koi kar do ik chiraag roshan meri parchhaai ke liye.
hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.


wahhhhhhhhh.................. nice one.............. humtum


Thanks again !!! lekin aap bhi to kluch likho !!
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«Reply #26 on: June 15, 2005, 10:57:37 AM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut ache .......

kissi ke dard ki tareef karna bura lagta hai
kissi ko dard dena gunaah ke samaan hai

kasoor hamara yeh hai ke hum dil toota hua liya firte hain
khud ke dil mein khanjar chubhe hain
aur hum auron ke liye dawa liye firte hain


nikki that was tooo good...

kaash meri dua tere dawa banke kaam aaye
tu jab bhi mujhe yaad karein mujhe apni bahon mein paaye
tere tute dil pe hum marham lagayenge
koshish karenge zindagi mein ek baar tere kisi kaam aaye...



thanx a lot Amrita, Nidhi sis, sandhya, JHL, n humtm

surebbbbbbbb...Amrita n nice one nidhi dear...baki sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai.............keep the good work comming....
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«Reply #27 on: June 15, 2005, 05:30:04 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut ache .......

kissi ke dard ki tareef karna bura lagta hai
kissi ko dard dena gunaah ke samaan hai

kasoor hamara yeh hai ke hum dil toota hua liya firte hain
khud ke dil mein khanjar chubhe hain
aur hum auron ke liye dawa liye firte hain


nikki that was tooo good...

kaash meri dua tere dawa banke kaam aaye
tu jab bhi mujhe yaad karein mujhe apni bahon mein paaye
tere tute dil pe hum marham lagayenge
koshish karenge zindagi mein ek baar tere kisi kaam aaye...



thanx a lot Amrita, Nidhi sis, sandhya, JHL, n humtm

surebbbbbbbb...Amrita n nice one nidhi dear...baki sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai.............keep the good work comming....
Thank u nikki sis Usual Smile and u r always welcome.

"Dard dete waqt ye duniya darti hai kya,
  sehne waalon se poochiye,guzarti hai kya."
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«Reply #28 on: June 15, 2005, 05:49:49 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "nikki"
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut ache .......

kissi ke dard ki tareef karna bura lagta hai
kissi ko dard dena gunaah ke samaan hai

kasoor hamara yeh hai ke hum dil toota hua liya firte hain
khud ke dil mein khanjar chubhe hain
aur hum auron ke liye dawa liye firte hain


nikki that was tooo good...

kaash meri dua tere dawa banke kaam aaye
tu jab bhi mujhe yaad karein mujhe apni bahon mein paaye
tere tute dil pe hum marham lagayenge
koshish karenge zindagi mein ek baar tere kisi kaam aaye...



thanx a lot Amrita, Nidhi sis, sandhya, JHL, n humtm

surebbbbbbbb...Amrita n nice one nidhi dear...baki sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai.............keep the good work comming....
Thank you nikki sis Usual Smile and you r always welcome.

"Dard dete waqt ye duniya darti hai kya,
  sehne waalon se poochiye,guzarti hai kya."


wow  bahot  khoob  nidhi..........bahot  din  baad kuch  tumhara  padhne  ko  mila............excellent  work........amrita...nikki......hum tum.......

is  se  pehle  koi  humein  naya  jakham  de  jaaye
chalo hum  duniya  ko  mohabbat  sikhayen...............
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«Reply #29 on: June 15, 2005, 06:06:17 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "nikki"
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut ache .......

kissi ke dard ki tareef karna bura lagta hai
kissi ko dard dena gunaah ke samaan hai

kasoor hamara yeh hai ke hum dil toota hua liya firte hain
khud ke dil mein khanjar chubhe hain
aur hum auron ke liye dawa liye firte hain


nikki that was tooo good...

kaash meri dua tere dawa banke kaam aaye
tu jab bhi mujhe yaad karein mujhe apni bahon mein paaye
tere tute dil pe hum marham lagayenge
koshish karenge zindagi mein ek baar tere kisi kaam aaye...



thanx a lot Amrita, Nidhi sis, sandhya, JHL, n humtm

surebbbbbbbb...Amrita n nice one nidhi dear...baki sabne bhi bahut hi acha likha hai.............keep the good work comming....
Thank you nikki sis Usual Smile and you r always welcome.

"Dard dete waqt ye duniya darti hai kya,
  sehne waalon se poochiye,guzarti hai kya."


wow  bahot  khoob  nidhi..........bahot  din  baad kuch  tumhara  padhne  ko  mila............excellent  work........amrita...nikki......hum tum.......

is  se  pehle  koi  humein  naya  jakham  de  jaaye
chalo hum  duniya  ko  mohabbat  sikhayen...............
thanx waheed and same here,bohat din baad tumhara likha kuch padhne ko mila. Usual Smile

"Ye duniya to mohabbat ko bhi gunaah maanti hai,
  jo karte hain gunaah,unhe panaah deti hai."
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