Ashqo Ka Mosam -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

harashmahajan

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«Reply #15 on: March 25, 2008, 07:38:41 AM »

Waah pooja ji...sabse pehle toh adaab baja lata hooN...hameiN aapki pesh ki hui baat bahoot pasand aayee....aise hee achchhe-achchhe lafzoN se iss bazm kee raunaq barhaate rahiye...aap hi batao ab aapse jiyada khoobsoorat our mithhas ki baat kon ker sakta hai mohtarma ji....aapke lafzoN maiN kai baar junoon ki hud tak kashish aa jati hai....dil ki baat usi tarah keh dena har kisi ke bas ki baat nahiN pooja ji...our doosrri baat aapka lehza sadabahaar hai..hum toh musfiraat ki tarha haiN..kabhi yahaaN haiN toh kabhi nahiN....aap toh yahaaN mukammal taree^ke se haiN....hamarii tehreer pasand kerne ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriyaa^h.....Harash

Quote from: Pooja on March 19, 2008, 03:04:11 PM

Thanks Talat!! wah kaya baat hai Harsh ji!! bahoot khoob.. bas yahi ek baat na sikh sake hum... mithas ke libas mai apni baat kahna.. jo dil mai ho pathar sa munh per kah deti hu sad5

atte ho bahoot yaad, zisam kaanp jaata hai
ek tak dekhu teri tasveer, ansoo tapak jaata hai
milte ho jab mujhse, ek nafrat ka saya muchal jaata hai
sun kar wahi teri kathor baatein, Ashqo ka mosam aa jaata hai
atte ho bahoot yaad.......


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #16 on: April 03, 2008, 03:38:00 PM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 25, 2008, 07:38:41 AM

Quote from: Pooja on March 19, 2008, 03:04:11 PM

Thanks Talat!! wah kaya baat hai Harsh ji!! bahoot khoob.. bas yahi ek baat na sikh sake hum... mithas ke libas mai apni baat kahna.. jo dil mai ho pathar sa munh per kah deti hu sad5

bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! acha laga yah jaan kar meri kavitao mai apko zanoon najar ayya!! jayadatar dard mai kavitaye ek janoon mai hi likhati hu!! dil ko ek sakoon sa mila hai apki is baat se!!bahoot bahoot shukaria apka!!

Dard, dard nahi jab tak janoon ko na chu le
Ansoo, ansoo nahi, jab tak zakhamo ko na si le
Shabd kitne bhi ho likhe kisi bhi kavita main
Shabd, shabd nahi, jab tak dilo ko na chu le!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #17 on: May 29, 2008, 07:14:23 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on March 25, 2008, 07:14:52 AM

Sabne Bohat Achha Likha Hai Lage Raho.

Shukaria Shihab ji!! Apki taraf se bhi do lines aa jaati to acha lagta!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #18 on: June 03, 2008, 02:49:16 PM »

bahoot khoob char line mai itna kuch kah gaye aor kahte hai ki app kayaa likhein... kai baar apko DramaBoy kahne ko dil karta hai tongue3

Ashaqon ka mosam hai aor ashaq ho gaye goom
sukhi hai nayano ki vaadi, her dukh goom soom
soch bhi sochein ab to, kaya soch rahe the barso se
sanson kuch to sath nibhao, ho jao ab tum bhi goom!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #19 on: July 22, 2008, 01:58:27 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on June 07, 2008, 02:09:37 PM

Ashqon Ka BeRang Mausam Aa Gaya Hai
Aur Dil Pe Udasi Ke Badal Chhaye Hai.
Na Jaane Ye Kis Ki Yaadon Ki Aahat Hai.!
Jise Sun Aankhon Se Aansoo Nikal Aaye Hai.

bahoot khoob Shihab!!!

hoga koi apna, jo sathn chorr gaya
bin soche samjhe, dil ke taar torr gaya
apni baharo ke sawarth main dekhon
her mosam main ashqo ki barsaat chorr gaya


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Aryaan

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #20 on: July 25, 2008, 10:34:11 AM »

Good Ones Pooja & Majid...


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Shikha12

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #21 on: July 25, 2008, 10:39:58 AM »

Very Nice work... Pooja di Applause

Good Additions... Harsh ji, Khwaish ji, Nira ji and Shihab ji.. Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #22 on: July 25, 2008, 02:51:34 PM »

Shukaria Shihab, Aryaan ji and Mahiya!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ashqo Ka Mosam

«Reply #23 on: September 09, 2009, 05:55:14 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on July 25, 2008, 07:25:52 AM

wow pooja ji kya baat hai
bohat deeno baad?
good job lagey raho...

Judaa Hua Hai Koi Par Door Nahi Hua Hai.
Toot Gaya Dil Magar Choor Nahi Hua Hai.
Har Chot Ne Majboot Kiya Hoslon Ko Mere
Ro Rahi Hai Aankhe Par Aansu Nahi Bahe Hai.

na ansoo na gussa na bebasi hai
man mai phir kaise yah halchal mauchi hai
dil chahe bas ho jaau ajj goongi aor behari
na jaane kaise yah udaasi, ajj mere man mai dabi hai.....


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